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What Do U Choose by shayne What Do You Choose 5/5/07
Because i dont believe in your reality I know you will want to belittle me And its pointless me trying to explain After sunshine we always need rain My motivation is to defend myself not attack you In this world it makes me one of the few So call me detached and conceited But with belief i 'll never be defeated I can stand tall and feeling proud Knowing with courage i speak aloud I 'll talk of poetry and of love Taking time to contemplate what's above But dont confuse this with being weak I'm a man undeterred in what i seek Dare you open your mind and heart To realise we are all at the start These words i put into the world inspired by you Always remembering we exist between the two The inverse of what we think of what we feel That with our choices its fate we seal | |
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I really have to say this.....you're good with the poetry...I had
a youtube I was going to post earlier, but had to leave in a hurry and now I can't find it....it kind of alluded to the set-up you have with this girlfriend of yours. It's tough, but it will get better I promise you.... | |
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obsessed said: I really have to say this.....you're good with the poetry...I had
a youtube I was going to post earlier, but had to leave in a hurry and now I can't find it....it kind of alluded to the set-up you have with this girlfriend of yours. It's tough, but it will get better I promise you.... Thankyou for your compliment...i have been writing for six months so i hope to develope... yesterday i was told that one of my poems is going to be used in a book , so i'm well chuffed , its my first published work... | |
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this is perplexingly interesting....
i never looked at the word "inspired" from this sort of angle.... funny..... mmmm | |
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shayne07 said: Thankyou for your compliment...i have been writing for six months so i hope to develope... yesterday i was told that one of my poems is going to be used in a book , so i'm well chuffed , its my first published work... Kudos to you..... Can you share which poem, or is that taboo now that it's published? | |
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'Taking Flight' is the title of the poem , the book it will appear in will be named 'Tranquil Moments'...Have a good 1 | |
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