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New song - ufb (version 1) http://www.icompositions....?sid=49403
Go ahead and give me your constructive criticism. This is the rough first version. Enjoy! ps - it may be a bit nasty for some  | |
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nasty.... I love it.... 
not sure about a constructive crit... You do sing it like it happened yesterday... are you an actor?  I wreckon you could write songs for Russel Crowe | |
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Is she a singer/musician? Wonder what she might have said about you?
There's two sides to every story ya know...  | |
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Tim, this is great. I love the way u recorded this. Well done sonically. Cute the way u approach the subject matter. This is the first one by u I have downloaded. Keep up the good work. Correction, not the first one. The first one in a while.  | |
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talmuzic said: Tim, this is great. I love the way u recorded this. Well done sonically. Cute the way u approach the subject matter. This is the first one by u I have downloaded. Keep up the good work. Correction, not the first one. The first one in a while.
Thanks, Tal. Does that mean you haven't really liked the last few songs I've posted? Awwww...man! | |
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obsessed said: Is she a singer/musician? Wonder what she might have said about you?
There's two sides to every story ya know... I wrote this song 13 years ago, but decided to tweak it and give it another shot as I was messing with some drum loops. I was a bit angry, but it wasn't at a gf - just females in general.  | |
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HA! Love it. Really like the 60's feel.
Your voice is so dark and smooth - like chocolate. | |
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artist08 said: obsessed said: Is she a singer/musician? Wonder what she might have said about you?
There's two sides to every story ya know... I wrote this song 13 years ago, but decided to tweak it and give it another shot as I was messing with some drum loops. I was a bit angry, but it wasn't at a gf - just females in general. Huh, just females in general.... 
You may have jus dug the hole even deeper... You might not want to say anymore.... | |
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artist08 said: talmuzic said: Tim, this is great. I love the way u recorded this. Well done sonically. Cute the way u approach the subject matter. This is the first one by u I have downloaded. Keep up the good work. Correction, not the first one. The first one in a while.
Thanks, Tal. Does that mean you haven't really liked the last few songs I've posted? Awwww...man! man I like all of your stuff, really! | |
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So what are you really trying to say here?
Good stuff Tim as always. All Rights Reserved. |
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talmuzic said: artist08 said: Thanks, Tal. Does that mean you haven't really liked the last few songs I've posted? Awwww...man! man I like all of your stuff, really! | |
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yamomma said: So what are you really trying to say here?
Good stuff Tim as always. This is the tone-downed version. The other one was just vicious! Where've you been, Kelly??? Dayum!!! Join iComp, my fellow Mac user! | |
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