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Finalised writings, please critique Thanks guys, please tell me what you think. Cheers, Sin
Esther and Bobby She knows his place She knows his style Can’t stay the night Won’t go the mile More than a player This girls the game Cake with a cherry Legs with a brain Flick the curves Turn spark to flame It must be a curse She drives him insane That sexaliscious stride Pretty girl smile Perfect hips and hair so wild She doesn’t want a man Been single for a while But he’s mesmerised by beauty Dragonfly to child Just wants one date, he feels its time Missed one to eight, he’s on cloud nine A love so blind Can’t see a thing Doesn’t know where he’s going Forgot where he’s been The heart is drumming His song so sad It’s more than a solo A choir with a band Second finger in There’s no ring on that hand Emotions so strong Doesn’t know where he stands She plays him a little And It’s driving him crazy Even at best Only a definite maybe Nether the less He wants her loving He wants her babies Sell his soul to the devil To have this lady He knows her place He knows her style But he lacks the might Won’t see the aisle [Edited 12/21/04 4:26am] [Edited 12/21/04 4:27am] | |
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Sinnott said: Thanks guys, please tell me what you think. Cheers, Sin
Very nice play on words... now put a funky Jimi Hendrix vibe to it and it will shine...there are so many things you could do with this lyricEsther and Bobby She knows his place She knows his style Can’t stay the night Won’t go the mile More than a player This girls the game Cake with a cherry Legs with a brain Flick the curves Turn spark to flame It must be a curse She drives him insane That sexaliscious stride Pretty girl smile Perfect hips and hair so wild She doesn’t want a man Been single for a while But he’s mesmerised by beauty Dragonfly to child Just wants one date, he feels its time Missed one to eight, he’s on cloud nine A love so blind Can’t see a thing Doesn’t know where he’s going Forgot where he’s been The heart is drumming His song so sad It’s more than a solo A choir with a band Second finger in There’s no ring on that hand Emotions so strong Doesn’t know where he stands She plays him a little And It’s driving him crazy Even at best Only a definite maybe Nether the less He wants her loving He wants her babies Sell his soul to the devil To have this lady He knows her place He knows her style But he lacks the might Won’t see the aisle [Edited 12/21/04 4:26am] [Edited 12/21/04 4:27am] "Study and show yourself approved"
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I consider that to be such a huge compliment - thank you very much  | |
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