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Here's some JesseDezz funk 4 u... Please be gentle, folks 
www.soundclick.com/dejablue Otan and Hectim inspire me with their posts - you all do!!! My author page: https://www.amazon.com/au...eretttruth | |
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I hear alot of potential. With some better recording gear and mix it would be off the hook. Good guitar work. Rippin' it up.  | |
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talmuzic said: I hear alot of potential. With some better recording gear and mix it would be off the hook. Good guitar work. Rippin' it up.
Same here, I was typing the same type of thing yesterday but I lost my connection. Try using less reverb, I think a more "dry" production would fit your music better. RIP Prince: thank U 4 a funky Time... |
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Hey, thanks for the feedback, fams  My author page: https://www.amazon.com/au...eretttruth | |
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I just listened to Make Me Wannna. That is cool
You got talent JesseDezz said: Please be gentle, folks
www.soundclick.com/dejablue Otan and Hectim inspire me with their posts - you all do!!! | |
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JesseDezz thanks u for that wonderful compliment My author page: https://www.amazon.com/au...eretttruth | |
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Agreed....
nice stuff! 
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AGreed, What eqip r u using and wat guitar???? | |
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Honestly? I'll be as gentle as I can here, but, dude, the drums are like a huge lead anchor on your song.
I'm not sure what you're going for here with them - it's almost like listening to a song made up of ONE song, with the drums from another song. I guess they're electronic drums? Not a drum machine? Not sure, but the way they're played, it sounds like electronic ones. The high-end on the drums is insane. The two different sets of hi-hats? Whut? On the one hand, I want to applaud a unique approach to songwriting/recording, but, at the same time, I feel obligated to at least try to help you shape this thing up some. I dig the non-traditional drumming, but it takes WAAAY TOO MUCH away from the rest of the song. I can't hear the lyrics, nor can I follow them with the drums in their current pattern. My suggestion would be to decide if you want this song to be a spastic new-wave song, or if you want a baby-making slow jam... the music sounds like baby-making, the drums sound like Devo without their Ritalin. I hope I haven't offended you, and I'm definitely trying to put this in a way to see your potential and hopefully guide you in the direction you're already shooting for. Currently, this song is a split-personality seizure. You just need to give it the right meds and send it on it's way. The Last Otan Track: www.funkmusician.com/what.mp3 | |
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JesseDezz welcomes the constructive criticism. I'm just glad you fams decided to give my stuff a listen
BTW, Otan, there aren't two different hi-hats. The drums recorded are v-drums. The drum pattern panned to the right is done with an Alesis SR-16. A baby-making slow jam? 
The guitar used was a Fender "Fat Strat" and a Fender Princeton 65 amp. Thanks again for your feedback!!! My author page: https://www.amazon.com/au...eretttruth | |
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I'm liking the way you play bass, man!!! My favorite is Makes Me Wanna too.  | |
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