We'll just make this version 2.1, then.

a08 - all vox, acoustic and electric guitar
sg - bass, keys, lead guitar
bt - drums

This won't be the version that will be on our CD, but it's getting closer...

Dig!

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Hey that's not bad, songwise... the drummer sounds a bit too excited though, like he wants to solo all the time and he suddenly changes feel through the guitar solo - that's not a good thing. He's not consistent enough with his ideas, it's like he's improvising throughout the song so as to be distracting.

Otherwise, that is an excellent vocal performance from you and the song itself is catchy and I can see why the Eric Clapton comparison was made, a la the Slow Hand album.

JPW said:

Thanks. I can honestly say I've never been compared to Clapton...lol. I did all the vox last night around 2am

I really listened for what you were saying about the drums and I just can't hear it. This was the drum track I picked out from all his takes because I thought it was really steady and solid. I had to really push him to add fills and stuff, too. Hmmmm...

artist08 said:

Ooops...should've said I did all the vox




"after midnight."


(groans)

sounds good Tim. I would change the effect on the lead vox. Use a non delay reverb or chorus but go lightly. Music is cool except the guitar in my left ear on the harmony solo part (a few bad notes). Everything else is solid.

I dont know what it is but I think the beat is funny..

Anyway it is cool. I know I could probably not make a country sounding song but if I heard this on the radio I don't think I wudda turned it off, especially with the lyric..
I may not be the best
But Im the best ur gonna get tonight

(sorry im naaasty)


U have been just getting better and better ever since u first came on man. From sketchy demos to finely crafted professional tunes dude.

Thanks for your comments, guys.


Anybody else????