I love it... Its so deep..... Thanx 4 sharing

I'm gonna say "I dont like
it" just coz you said I can


I do find that pulling a hair out
of your nose can recreate pain and sometimes a tear...

absolutely beautiful!!

Even if u dont like it...let me know



LAST TEAR


A tear goes through a lot before it lands
In the midst of its drop
Before it touches my hands
It sees the world that gave it life
And no longer hides
It has a mind like me and a heart that will soon die
With its last fall to never be seen again
It remembers the struggle
And the pain within
Its last steps are priceless
And shines like gold
It knows it's the last of the hurting soul
It unfolds the past and years of fear
Confusion and heartache is what brought it here
No more will the world see you my very last tear
For you've taken your last step
Your end is here
[Edited 10/13/06 6:53am]

good use of personification
i honestly can't find anything wrong with it
so thats def a good thing
i think its great!

DanceWme said:

I dig it. Very thoughful.

It's a really nice poem and i encourage u 2 write more.

Awesome~

Thanks for sharing~

xcellent magery.
tasteful flow.
DIFFERENT...and n the world of poetry it is hard 2 b DIFFERENT.
eye have never felt a flava like urs b4.

props 2 U.

keep writing.

That was very deep. I can dig it!

LQ