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Thread started 03/29/07 10:56pm

shayne07

I wrote this yesterday...

Unsure 29/3/07

I'm afraid 2 close my eyes
Cause all i see is that i despise
A Prozac nation, a Lithium generation
Is this what was meant by Creation

There's so much 2 go around
But so many lost wanting 2 be found
Others bound by their greed
Unaware of what they truly need

I dont know where i fit in
Now i know there is no Him
And I aint got no skills
And all i want 2 do is chase thrills

I'm stuck with time passing by
And its little comfort that now i know how 2 cry
Daily frustration emanates from my core
In everything i do i'm unsure

So i've tried God and i've tried drugs
And i've spent time with the so called thugs
But nothing has got me ahead
And i'm sick and tired of living dead
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Reply #1 posted 03/29/07 11:06pm

groovyiau

i love the way you verse.....


neko
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Reply #2 posted 03/29/07 11:36pm

shayne07

thank U ...

groovyiau said:

i love the way you verse.....


neko
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Reply #3 posted 04/02/07 3:11am

groovyiau

and then what happened..... ???

fish
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Reply #4 posted 04/02/07 4:14am

shayne07

groovyiau said:

and then what happened..... ???

fish



I continue with the same shit different day...
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Reply #5 posted 04/02/07 4:25am

groovyiau

interesting.....

same shit different day..... how does that work...?

Well....
I just put on the kettle.....
its amking that boiling sound...
and now i'm typing this....
so thats another sound....
just had some fruity rice...
and i thinking that aint bad...
first time i tried this flavour
and it wont be the last...

kettles boiled....

.
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Reply #6 posted 04/02/07 4:43am

shayne07

groovyiau said:

interesting.....

same shit different day..... how does that work...?

Well....
I just put on the kettle.....
its amking that boiling sound...
and now i'm typing this....
so thats another sound....
just had some fruity rice...
and i thinking that aint bad...
first time i tried this flavour
and it wont be the last...

I awake 2 late 2 play with my impulses and habit , lost with insecurity and ennui ... 2 much trapped within , unable 2 get a release..

kettles boiled....

.
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Reply #7 posted 04/02/07 5:03am

groovyiau

shayne07 said:



I awake 2 late 2 play with my impulses and habit , lost with insecurity and ennui ... 2 much trapped within , unable 2 get a release..



that seems funny to me.... as you write like a cloud when the moments hit...
and a bump from a cloud can do many many things....

do you have interesting walls....?
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Reply #8 posted 04/02/07 5:18am

shayne07

groovyiau said:

shayne07 said:



I awake 2 late 2 play with my impulses and habit , lost with insecurity and ennui ... 2 much trapped within , unable 2 get a release..



that seems funny to me.... as you write like a cloud when the moments hit...
and a bump from a cloud can do many many things....

do you have interesting walls....?


My walls are too high , and they frustrate me , and they prohibit me .. welcome 2 the human experience that is mine..
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Reply #9 posted 04/02/07 5:39am

groovyiau

shayne07 said:


My walls are too high , and they frustrate me , and they prohibit me .. welcome 2 the human experience that is mine..


high frustrate prohibit

prohibit - who is this ?
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Reply #10 posted 04/02/07 5:43am

shayne07

groovyiau said:

shayne07 said:


My walls are too high , and they frustrate me , and they prohibit me .. welcome 2 the human experience that is mine..


high frustrate prohibit

prohibit - who is this ?


Prohit is a powerful state of emotion , thought , belief and behaviour which has possession and dominion over me at present 4 much of the time..
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Reply #11 posted 04/02/07 6:04am

groovyiau

shayne07 said:



Prohibit is a powerful state of emotion , thought , belief and behaviour which has possession and dominion over me at present 4 much of the time..



That seems to be a very strong word for you....

to me it just means warning keep away from or out off as there will be
consequences for failure to comply....

i'm not very good with compliance in certain arena's and cautions keeps
me on my toes.....

mmmm
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