I dunno wtf i was on...
i was in a weary mood, 1/4 Jim Morrison, 1/4 Prince 1/4 Walt Whitman, 1/4 Jimmy Page
weird shit...

Hurricane
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com...07945&q=lo
hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com...07945&q=hi

Hurricane

Verse 1
Here i stand...
upon hands of clay
pirouettes of rain shadows
enlighten the weary way

Verse 2
In the city where i dance alone
by the fields of sugar cane
you still reign winds upon me
forever captured by your hurricane

the dissying scent of your hurricane

verse 3
you took to me to the land
where they rode your wild horses
rider after rider, they'd fall
succumbing to your forces

verse 4
make example of me,
the lowly desert rider
tempt me with your gold
foolish pariah

Spoken bridge
open your legs unto me
speaking for me what you dream
each undulating thought you desire
as i lick the embers of your fires
ravish me with ,chains n whips
as i touch the hidden gold of egypt
that lurks in-between your creamy thighs
and the mask wore will soon die



verse 5
thought i was not alone by the shore
with the one i loved beside me
but their was emptiness a shoulder length apart
as if a phantom caressed me

verse 6
now round and round forever i spin
in your sweet and dismal hurricane
trapped with a love that shall never begin
forever waiting for that break of day

life is your hurricane
[Edited 10/29/06 22:43pm]

I really 'feel' this music...beautiful.....

obsessed said:

always have good things 2 say

Richard Hill should love this. Do a collabo with him David.

talmuzic said:

Thats too funny... I thought it had a "Crash n Burn" feel to it....
So I went to Hills site http://www.soundclick.com...7058&ref=5 before I read your post

the one thing that got me.... the word "undulating" seemed out of place....
like too profesional or something... even tho its probably exactly the right
word for what you mean.... does that make sense... ???

anyway...

You jus gotta put some alphabet in your music EmbattledWarrior

groovyiau said:

its probably the syllable structure that sounds a little off,
when i sing it, i can't fit it all in the bar, but i like the word and i wanna keep it,
im gonna have to sing it faster ALA Joy in Repetition when prince
sang that king kamehameha line
"was this woman he had never noticed before he lost himself in the
articulated manner in which she said them."

EmbattledWarrior said:

Imma gonna go listen to Joy in Repitition now....

A question tho.... would there be any
word I could put forward with the same
syllables sequanece that you would consider
swapping that word with? I know how precious
this stuff can be for some...
and so you know....
I'd rather keep you on your way... than get in your way....

groovyiau said:

sure give me it, i can use all the help i can get lol

BTW where the fuck is Richard Hill anyway havenet seen him in a month or two round here.

Well to me ima thinkn.... ovulating...
when it comes to bubbles of thought,,,,




Now lets talk about "gold and creamy" kidding....

and YES... where is Richard Hill.... I so love Crash n Burn....

groovyiau said:

Ovulating rolls off the tongue much better,
i'll consider it thanx alot !

EmbattledWarrior said:

hay you got talent... speed it and squashm both in there...