check out "If" and "Adam and Eve" and tell me what you think. i would appreciate it.


If - http://www.garageband.com...aSlZlO1a28

Adam and Eve - http://www.garageband.com...aSlZVi3ZWg

www.garageband.com/artist/soggy

i seriously dig IF, Adam and eve not so much
If is sounds like something straight out of the sixties
good stuff

I'm loving the music on both songs....

Those lyrics on "if" I just cant buy..... sorry....
all I see is a "mask of dear love"
I'm not sure why you would want to see,
sell it, or promote it any other way...

I'd also agree with the comments on your
web page and like more volume on the vocals
of adam and eve...

groovyiau said:

groovy the lyrics are a joke lol. thank you guys for checking it out i appreciate it.

I love the music and your vocal sound on "If"....
However even if your lyrics are a joke, I'm not enamoured in the slightest...

Can't say I like the sounds in Adam and Eve as much, and it definitly could
use more volume on the lyrics....

DevinDevin said:

A friend gave me Roman Dirgie's - Lenore
I didnt get that either.... although when
I look deep into the life of the person
that gave me the book.... I dont think they
get it either.... whadda yaddoo ?

groovyiau said:

i've never heard of that book. is it british humor... i don't get british humor

I'm right now listening to your classical tracks.....great stuff...
really great stuff

obsessed said:

thank you. which ones?

Actually I listened to your top 11, but here are the ones that stood out for me:

Bears and Bandits...loved the melody/the tinkley keyboard
Christmas is Here....lovely easy-going sound
Will We Ever See Hell.....all around beautiful orchestration
Cloud Love....whatever you did on that one, it was great

I also dig some of the names for your songs... Very creative...

It would be interesting to know if you named them before or after
you created the music...

DevinDevin said:

I think he is or was situated in the San Diego area...
Is that far from the land of british humour.... ?

obsessed said:

oh i always name them afterwards. i just make them up when i have to type them in on the site.

groovy i don't get san diego humor either

"Adam and Eve" is a very catchy tune. I think you just need to do a better mix and then it will really shine.

yeah the vocals do need to be a little higher but it's too late to change it now on garageband.com.

by the way i'm listen to Db Blues... very cool stuff.

DevinDevin said:

So what location on the map is your humour Devin?

groovyiau said:

i prefer humor from Ireland in the neolithic period.

DevinDevin said:

You'll love this then....



I dont get it...

groovyiau said:

oh my that is the FUNNIEST THING I HAVE EVER SEEN!!!!! oh stop it would you? youre making my stomach hurt I'm laughing so hard!!

DevinDevin said:

So there's really no connection between the music and the titles? I was sort
of wonderin' about that....