i made up my mind with the sad songs ive been coming up with recently, im gonna make an album entitled suicide so id be the envy of all the goth and emo kids

so hears another one

The Rum Diary

Verse 1
The cuffs were on me
Had the inscribings of misery
Tattooed on my wayward tongue
As i was pushed into the scene

Verse 2
My eyes are glazed over
They're splitting into double vision
Twin demons give me nightmares
While im locked in this prison

Hook
And then you will read...
A chapter of this diary
sitting here drunk in a cell
hearing your voice taunting me
And then you will see
The dewy eyed misery
Linked to all your lovers here...
In this rum diary

Verse 3
For days you fed me honey
To try to sweeten my blackheart
For weeks you called me a liar
stole my soul, then tore it apart

Verse 4
I made you a bridge of roses
But you wouldn't pantomime
Knocked it down like an avalanche
It hurt me so bad,think i died

Hook 2
And then you will read
a chapter of this diary
Sitting drunk in the middle of nowhere
i hear your voice taunting me
And then you will see
That bitter sweet misery
You will cower in fear
reading this rum diary

I want to be free...
From the rum diary
I wan't to be free...
from your misery...
i wan't to be free

iiight finally done with the first mix
levels aree a little funn so vbaree with me
The Rum Diary (first Mix)
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com...55230&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com...55230&q=hi
[Edited 3/25/07 0:50am]
[Edited 3/25/07 0:50am]

makes me wanna go out and
get a good bottle of rum.....

Arrrr... the romance of it all....

dude, I'm seriously starting to worry about you...

While I hear Chris Cornell singing this, seriously, if you are in this deep of a funk for this long maybe you should talk to a professional. I'm not even joking.

If this is temporary for you, good, I can't wait to see the happy person

Slave2daGroove said:

Thnx for worrying bout me
but actually writing this out helps me alot, in a venting formation
but i probabbly need professional help anyway

bumperz

mannnn... that was beautiful.....
dont know how you make rum taste so good
you got a brand name on that bottl....
mmm rum n honey - bundaberg rum over here taste like grappa....
plaaah on that....

the guitar..... the guitar playing..... WOW.....


i still dont know how you squash the words into both these songs
coz i'm getting a scandalous vibe or somethan when i hum along...

the whole arrangement.....

Oh man, I'm such a sucker for great guitar.....that's
as sweet as it comes.

Great stuff, as always...

Think I'll be looping this for a while.....tis beautiful...goes well
with wine, as well as rum....

lol thnx alot guys nice to see i got two fans warms my heart
im humbled

if ya look at the viewer count
you got more than a few interested parties..... mmm
and
i'd be jealous of what your doing.... and some are just bashful.....

like me....



[Edited 3/27/07 1:54am]

groovyiau said:

lol bashful i'd love to believe that, but thats probably just my own views lol

its true i promise...
i been bashing people fully on the internet for ages....

i have repressed anger issues.....

EmbattledWarrior said:

That makes two of us.. lol

nice changes, great solo, but where's the vox for these beautiful lyrics?

Slave2daGroove said:

soon, soon
my vocal coach, helped me out with it tuesday, next tuesday, we're gonna start laying down vocals, for it
my tonsils are all healed up,
nuthin stoppin me now