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A little girl named Alice .... There was this girl, her name was Alice. She was about 10 yrs old with pale skin and long brown hair.
Although in her appearance she looked perfectly normal, there was something wrong with her, terribly wrong. Although she had the face of angel, her soul was terribly troubled. So trouble she was kept away from most of mankind , so she could no longer put them in the turmoil she has already caused from her anger. Alice lived upstairs in the attic. She never spoke 2 or bothered anyone and she was never allowed come down the stairs her family locked her up in. Sometimes out of curiosity someone would sneak up the stairs to take a look at Alice, only to their minds gone mad in return. You see Alice has been dead for more then a decade, nobody has ever removed her body. Someone killed her, because of the bad things she’s done in the past and some 4got 2 close her eyes to show she longer alive. When you looked at Alice, there was a smile on her face. Things in the house she lived in would go terribly wrong. You could never sleep at night, your mind was on the edges of going insane. When you looked at Alice it always looked at as if she smiling at you as if u where a joke, because everything wrong happened cuz of her. ….. Although people thought they were haunted by the corpse of Alice, really they where preoccupied by all the wrong doings they did in their life and tried to run away from. This is the reason why her body was never removed from the attic . 
So guys what u think of my story, I thought it was kind of disturbing .....  | |
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DigitalLisa said: There was this girl, her name was Alice. She was about 10 yrs old with pale skin and long brown hair.
Although in her appearance she looked perfectly normal, there was something wrong with her, terribly wrong. Although she had the face of angel, her soul was terribly troubled. So trouble she was kept away from most of mankind , so she could no longer put them in the turmoil she has already caused from her anger. Alice lived upstairs in the attic. She never spoke 2 or bothered anyone and she was never allowed come down the stairs her family locked her up in. Sometimes out of curiosity someone would sneak up the stairs to take a look at Alice, only to their minds gone mad in return. You see Alice has been dead for more then a decade, nobody has ever removed her body. Someone killed her, because of the bad things she’s done in the past and some 4got 2 close her eyes to show she longer alive. When you looked at Alice, there was a smile on her face. Things in the house she lived in would go terribly wrong. You could never sleep at night, your mind was on the edges of going insane. When you looked at Alice it always looked at as if she smiling at you as if u where a joke, because everything wrong happened cuz of her. ….. Although people thought they were haunted by the corpse of Alice, really they where preoccupied by all the wrong doings they did in their life and tried to run away from. This is the reason why her body was never removed from the attic .
So guys what u think of my story, I thought it was kind of disturbing ..... did you write this? | |
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summerdawn said: DigitalLisa said: There was this girl, her name was Alice. She was about 10 yrs old with pale skin and long brown hair.
Although in her appearance she looked perfectly normal, there was something wrong with her, terribly wrong. Although she had the face of angel, her soul was terribly troubled. So trouble she was kept away from most of mankind , so she could no longer put them in the turmoil she has already caused from her anger. Alice lived upstairs in the attic. She never spoke 2 or bothered anyone and she was never allowed come down the stairs her family locked her up in. Sometimes out of curiosity someone would sneak up the stairs to take a look at Alice, only to their minds gone mad in return. You see Alice has been dead for more then a decade, nobody has ever removed her body. Someone killed her, because of the bad things she’s done in the past and some 4got 2 close her eyes to show she longer alive. When you looked at Alice, there was a smile on her face. Things in the house she lived in would go terribly wrong. You could never sleep at night, your mind was on the edges of going insane. When you looked at Alice it always looked at as if she smiling at you as if u where a joke, because everything wrong happened cuz of her. ….. Although people thought they were haunted by the corpse of Alice, really they where preoccupied by all the wrong doings they did in their life and tried to run away from. This is the reason why her body was never removed from the attic .
So guys what u think of my story, I thought it was kind of disturbing ..... did you write this? yeah  | |
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you crazy!
hi lisa   | |
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Christopher said: you crazy!
hi lisa What's up Althom & Christopher :Wave2:
 this is only the beginning, i'm going to finish it one of these days
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DigitalLisa said: Christopher said: you crazy!
hi lisa What's up Althom & Christopher :WAve2: this is only the beginning, i'm going to finish it one of these daysi remember your movie you wrote here...i was an extra i believe. | |
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lisa
if your threads are a movie then i am your key grip  | |
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shausler said: lisa
if your threads are a movie then i am your key grip okay stephen speilberg | |
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DigitalLisa said: shausler said: lisa
if your threads are a movie then i am your key grip okay stephen speilbergCan I play the bad guy? | |
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Christopher said: DigitalLisa said: What's up Althom & Christopher :WAve2: this is only the beginning, i'm going to finish it one of these daysi remember your movie you wrote here...i was an extra i believe. yeah i 4got all about that, my thing is I always start a story but never finish, i got about 10 differnt stories unfinished right now.[This message was edited Wed Feb 25 15:51:47 2004 by DigitalLisa] | |
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