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Reply #240 posted 08/04/03 2:50pm

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redfeathers hangs up her cell phone, and looks at it curiously. it was not like camille to not answer the cell phone, especially when it was her calling.

she drops the phone in her purse, and leans back against the wood, her right hand running smoothly along her stomach, where their child will grow.

she watches the last bit of sun disapeer behind the horizon.
Power tends to corrupt; absolute power corrupts absolutely. - Lord Acton
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Reply #241 posted 08/04/03 2:51pm

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end for today. be back tomorrow
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Reply #242 posted 08/04/03 2:55pm

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clapping clapping clapping clapping thanks again Chris! clapping clapping clapping clapping
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Reply #243 posted 08/04/03 3:53pm

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cborgman said:

Aaron appears in the waiting room doorway, his labcoat unbuttoned, and Camille's file in his hands.

He always enjoyed making a big entrance to show his importance within the hospital, and today was no exception. he pushes both doors open, so that he appears between them, and then stands, studying the waiting room.

he glances at the chart, but the name of the girl who came in with him is not written anywhere on it.

he frowns at the file, but inwardly smiles as he now has a reason to yell at the head nurse, who always proved to be a wrothy opponant.

he looks over the waiting room again, scanning the people stiing there, all of whom are watching him for news of the fate of their loved ones.

he can not suppress a smile at the atention, but quickly turns it into a bedside manner type of thing, a sort of plastic smile to mask the news.



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Reply #244 posted 08/04/03 3:55pm

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cborgman said:

aaron looks up from his file again, enjoying the enhancement of the tension in the waiting room, as he flips through a third time, knowing full well that the name is nowhere to be found in the file.

literally every eye in the waiting room is on him as he looks up again.

he starts to look for a fourth time, but decides all of the family and friends in the waiting room have suffered enough.

"time to go in for the kill" he thinks to himself.

"um..." he begins. he glances around. "i am looking for the girl who came in with the man who was in the car wreck.

beautiful stands up, and walks to the young doctor.

"right." he says. "your friend..."

beautiful leans foward, waiting.

"he is your friend?"

"yes... well, no." she says. "i have never met him before. i... kinda pulled him from the wreck"

"well, then i shouldn't be speaking to you." he turns to go.

she grabs his elbow.

"wait!" she says.

he truns, and casts an angry look at her hand, still on his elbow.

"look, i have to know... is he going to be okay?"

he looks at the hand holding him in place unneccesarily.

she follows his gaze and sees that she is still holding him.

"oh" she says. "sorry."

she takes her hand away.

"i am not at liberty to say, as you are not the next of kin." he informs her coldly.

"please!" she whispers.

he raises an eyebrow at her, riding high on her tortured emoiotional state.

"come with me" he says.

he opens one of the doors, and exits the waiting room.

she follows close behind.

he stops, and turns, his eyes going over her head to be sure the dor is closed.

"he's dead."

she bursts into tears.



that's ALMOST me. i'd have had to stifle a chuckle. and i certainly wouldn't have waited until we were in more private quarters biggrin but pretty damn good. you've got my character nailed! biggrin
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Reply #245 posted 08/04/03 4:49pm

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office teller leans into his mic, and presses the button.

"i need an ambulence pronto, and a van. we have 3 unconcious people, and the perpetrator in cuffs"


I'M NOT DEAD!!!

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Reply #246 posted 08/04/03 4:50pm

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AaronSuperior said:

cborgman said:

aaron looks up from his file again, enjoying the enhancement of the tension in the waiting room, as he flips through a third time, knowing full well that the name is nowhere to be found in the file.

literally every eye in the waiting room is on him as he looks up again.

he starts to look for a fourth time, but decides all of the family and friends in the waiting room have suffered enough.

"time to go in for the kill" he thinks to himself.

"um..." he begins. he glances around. "i am looking for the girl who came in with the man who was in the car wreck.

beautiful stands up, and walks to the young doctor.

"right." he says. "your friend..."

beautiful leans foward, waiting.

"he is your friend?"

"yes... well, no." she says. "i have never met him before. i... kinda pulled him from the wreck"

"well, then i shouldn't be speaking to you." he turns to go.

she grabs his elbow.

"wait!" she says.

he truns, and casts an angry look at her hand, still on his elbow.

"look, i have to know... is he going to be okay?"

he looks at the hand holding him in place unneccesarily.

she follows his gaze and sees that she is still holding him.

"oh" she says. "sorry."

she takes her hand away.

"i am not at liberty to say, as you are not the next of kin." he informs her coldly.

"please!" she whispers.

he raises an eyebrow at her, riding high on her tortured emoiotional state.

"come with me" he says.

he opens one of the doors, and exits the waiting room.

she follows close behind.

he stops, and turns, his eyes going over her head to be sure the dor is closed.

"he's dead."

she bursts into tears.



that's ALMOST me. i'd have had to stifle a chuckle. and i certainly wouldn't have waited until we were in more private quarters biggrin but pretty damn good. you've got my character nailed! biggrin


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as soon as I read the first bit about you aaron, I knew the character was spot on!
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Reply #247 posted 08/04/03 9:42pm

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I am just going to sit back and watch this story unfurl.
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Reply #248 posted 08/05/03 7:43am

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clapping I can't believe I missed this! It's a SAGA! smile

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worship to you Chris! smile hug
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Reply #249 posted 08/05/03 12:03pm

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just a quick note - i have too much going on at work today to write, but i will be back tomorrow
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Reply #250 posted 08/05/03 12:08pm

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just a quick note - i have too much going on at work today to write, but i will be back tomorrow


ahhh! fit This is better than Falcon Crest!
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Reply #251 posted 08/07/03 12:30pm

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alright, lemme go smoke a ciggie and think and i will start back on this
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Reply #252 posted 08/07/03 12:31pm

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Reply #253 posted 08/07/03 12:50pm

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cloudbuster sits in the back of the patrol car, his mind comtemplating the events of the last 24 hours in the empty silence of the vehicle.

an affair with a woman turned vengeful, a dent in his car, his husband and his houseboy knocked unconcious by some stranger, and he was being blamed. he had knocked out the man he suspected of commiting these crimes, only to find himself handcuffed in the back of a police vehicle, being accused of all three.

he shifts against the back of the seats, his hands and arms aching from being handcuffed behind him, and sighs. he looks over at his house to see chris being wheeled out on a gurney, and placed in the back of an ambulence.

a tear wells up in his eye as he watches the man he loves being loaded up to be whisked off to an emergency room somewhere without him at the side of his husband.

"this is my fault" he thinks to himself. "if i had been here instead of out, cheating with that bitch, none of this would have happened."

he watches as they close the door of the ambulence, and it takes off, headed down the street.

they had already sent JD and the man who had done all this, chris having sustained the least of the injuries.

"chris will tell them, he'll tell them it wasn't me when he wakes up." he sys aloud, to reassure himself.

out of his periphrial vision, he sees the officers moving towards the car.

he shifts again in his seat, anxious to tell them what happened. he waits for them to join him in the car.
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Reply #254 posted 08/07/03 1:00pm

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JD wakes up to an unfamiliar ceiling.

he squints at it, trying to figure out where he is.

he tries to turn his head, but finds that an unbearable pain prevents him from doing so.

he winces, and audibly graons.

a man appears within his field of vision.

"relax" the man says. "try not to move, you probably have a concussion"

"where am i?" JD hears himself ask.

"in an ambulance on your way to Saint Ian's hospital" the man says down to him.

"THE HOUSE! SHE'S IN THE HOUSE!" JD yells at once, the previous night's events slice through the numbness of his skull.

"it's all taken care of, relax, everyone will be fine" the man tells him.

"but... Chris!" he says.

"everyone will be fine" the man responds. "just relax"

JD relaxes as best he can. he wants to sleep again, but the wail of the siren keeps him from doing so.
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Reply #255 posted 08/07/03 1:04pm

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Reply #256 posted 08/07/03 1:19pm

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lammastide drives toward his apartment in the cool early morning air.

who the hell was the person that was in the offfice with him? had it been the mysterious "fivepercenter" that had sent the envelope to tron, if that was indeed tron?

he stops at the red light.

he shakes his head, trying to clear it.

too many activities going on, too much to absorb, too many questions.

he hears a curious sound and turns down the music in the car.

he can hear sirens.

he glances in his rearview mirror to see if he needs to move the car.

he sees nothing, but notices the light has turned green.

he removes his foot from the brake, and applies it the accelerator, as the siren noise grows louder. he cruises through the green light, and sees the ambulence further down the street he crosses.

he continues to drive, watching the bright lights in his reaview mirror as the ambulance races through the reflection of the area behind him.

he thinks a moment to send some good karma the way of whatever poor bastard lies in the back of the ambulance, wishing them good luck.

after a few more minutes of driving and deep thought, he pulls into the parking lot of his apartment building, eerily quiet in the earlt morning, the only noise coming from the soft drone of the parking lot lights.

he parks the car, removes the keys and exits the car. he steps onto the pathway, and walks to his apartment door.

he puts the key in the lock, trying to be as quiet as possible so as not to wake his sure to be sleeping lover.

he moves into the living room, and finds that the lights are all off. he locks the door behind him and moves into the bedroom, shedding his clothes along the way, careful to be as quiet as he can.

he sits on the edge of the bed, to remove his shoes. the slight noise of the bed awakens hi the sleeping form.

Fhunkin sits up in the bed, awakened by the noise. he yawns and stretches.

"did you have a good day?" he asks mid-yawn.

"it was alright. go back to sleep." Lammas whispers to him, as he pulls off a shoe.

Fhunkin nods and lies back down.
[This message was edited Thu Aug 7 13:35:50 PDT 2003 by cborgman]
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Reply #257 posted 08/07/03 1:35pm

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he can see deja standing naked before him. she smiles seductively, and spins for him, her dress twirling up in the breeze to show him a glimpse of her naked thighs.

he feels himself smile, and she returns the smile to him.

her smile melts into a more seductive smile, and she becons to him with a crooked finger.

he moves a few steps closer untill she holds up a flattened palm, indicating that is where she wants him.

she smiles again, a hint of naughtiness buried within her glimmering eyes.

she places her right hand on her left shoulder, and hoists the shoulder closer to her head, half closing her eyes seductively.

her finger catches the shirt strap, and she pushes it ever so slowly, so as to tease him with the flesh of her shoulder.

he grins at her.

she pushes it further, allowing it to fall onto the side of her arm. she then lets the hand run along the top of her breast and then to her other breast, where it gently glides over her nipple.

her left hand then dances it's way to her right shoulder, and catches the strap there with her index finger and thumb. she pulls it upward and then over her shoulder, and lets it fall against her arm.

he grins gleefully.

her hands then fall across one another at ther waist, and she grabs the bottom hem of the shirt, and pulls it up slightly, revealing dark skin stetched taut across her waist.

she looks at him through half open eyes, and then turns her eyes downward to her midruff. she bites softly on her lower lip, catches the material with her hands, and pulls the shirt off of her torso.

his eyes follow the shirt up, and then down her body to her breasts.

but where her breasts should be, there are chris's and endorphins heads, writhing, their impossibly long forked tongues intertwined, their faces stretched and contorted into demon like shapes.

the preist awakes with a start, his dream shocking him into an all too quickly alertness.

he gasps, and feels his heart beating wildly.
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Reply #258 posted 08/07/03 1:50pm

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chris hears a voice cutting through the dull grey void that clouds his head.

"can you hear me?"

he opens his eyes slightly, but the lights from above him just intensifies the pain.

all at once, he recalls what has happened.

she is in the bathroom, whoever she is. she is coming towards him, grabbing something off of the bathroom counter.

the metal sculpture!

he hears his voice scream, and he swings at her.

"jesus!" the voice says, but it is a males voice. he opens his eyes the rest of the way, the white light hazing over his long closed eyes, and making forms appear as if they were emitting light from their pores.

the woman is gone, and the bathroom is gone, and left in it's place are a long white curtain and a blond man in a white coat.

he peers at the figure.

"damn... there is a god." chris says as he peers at the man infront of the white curtain.

the man laughs heartily.

"shit. i should have given more money to charity." chris mutters, and closes his eyes again.

"not god, but i am here to save you" the man's voice says, the mere sound causing his head to throb.

he opens his eyes again, his pupils adjusting to the light better. the man looks at him, and marks something on a clipboard.

"my name is Dr. Aaron Superior, and you are here at Saint Ians' Hospital. the man says.

Chris tries to sit up as a thought hits him.

"ENDORPHIN!" he manages to get out before the IV and assorted wires hit the end of ttheir length and jerk his body back down to the hospital bed.

"yes, well... that's a bit of bad news i am afraid."

chris turns his head quickly to look at the doctor.

"what's wrong with endorphin?" he asks.
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Reply #259 posted 08/07/03 2:10pm

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redfeathers lays in her bed, on her back, her hands running gently over her stomach.

she glances at the clock.

3:42 am.

still no call from camille.

she rolls over onto her side, and lifts the handset on the phone beside her bed, and places it next to her ear.

she can hear a dialtone.

why had he not called her back?

she sighs and places the headset back on the reciever of the phone.

she rolls back onto her back, and stares at the ceiling. her hands automatically go back to her stomach, caressing genly that which is growing there.

she sighs.

where could he be?
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Reply #260 posted 08/07/03 3:00pm

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WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME???

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Reply #261 posted 08/07/03 9:04pm

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cborgman said:

lammastide drives toward his apartment in the cool early morning air.

who the hell was the person that was in the offfice with him? had it been the mysterious "fivepercenter" that had sent the envelope to tron, if that was indeed tron?

he stops at the red light.

he shakes his head, trying to clear it.

too many activities going on, too much to absorb, too many questions.

he hears a curious sound and turns down the music in the car.

he can hear sirens.

he glances in his rearview mirror to see if he needs to move the car.

he sees nothing, but notices the light has turned green.

he removes his foot from the brake, and applies it the accelerator, as the siren noise grows louder. he cruises through the green light, and sees the ambulence further down the street he crosses.

he continues to drive, watching the bright lights in his reaview mirror as the ambulance races through the reflection of the area behind him.

he thinks a moment to send some good karma the way of whatever poor bastard lies in the back of the ambulance, wishing them good luck.

after a few more minutes of driving and deep thought, he pulls into the parking lot of his apartment building, eerily quiet in the earlt morning, the only noise coming from the soft drone of the parking lot lights.

he parks the car, removes the keys and exits the car. he steps onto the pathway, and walks to his apartment door.

he puts the key in the lock, trying to be as quiet as possible so as not to wake his sure to be sleeping lover.

he moves into the living room, and finds that the lights are all off. he locks the door behind him and moves into the bedroom, shedding his clothes along the way, careful to be as quiet as he can.

he sits on the edge of the bed, to remove his shoes. the slight noise of the bed awakens hi the sleeping form.

Fhunkin sits up in the bed, awakened by the noise. he yawns and stretches.

"did you have a good day?" he asks mid-yawn.

"it was alright. go back to sleep." Lammas whispers to him, as he pulls off a shoe.

Fhunkin nods and lies back down.
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lol Chris, you RULE!
Ὅσον ζῇς φαίνου
μηδὲν ὅλως σὺ λυποῦ
πρὸς ὀλίγον ἐστὶ τὸ ζῆν
τὸ τέλος ὁ χρόνος ἀπαιτεῖ.”
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Reply #262 posted 08/08/03 6:31am

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Lammastide said:


lol Chris, you RULE!


i knew you would enjoy that.
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