Hi guys,

I have updated my previous writings of poetry, I'd appreciate it once again if you would be kind enough to tell me what you think.



Anna Simmons

She knows your place
She knows your style
Can’t stay the night
Won’t go the mile

More than a player
This girls the game
Cake with a cherry
Legs with a brain
Luscious curves, drive men insane
Those ‘come get me’ eyes
Pretty girl smile
Perfect hips and hair so wild

She drives Jack crazy,
Does she play him a little
Possibly, maybe
Nether the less
He wants her hand
He wants her baby
Sell his soul to the devil
To have this Lady
Just wants one date, he feels its time
Missed one to eight, he’s on cloud nine

Jack knows her place
He knows her style
But she wont stay the night
Wont go the mile

Nice, I think it needs to be done to music

I love it. Yes, it should be a song.

Thanks guys

Any more thoughts guys? I don't mean to sound pushy its just that in regards to these pacific writings to view of a Prince fan would mean a lot to me... D