Ay. Havent posted a song in a while

#1 being "Erotic Profusion" production by Raijuan (DeRon), a demo version, im not thru with it but would like 2 know what u guys think .

#2 "He Told Me 2 Record" inspired by Dreamfirstborn. After we had a deep conversation last week, he ended telling me to make sum music. So that evening I made a very doped out song like I have never done b4, and still don't know what 2 think of it. Well that's all 4 me
Up 2 you 2 b the judge of it, so enjoy ! Peace.

"Erotic Profusion" demo lyrics:

Searching for my questions of time
Trying to stay out of my mind
And again u swaayed me with your delusion
Took me away with your erotic profusion

Lost my heart
Torn apart
A grain of u makes me
Remember my confusion
Remants sprout through the air
Once again u dont even care

Taking time out 4 my mind
Searching 4 my questions of time
And now I'm caught up in your delusion
Took me away with your erotic profusion

Wondering off in2 space
Dusking in the sands of your place
Standing in the mists of your delusions
Swayed me away with your erotic profusions

(Lo-Fi doesnt do this song justice )
http://www.soundclick.com...zmusic.htm
[Edited 1/16/05 19:59pm]

Erotic Profusion: The lyrics are really good. The lead vocal need some eq. I really like the backgroud vocals with the effects.

He Told Me 2 Record: Cool beat! I like all the weird sounds in it. The keyboard part sounds cool as well. Very 80s, is that a sample? The track is almost like Rock It by Herbie Hancock. All you need is a recurring melody and you got it.

VinaBlue said:

Thank you Vina for takin the time out of your busy life 2 comment on my music "Erotic Profusin" does not agree with my regular voice sometime lol. I had 2 add effects cuz it just dont go 2gether.

"Told Me 2 Record" has no samples of any other songs, just the snares. Well, everythingn I make has some 1 second sample of a key or snare and kickdrum, but not a sample as in like Kanye West.

We gota hook up a collabo like u said on the ##. Thank you again Vina.

paisleypark4 said:

I can't wait to hear some crazy beats like you do, with my shit. I really liked "He Told Me 2 Record", the style and the sounds you used.

I didn't even realize by the thread title that these were songs that you recorded. Sorry, man. I'll listen to these when I get home from work.

VinaBlue said:

We will see, we will see

why can't I get either of these to play? I've tried hi-fi and lo-fi!

Yo PP4, I like it. It has a sadness and depth 2 it. I fits the strange mood I'm in 2day.Your vocals have improved.

artist08 said:

Keep on movin
keep on movin dont stop no

please kkep on keein on

talmuzic said:

Fits my mood now too, like it was prepared 4 this moment I'm in now. Thank you for your comments

I am beyond content with the outcome of the collaboration. Thank you Izak... The song was undeniably hot and I'd love to work with you again if you'd like. I don't come here often as I used to, but just drop me an email and we could get down to business,

PEACE!

PP4,

Erotic Profusion - nice lyrics, maybe a bit repetitive w/ the vox. Music is cool - maybe change up somewhere in the middle, add a bridge? Vox are better, but sound muffled and distorted at times. Don't be afraid to try something different in there for a little change up! If you don't like it change it back. Nice job, though, man!

He told me 2 record - wow! Now this one is more out there! I don't know if this would be called a song or a MAD experiment...lol! Where you gettin' the Linn sounds??

I should have you do something to one my songs sometime!

Keep up the good work!

Raijuan said:

Thank you. I'd like 2 keep on working with thrax like this. I had a hook as soon as the beat came on. Usually I just hum all the lyrics then make up words as i feel it. Thank you for letting me in2 your wold.

Artist 08said

Erotic Profusion is a demo and is not finished, trust me listening to it 10 times in a row I found differences in ear while on headphones, compared 2 just the WAV files and speakers. And YES a bridge would be perfect. That is something I have never done b4.

He Told me 2 Record was just a lashing out for something new and fresh, yeah not really a song indeed. The Linn sounds came from Bobby Nunn and Webb CD that Vainandy gave me, they FUNKY! Those sounds had me going.
Thank you again man

All 3 of you

psykosoul said:

YOU CAME

psykosoul said:

PSYKOSOUL!!!

Hey P,

This is cool stuff man! Really inovative. You guys hit the nail on the head with this one.

Good to see you singing again. sounds

Dissonance said:

Thank you. I dont really recognize Ur profile name but u are probably some1 I know already . I am really hype with crazy ass beats now, gotta nother one, its so fresh cant wait to post it soon