I'd really like to know what you think of my song 'Loopin''. Please give feedback on the composition, NOT the performance. It's performed by a friend of mine, who had a lot of trouble singing the higher notes. Also, he's not a professional singer by far, so just review the song please...

http://www.filecabin.com/...nia versi/

the composition is nice, i dig it, its popish funk, i like it,
the instruments sound a little cheezy but it suits it extremely well
the vocals arent that bad,
... he's in key,
at times...

its good i like it
i actually downloaded it and kept it on my puter...
thats a good sign...
[Edited 4/27/06 11:57am]

Great style, good idea but the vocals aren't workin for me and I need more of a change (other than just a key change) as it gets a little redundant after a bit.

This sound like it needs to be remixed really good. The vocals are not one with the vocals, but the song structure is good. It has everything to make one complete track, (even a bridge...something i cannt do worth a damn) but the instruments are really dated...we need 2 get u hip on some good updated drum kits or something.

Yay! It's a good tune. Production wise it needs to be beefed up. Also, after the first minute or so it loses momentum and starts to drag a bit. But you've got the seeds of a great song there.