I extended a little, but maybe it is sounding like two sogns different trhown together? It was better before? help mee


http://www.soundclick.com...nmusic.htm

Hey guys, next month is the birthday of my girlfriend, and I love her very much! She loves when i play keyboard for her and I wanna give to her a song in her birthday, just a little piano theme, i don't wanna it to be long nor complex, but simple. Hear this theme please and tell me if it is beautiful or it is dull. Should i work on it? or start another from the beggining?
It is on this link the piano theme.

http://www.soundclick.com...nmusic.htm
[Edited 9/29/04 5:54am]

Hey!; 7salles, very beautiful, romantic piece.You could maybe expand, but why bother when it'd cut into your nooky time I think she'll love it

This is really nice. It sounds beautiful and as a gift, I'm sure she would be happy with whatever you give her. Musically it sounds like an intro, so I think you should continue with it, (since you have some time) and see where it takes you! Great start!

You should write words to it.

It sounds like it's saying: "You Are My Life".

thanks for the answers, I have lots of times to work on it! She better like, or next time i will record a noisy guitar solo for her.

Soundclick is acting like a *@&# on me so i will check again.

I cant wait 2 get that beat out 2 u...how u want it 2 be? What would u add 2 it?

ahhh let me see. I tought you had forgotten, I would like a funky experimental beat, you don´t need to think too much about it nor waste much time on it. Read the words experimental funk 10 times and the first thing you come up with is the thing I´m looking for.
I will only think about what i will add when I hear, but I will put keys, i just don´t know what sounds!

Very nice. I agree with the statement that it sounds like a great intro

7salles said:

I made 3 beats 2day none of them exceptional enough! "1:33 AM" "THe Trail Of Ms. Jenkins" & "Rape!" I'll let ya know when i got a good one
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way too short. nice chord structure. sounds like love 2 me. keep it simple.

Thanks all for the nice words, ah I extended yesterday and recorded, but it sounds like two different songs because i changed all the chords so i don´t know if I´m gonna use the new part, i will post later tonight because I am at work now!
Hey paisley I am sure thye are cool beats, this ones you did, care to show?
[Edited 9/28/04 14:22pm]

7salles said:

They just aint good enuff and they are only about 1- 2 minutes in length...more 2 come 2nite

i like it. could do with being another minute or so longer, and the start is a bit harsh in comparison to the flow of the rest of the song, but i think she'll love it!

I am afraid of extending and fu_cking it up

I hope the love she has for you can reach such depths as the music you have written for her. This love sounds like epic proportions. That's why you play such a "Grand Progression" ,so to speak.

For her i cannot speak, in the worst of all cases she would still be a muse, for better or worse.
thanks 4 the words man!