Hey everyone, I got a really cool groove song for ya all to hear.

I hope u all enjoy the piece.

http://www.myspace.com/guitarotechnics

Hey Jem! Haven't seen you in a long long time!

Is that you singing? This song reminds me of Sublime.

I like the pacing and the dynamics in the song. There are spots where your singing gets pitchy - over shooting the notes, it seems to happen when you get a little more energetic in your delivery, so, you might want to work on that.

Also - and honest, I like the tune - the drums seem to be buried behind the guitars, which are behind the vocals. Try to get a little better mix on the tune. But be sure to push the guitar solos up, volume-wise.

Overall it's a very cool tune.

beauhall said:

Hey man thanks for the comments and for listening, its greatly appreciated.
ya, mixing is something to work on, but i'm still new so i don't take it too hard.
yes it is me singing, and I'm happy that i've at least over shot some notes instead of not coming close to them lol.

but hey, i also have a slower version coming that has a different sound, 7 chord stuff, so i will share that too.

thanks again.

good dude. much improved productions and presentation.