Hello brothers and sisters. My page at www.mp3.com is up. I am another guy who composes music and plays some instruments and want your feedback. I might be not as good as the other ones but I have fun any way, it seems lots of people are showing themselves so I made this page at mp3.com. I'll put other songs soon. I have more upbeat things than this one 2. And some experimental things. well. see ya.


http://artists.mp3s.com/a..._davo.html

Best of luck with your music site mate

I'll check out the mp3 tommorow

Lewis

7salles said:

nice music! this is the second compostion i truly like.

nice lyrics. very sad.

please, take singing lessons.seriously.

subyduby said:

& what would you know?

This aint no place for critisising, 7salles has just set up his site & deserves support & encouragment

No Cloud9, I am just happy cause subyduby liked my music, that is what matters 4 me. I am not a singer and never was. I know i have to take singing classes If i wanna sing, but ai am doing this just to show my music, not my voice eheh. I just wont and cant ask singers to sing my songs.

thanks for teh feedback subyduby.
I'll try to sing better next time.

7salles said:

Im just a firm believer that, to critisise art, you should be an artist. Its one thing to critisise but its quite another to do better.

I duuno, hehe.
I'm kinda embaressed now. But I'm open to critiscism.

thansk 4 the support cloud.

oh gawd!


i'm just saying if u want to share your work no matter why/when/how u made it, u should try to make it as great as possible. when the music started, i was liking it. but the voice part made me want to stop it but i contiuned listening to it anyway.


and i don't know at what angle he is coming at anyway. musically, vocally or lyrically...so i have to judge everything.

sorry cloud9mission.

subyduby said:

Dats cool mate.

Just remember that when a musician posts his music here hes put his life & soul into it & so be tactful with your critisism.

God bless ya little suby

Lewis

ohh o,ok

Hi 7salles,

I think the chord progression you used is good and I really like the guitar solo. Get someone groovy to sing it for you and you're on your way!

Good start!

thanks, ehhe. I know that in USA every corner there is a singer, but there are few good singers in my place, and that suckss. :\