http://www.soundclick.com...dID=588098

this should be a link to one of my songs, the fact that im a life long prince fan im sure can be clearly heard, haha. Go easy as i play all the parts myself and am far from profesional.

i would be very appreciative to know peoples thoughts, and if the link even works!

'the river' is my favourite
[Edited 8/13/06 21:31pm]

I listened..... I was thinking that the vocals dont match the music...

not the vocals need to match anything really... just my firts thought...

I had a second thought.... and still come up with my first thought...

it's interesting...

p.s the sing 'nosy neighbour' has swearing just so you know

no one else?

Y'see, people come here once in a great while, don't comment on anybody's stuff and then are like, "please comment on my stuff". So it's a give and take situation but I haven't anything posted online so here's my

The music really isn't my style but I feels like you've got a consistent vibe on all 3 tracks (very important). I would be careful on writing music that worked well with the range that I sing with. The guitars need some work but overall it's a decent mix and the effects help make it sound full. Sometimes the reverb and the delay are a bit much together but overall you have a distinct vibe.

Thanks for sharing it.

also put up a new instrumental just so ya'll know

bennygee said:

Nevertheless, it was funny, eventhough I had trouble picking up on some
of the words.....

The music kind of overrode the vocal, but honestly I really like the
instrumental on this song...