it is called "how i will die"


http://www.garageband.com...aSlZFOxZG8

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You don't know me & I don't know you. My comments are made to attempt to help you make your music better (even classical). I'm no expert just a musican who loves music on every level. With that said, here's my take on the piece you've posted.

I hate midi sounds, this sounds lifeless because of midi to me. The instrument is important. Next, you've got multiple instruments going on in the mix but only the keyboard is audible throughout the entire piece. Finally, it's an intricate melody over a droning progression, write somewhere for it to go. This repetition made me want to kill myself because it just went on and on. Even when you stopped it, you brought it right back.

I think you may have missed the point.....

Maybe... if you recorded the music from
outside of the casket as its been lowered
into the ground the quality would be found....