Listen to "Craving Yo Body"

Critiques, feedback and suggestions are always welcome.

http://www.Broadjam.com/cozmic

Littlewing said:

Listen to the Lo or Hi-fi! The real player sucks.

very Cool jam. I like your tone!

Hauntingly funky. them oriental keys are tight, i wish i had that.

Good production and keyboard lines!

paisleypark4 said:

Ditto. Of course your production is GREAT as always. Wish you could come over and teach me thangs.
You're venturing into new vibes with your style. Cool!


Some thoughts: A female vocal would be groovy on this. A little ad-lib goin on between the two vocals. It just gets a little repetitive towards the end with the keyboard line doubling the vocal. Some more counterpoint would really make this great. The intro has nice little fills and things accenting the spaces between the phrases.

I have something in my head that I can't explain... you know those kind of breaking sounds like in "Keep it in the Closet"? (Michael Jackson) That would be kinda cool and also holding back a bit on the string line that doubles the vocal, like in the middle of the song, then bringing it back at the end a bit. I'm just real anal about repetition. Heh heh.

I'm sure this is just a demo as usual and you're probably thinking "yeah, I was gonna do something like that". Which remnids me, I gotta work on my shit.

Damn it!!! I love this. Didn't you do something before with the Arabic vibe?

7salles said:

Thanks Bro! I apprecite you listening and the feedback!

paisleypark4 said:

Wsup P!

Thanks man! I aint forgot about you, the revolutionary funk is commin!

mrdespues said:

Thanks M! I love the exotic modes. They're nice for G solo's too!

VinaBlue said:

Wsup V!

Thanks for the feedback! You make some really good points here.
I had a song before and you suggested some chanting at the end, and it really helped the tune alot. You have some great production ideas. Thanks!

psykosoul said:

Sup Psy!

Glad you liked it, yeah I may have I,... I do alot of songs. But I know this production/arrangement style is new for me.

Littlewing said:

Wow, thanks. That means a lot to me. I almost felt like I shouldn't say anything because you know what you're doing and who am I to give YOU direction.

Yeah, the chant thingy in Magnetic... that worked pretty good!