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Thread started 05/05/07 9:38am

shayne07

'Sorry' by shayne

Sorry 5/5/07

It was my mistake the things i said
My pain distorting what was in my head
Now your not here i need to apologise
Sometimes i'm haunted by your cries

I thought myself above what you had been
Forgetting i danced with deep obscene
Man how good you was to me
Sitting here now i clearly see

We're all human we all live the inverse
Not one of us is beyond this curse
I hope you forgive me as i do
Here with fondness i remember you

If its any consolation i lived regret
About your well being everyday i fret
It ate me thinking how i treated you
Living ashamed deeply broke in two

Now i think of the bad yet also of the good
To remain healthy we all should
Maybe you 'll get to read this one day
Agreeing we chose the wrong game to play
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Reply #1 posted 05/06/07 7:02am

groovyiau

"we all should"

this goes into my book of negatives and nowheres

carry on.....
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Reply #2 posted 05/07/07 12:09pm

shayne07

I'm not really sure what U meant by your comment ... have a good 1
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Reply #3 posted 05/07/07 6:48pm

groovyiau

sorry bout that....

i just picked up on your "we all should" line
I have authority issues... not your problem... lol

wondering if you can you tell the difference between

"we all should"
and
"can we"

to me... both are after something that isnt there.....

neither line is my fav'

dodidodidoo..... lol
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Reply #4 posted 05/08/07 3:45pm

shayne07

interpretation is cool , we all give our own meaning...
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Reply #5 posted 05/08/07 4:38pm

groovyiau

shayne07 said:

interpretation is cool , we all give our own meaning...


now your being funny..... lol

"we all should" <<< there aint to many ways of "interpretation"
or adding meaning for this line...

but if you got insight into a new form of english.... fire away....
i'd like to see it...




music
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Reply #6 posted 05/09/07 11:55am

shayne07

Perhaps i'm refering 2 all the different facets of myself as ''we''
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Reply #7 posted 05/09/07 6:37pm

groovyiau

shayne07 said:

Perhaps i'm refering 2 all the different facets of myself as ''we''


it is possible... perhaps....

lol
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Reply #8 posted 05/10/07 1:15pm

shayne07

Or perhaps i just aint got a clue!! lol
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