chitter chatter fesspot moonbeam pie
kissed a girl and made her cry

sally says he's hopeless riding uphill on barbie brains
now she's dopeless

schizophrenzoid mind shield
base 49
calwort and truth spectres
flaming

red alert
red is alerted
the alerting of red
said fred
red alert

" darlin would you change and sacrifice for Me
ooh but darlin would you change and sacrifice for Me "

http://www.pbphonehome.co...alert.html

http://www.pbphonehome.com/redalert.mp3







New Earth Embassy
" Music is the New Politic "
All Rights Reserved 2004
[Edited 10/28/04 15:45pm]

clever.
Dig it a lot.

amazing production as usual.your songs always take me on a trip. very futuristic and other-worldly. a soundtrack for another planet/realm.

I loved the music! Ominous storm brewing. I've become accustomed to your voice effect Not being prolific song poster like yourself (i've only got 1. ) I don't like to critique your work, but I feel this one had some great sounds, atmosphere, & "The Voice" would be more effective with a tweak in another direction. But WoW ! Everything you do is amazing .

sacredwarrior said:

The lyrics sounds like a creative mind dump, which is the only way to write truthfully, but it seems unrefined, has awkward connotations and doesn't really have much of a punch. Maybe it's a chick song or perhaps I'm a shallow bastard, but I didn't really quite get it. I must have barbie brains.. lol

I really like the pipe / woodwind sound in the background and the arrangement is interesting enough to have me listen to the end and a couple times after. You need to back off the modulation effect on the vocal it was distracting to me. It also seems to me that you push your vocals a bit too much, I don't know, I'd like to hear a softer sound from you. Maybe it's the effect or maybe you want to punch somebody in the face. I'm speaking metaphorically here.

ok...





hold on.....






alright, flame retardent suit is currently equiped.







Seriously, these comments are meant to be constructive. That's it.

Peace.