a house, a man needs a house &

a woman, the woman needs needs a baby, & possibly another baby

to make the house a home, is my thought.

a villan, a villan will try to take away the things

that the man & the woman have together

the villan, the villan may attack the children

s/he may be full of alcohol & street drugs

s/he may have been abused by parents, or relations

s/he may have been a bully in school

s/he may have been bullied.

me? no psychiatrist,

couldn't do the schooling.

attended art classes

they let me do my youthful fooling

know that we do not know (enough)

we also know that we fear GOD

fear is the beginning of wisdom.

honour thy father and honour thy mother.

both of them will ever be dead in my life

just a delay until i am headed their way

on holy heaven's curve, things are not complex

on holy heaven's curve, there is boundless love,

and yes, indeed, fun sex.

clean fun sex, no disease

one for all & all for one

FATHER GOD MOTHER MARY BROTHER JESUS SISTER MAGDELENE

greet us, everyone, with a holy embrace & a holy kiss.

Love it, thanks for sharing! I also love writing poetry

Excellente! 😃⭐⭐⭐⭐

alphastreet said:

Love it, thanks for sharing! I also love writing poetry

Thank you so much alphastreet! It's cool for me to get feedback with people I don't know. I am male, if you feel okay with telling me, are you male or female, because Im very interested in how the female mind reads or thinks about a man's poem.

Dalia11 said:

Excellente! 😃⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thank you so much as well, Dalia11. Judging from your username I'm pretty certain you are female, again I'm interested in how the female mind reads or thinks of a man's poem. If both of you could just pick a line that you feel works well, that would be a big help for me.

In general, females like romantic words, songs,poems, etc.

I like to read, like words. I am interested in the story the poem is about.