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[Edited 9/23/04 14:03pm]

I like the guitar lines, and the mood changes from part to part.

THAT SAID; the insanely panned drums is just way too distracting to me. The guitar is soooo distorted that it's difficult to make out the pattern or notes in some spots.

I'd suggest cleaning up the guitar a little bit, either the distortion or the reverb, and then put the snare back closer to the middle, and the hi-hats also closer to the middle.

Very inventive tho. The ending pattern is probably the coolest of the bunch.

Sweet!
I'll be looking forward to the next version.

THanks for the input Otan, i was recording the guitar while preparing my meal for the 12:00 lunch, i hate the guitar tone of the main riff i will eq it better, i will record again with a better distortion and more precise playing, but i will have to change the riff, i listened again to it and discovered the riff has basically the same pentatonic intervals of the with the fog song from NFO, I hate when this happens. ah! otan i will pan less the drums, it´s so cool to pan instruments that i am becoming kinda addicted
hi yamomma!

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