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EmbattledWarri
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Round About Midnight, The Electric Lady Cometh, WARNING ADULT CONTENT!!!!

I wrote this in downtown new york, at a bar
Finally out of my deppressive funk
hope u like it

Round About Midnight Electric Lady Cometh


Round about midnight in Manhattan,
In a cafe on the lower west side,
An Electric Lady comes to listen
To a man breathing into his saxophone,
Lightning strikes with each shake of her hips
Under the blue lights of this hypnotic unwind.
The very same hips that made Nero crazed
and had him burn Rome to ash...

In the corner to the left,
On a stool at the bar
I watch her....
Toiling away with pen and paper ,
Writing to the sway of the blue notes.
My rhythmic scratches create the percussion
For the rolling chord progressions ,
That give birth to the nights groove
Staring at that bolt of lightning, consumed.
by these tender fumes
of Coltrane's blues.

With the dimming lights conquering me,
every word that i write belongs to her.
I build a story of complex plots around her.
fantastical dreams of whisking her away
to the lusty corners of my lair.
so she can... Electrify me.

Arising like an ice age awaiting to be melted,
I look around the cafe with Moriarty eyes
A mischievous smile
And a tongue craving satisfaction.
I started digging the Bass,
Digging the Keys,
Digging that saxophone,
who's calling home,
tying this lady up in knots.

I opened a window so the grooves
can soothe the harbor,
Who was growling because it missed
its alabaster lover in the sky.
And I sympathized
looking at this Caramel Queen.
Digging those legs that run long like the Nile River,
Shaking my knees, making me quiver,
Voluptuous breast like the Goddess Queen Isis,
Well Electric Lady, i am Dionysus,
The one and true God of wine,
Hold me down, come drink my vine,
and i'll be the sun that rises and sets
in...be....tween your thighs.
My tongue will feed you my life-force,
attacking the fallen fortress of your Clit,
Unsheathe and exposed, you'll feel my wrath,
But in a gentle fashion of course,

Meanwhile i'll message
Your pressure points
Until you cum like rain,
Spreading that electricity...

Give you the fruits of my nine shallow deep,
Teasing and tempting that revolving equator,
inside of you that heats up with each pump.
I want to burn you from within,
A burn that spreads through your body
Like a sexual pyre,
Spreading equanimity, love, and ecstasy.
let me electrify you Intensively

Hmm that Sax plays the Basin Street Blues
Making Miles proud,
i hear you howl,
Digging the beat, Electric lady...
But are you real or an apparition?
If i hold my breath and twist my eyes
Will i become your fruition.
Will you become mines?
Melt, than mold me into a blue note,
so you can play me, kiss me, lick me,
f u c k m e,
Swallow me whole.
Crazy caramel neon blue electric lady.
Dim the lights down more
So i can be the wind circling round your hips,
Having your thighs forever molded
Into my mind like the secret gold of Egypt.

fuck all these words
"Can i take you home, tonight"
Electric lady...
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #1 posted 02/08/07 5:54am

groovyiau

Metropolis...


its shocking I know...
same cut different current...

Round about midnight
Manhattan,..
cafe...
lower west side,
Electric Lady comes to listen
a breathing man saxophone,
Lightning strikes
shake of her hips
Under the blue
this hypnotic unwind.
Nero crazed
I'm burning Rome....


It might not be better
but its gonna get you thur
a lot quicker...


biggrin
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Reply #2 posted 02/17/07 12:13pm

JDODSONandFlas
hpointe

I like your track called "Ghetto Life"....if we do another P.org NFO compilation, I'd like this one to be on there....

JD
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Reply #3 posted 02/17/07 8:03pm

obsessed

Jus give us some of that beautiful music now...lyrics or no lyrics....

cool
[Edited 2/18/07 5:55am]
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Reply #4 posted 02/22/07 8:22pm

EmbattledWarri
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obsessed said:

Jus give us some of that beautiful music now...lyrics or no lyrics....

cool
[Edited 2/18/07 5:55am]

lol im tryin im tryin,
i know my musical outut has been slow recently,
been busy workin and goin to class,
but i should have something musical out pretty soon, so patience smile
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #5 posted 02/22/07 8:50pm

obsessed

EmbattledWarrior said:

obsessed said:

Jus give us some of that beautiful music now...lyrics or no lyrics....

cool
[Edited 2/18/07 5:55am]

lol im tryin im tryin,
i know my musical outut has been slow recently,
been busy workin and goin to class,
but i should have something musical out pretty soon, so patience smile


I'm not pushin' or at least I didn't mean to....
Creativity never comes on demand anyway, busy or not.....

cool
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Reply #6 posted 02/22/07 9:06pm

EmbattledWarri
or

obsessed said:

EmbattledWarrior said:


lol im tryin im tryin,
i know my musical outut has been slow recently,
been busy workin and goin to class,
but i should have something musical out pretty soon, so patience smile


I'm not pushin' or at least I didn't mean to....
Creativity never comes on demand anyway, busy or not.....

cool

its cool,i have like 40 tracks that need to be finished and just havent had the time to finish, for this paticular peice i got nuthin
but i got two other sexual charged songs that i've been workin on
once i finish the touch ups on the lyrics, i'll give a little bit of a snippet of what the music will sound like,
, thnx for listening wink
I am a Rail Road, Track Abandoned
With the Sunset forgetting, i ever Happened
http://www.myspace.com/stolenmorning
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Reply #7 posted 02/23/07 7:16am

obsessed

A snippet would be good...

cool
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