i haven't posted a song on soundclick in ages. i hope you guys like it. http://www.soundclick.com...ymusic.htm


Tell me what you think and be honest.
[Edited 3/27/05 12:28pm]

geez guys...come on...don't jump on it all at once.

Hi, Milty!

The groove is ok. But, the main keys seem a little off the beat. If it was done on purpose, then, cool.
If the instrumentation is not locked together, I can't really "chill" to it, if you know what i mean


btw- thanks for the soundclick reference! I will have something up tomorrow that you can REALLY have a giggle at!!!

later,
aaron
[Edited 3/27/05 15:40pm]

Milty said:

Sweetie, you gotta realize it's a bit slow around here sometimes... especially on the weekends. I know how you feel though. I get the same way.

Anywho. Nice groove idea. I like the congas, and the flute solo is coo.

I thought it was ok. More things need to happen sooner. I liked when it broke out into a flute. More of that type of things should come out and compliment the song. I heard piano playing along with it in my head. So that tell me more can be going on in the song.

I wasn't bothered by the keys too much. I found it more "loungey" than "chilly" though. (but that could be because I make chill music and I am biased to that kind of thing.

I like the chords but the off-beat thing is kinda aggrevating. I think some of the chords would flow better if they were on the downbeat. Especially on the bridge. The flute part is a nice addition to the song.

talmuzic said:

Co-Sign

hmm...ok. well i did intend on the drums being slightly off like that. but funny thing is i don't really see them as off. to me they make sense.


and yeah there isn't much of a melody or anything like that. i just wanted a cool little soundscape, sumfin' chilled, groovy and all that.

maybe i'll work on it a bit more.