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I need Feedback On something that I wrote I'm considering entering a piece that I wrote into a contest...I'm not sure if I should and I need some feedback on whether it is idiotic inane crap or not (btw thanks handclaps-the code work for you?)
the link is www.livejournal.com/users/ellamichelle The entry entitled "Smoking" at the top of the page, date May 5th 2003 Opinions please | |
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not bad...not bad at all...
i say go for it!!! you're only as old as you feel..............so how old do i feel
Now that food has replaced sex in my life, I can't even get into my own pants. | |
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Its really good!! Enter it!
BTW... I got caught up reading the whole first page and I just wanna ya! He calls me "Holi" cuz he says everyday w/ me is like a Holiday... | |
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Love the story! I really like the way you use words to convay the emotion and texture of the peice.
You should enter it! | |
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Thanks guys! It was v. cool of you all to help...and extra cool that you were so kind. | |
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I love it! Enter it! Great writing! | |
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definitely enter it...and the code worked 4 me, i got my own lil' journal now... | |
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Good stuff. | |
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Enter it...
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AzureStar said: Enter it...
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