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Raijuan Collabo "Erotic Profusion" Demo / He Told Me 2 Record Ay. Havent posted a song in a while
#1 being "Erotic Profusion" production by Raijuan (DeRon), a demo version, im not thru with it but would like 2 know what u guys think . #2 "He Told Me 2 Record" inspired by Dreamfirstborn. After we had a deep conversation last week, he ended telling me to make sum music. So that evening I made a very doped out song like I have never done b4, and still don't know what 2 think of it. Well that's all 4 me Up 2 you 2 b the judge of it, so enjoy ! Peace. "Erotic Profusion" demo lyrics: Searching for my questions of time Trying to stay out of my mind And again u swaayed me with your delusion Took me away with your erotic profusion Lost my heart Torn apart A grain of u makes me Remember my confusion Remants sprout through the air Once again u dont even care Taking time out 4 my mind Searching 4 my questions of time And now I'm caught up in your delusion Took me away with your erotic profusion Wondering off in2 space Dusking in the sands of your place Standing in the mists of your delusions Swayed me away with your erotic profusions (Lo-Fi doesnt do this song justice ) http://www.soundclick.com...zmusic.htm [Edited 1/16/05 19:59pm] Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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Erotic Profusion: The lyrics are really good. The lead vocal need some eq. I really like the backgroud vocals with the effects.
He Told Me 2 Record: Cool beat! I like all the weird sounds in it. The keyboard part sounds cool as well. Very 80s, is that a sample? The track is almost like Rock It by Herbie Hancock. All you need is a recurring melody and you got it. | |
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VinaBlue said: Erotic Profusion: The lyrics are really good. The lead vocal need some eq. I really like the backgroud vocals with the effects.
He Told Me 2 Record: Cool beat! I like all the weird sounds in it. The keyboard part sounds cool as well. Very 80s, is that a sample? The track is almost like Rock It by Herbie Hancock. All you need is a recurring melody and you got it. Thank you Vina for takin the time out of your busy life 2 comment on my music "Erotic Profusin" does not agree with my regular voice sometime lol. I had 2 add effects cuz it just dont go 2gether. "Told Me 2 Record" has no samples of any other songs, just the snares. Well, everythingn I make has some 1 second sample of a key or snare and kickdrum, but not a sample as in like Kanye West. We gota hook up a collabo like u said on the ##. Thank you again Vina. Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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paisleypark4 said: We gota hook up a collabo like u said on the ##. Thank you again Vina. I can't wait to hear some crazy beats like you do, with my shit. I really liked "He Told Me 2 Record", the style and the sounds you used. | |
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I didn't even realize by the thread title that these were songs that you recorded. Sorry, man. I'll listen to these when I get home from work.
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VinaBlue said: paisleypark4 said: We gota hook up a collabo like u said on the ##. Thank you again Vina. I can't wait to hear some crazy beats like you do, with my shit. I really liked "He Told Me 2 Record", the style and the sounds you used. We will see, we will see Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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why can't I get either of these to play? I've tried hi-fi and lo-fi! | |
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Yo PP4, I like it. It has a sadness and depth 2 it. I fits the strange mood I'm in 2day.Your vocals have improved. | |
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artist08 said: why can't I get either of these to play? I've tried hi-fi and lo-fi!
Keep on movin keep on movin dont stop no please kkep on keein on Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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talmuzic said: Yo PP4, I like it. It has a sadness and depth 2 it. I fits the strange mood I'm in 2day.Your vocals have improved.
Fits my mood now too, like it was prepared 4 this moment I'm in now. Thank you for your comments Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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I am beyond content with the outcome of the collaboration. Thank you Izak... The song was undeniably hot and I'd love to work with you again if you'd like. I don't come here often as I used to, but just drop me an email and we could get down to business,
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PP4,
Erotic Profusion - nice lyrics, maybe a bit repetitive w/ the vox. Music is cool - maybe change up somewhere in the middle, add a bridge? Vox are better, but sound muffled and distorted at times. Don't be afraid to try something different in there for a little change up! If you don't like it change it back. Nice job, though, man! He told me 2 record - wow! Now this one is more out there! I don't know if this would be called a song or a MAD experiment...lol! Where you gettin' the Linn sounds?? I should have you do something to one my songs sometime! Keep up the good work! | |
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Raijuan said: I am beyond content with the outcome of the collaboration. Thank you Izak... The song was undeniably hot and I'd love to work with you again if you'd like. I don't come here often as I used to, but just drop me an email and we could get down to business,
PEACE! Thank you. I'd like 2 keep on working with thrax like this. I had a hook as soon as the beat came on. Usually I just hum all the lyrics then make up words as i feel it. Thank you for letting me in2 your wold. Artist 08said PP4,
Erotic Profusion - nice lyrics, maybe a bit repetitive w/ the vox. Music is cool - maybe change up somewhere in the middle, add a bridge? Vox are better, but sound muffled and distorted at times. Don't be afraid to try something different in there for a little change up! If you don't like it change it back. Nice job, though, man! He told me 2 record - wow! Now this one is more out there! I don't know if this would be called a song or a MAD experiment...lol! Where you gettin' the Linn sounds?? Erotic Profusion is a demo and is not finished, trust me listening to it 10 times in a row I found differences in ear while on headphones, compared 2 just the WAV files and speakers. And YES a bridge would be perfect. That is something I have never done b4. He Told me 2 Record was just a lashing out for something new and fresh, yeah not really a song indeed. The Linn sounds came from Bobby Nunn and Webb CD that Vainandy gave me, they FUNKY! Those sounds had me going. Thank you again man Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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All 3 of you | |
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psykosoul said: All 3 of you
YOU CAME Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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psykosoul said: All 3 of you
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Hey P,
This is cool stuff man! Really inovative. You guys hit the nail on the head with this one. Good to see you singing again. sounds | |
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Dissonance said: Hey P,
This is cool stuff man! Really inovative. You guys hit the nail on the head with this one. Good to see you singing again. sounds Thank you. I dont really recognize Ur profile name but u are probably some1 I know already . I am really hype with crazy ass beats now, gotta nother one, its so fresh cant wait to post it soon Straight Jacket Funk Affair
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