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Just A Poem Just looking for a little imput...any suggestions/comments are welcome
Lost The windshield wipers erase all of u For it is only when the rain comes that I get 2 c That which has held my heart in captivity for so long For I see though you like a pane of glass Only visible when the rain comes Once upon a time it was only my tears that brought u back around But no longer do I depend upon them 2 see you The breeze brings your cologne back 2 my mind The memory brings you back into my arms I can taste you, feel you But now I just miss you You told me that I was the reason you woke in the morning And the only thing that could bring dreams to you at night Somehow that was all lost In some careless fight Egos bruised Knowing that is the only thing that can stand between us We create our own misery Curse of intelligence or gift? The answers lye in the questions So now I lye here Wondering what it would take to get you back in my arms I offer up anything that you want Cause without you I know that I am but half a man And half a man can never be good enough You pushed me away Saying that my love was too much of a burden to bear The cross of affection Unwilling to stand So you hurt me instead Once again the wipers float across the windshield All sign of you gone again I will wait for another raindrop to land upon my window Just for another glimpse of you Why can’t you be here in this car with me? Some say that I come on too strong My personality is overwhelming It was so easy in the beginning Nothing hidden Nothing lost Now it is like we don’t even know one another Two strangers passing in the night Love no longer lives here Just a memory Of the fight that night You refuse to tell me what is on your mind You show me nothing but indifference and contempt Was all trust lost in me When I took friendship on another trip? Regret nothing, was my motto Now I regret loosing you Your respect is no longer there for me Contempt has taken its place Knowing not how to fix the situation We continue to play these childish games Content with nothing more than friendship That is how I should have kept it But the urge overtook me Weakness reared its ugly head How I lost so much for so little, a moment of joy, maybe happiness In a life filled with empty moments Fixing everyone’s situations Keeping my mind off my own Creating my own misery The brass ring was there and I grasped it Fault me if you must But never will you know the loneliness that fills my life For you, love is never far away For me, it’s lost in another’s life Fault me if you must However can we get back what is now lost? Some say things are never the same But I don’t believe a word With time and understanding The windshield will no longer be needed Held tongues need to be forgotten For in truthfulness will we be happy Lost words, emotions left hidden They are the cause for all the pain No more lies, no more half-truths From now on I will speak my heart You know how hard that is for me For I want nothing more Than for those around me to find happiness Is it wrong of me to grasp for the brass ring? Should I deny myself momentary pleasures? Keep my heart away from all? How can I get to the place, Where I can be free from it all? Shun me if you must For I would rather not have you at all if I can’t have your respect Nothing more than a friend Nothing more than a friend Nothing more than a friend | |
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alex
I cant make no comments to this as it's just fine. | |
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katt said: alex
I cant make no comments to this as it's just fine. Thank you dearest ... ya... | |
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Alex take a bow my friend
of 's Hey look everyone its alex wow its alex wow alex JaneyPoos used to be it... then they changed what it was. Now what I am isn't it and what is it is strange and frightening to me...
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ALEX...If only... | |
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JaneyPoos said: Alex take a bow my friend
of 's Hey look everyone its alex wow its alex wow alex Jane...thank you dearest...... | |
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alex
notice my sig is jus' 4 u ..... [This message was edited Sun Apr 13 15:14:30 PDT 2003 by WrecK] | |
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Alex, , A+++ | |
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Beautiful Alex. | |
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Your poem read, sadness in me
You seem to be, down on your knees I feel for where you are Yet I have to just say That maybe tomorrow Will be a brighter day. | |
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Thank you all for your kind input... every last dayum one of ya... | |
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very beautiful poem, I love it, thanks for sending me the link, you are a wonderful person, keep up the good work, I look forward to more of your creations, love, peace and always be wild, | |
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Crushing! | |
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Your words of emotion/expression are quite profound, reflective and extremely heartfelt. Thank you for sharing. | |
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wow,...
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One. Drop them 2's, 4's U's etc. Don't be a copycat.
Two. I like the way you give form to thoughts. Keep going. | |
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. [This message was edited Mon Apr 14 3:39:38 PDT 2003 by Christopher] | |
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Wow...
Heartbreaking, haunting, poignant and beautiful. Thank you for sharing it Alex, wonderfully written. --»You're my favourite moment, you're my Saturday... | |
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Deep! Beautiful! | |
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Just an update
I finally worked up the nerve to give a copy of this poem to the person about whom it was written...sadly it cost me our friendship......but hopefully it will all work out n the end... I would like to thank you all for the kind words and the encouragement that u have shown...it makes writting soo much easier knowing that there are ppl out there who enjoy your work... | |
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alexnevermind319 said: Just an update
I finally worked up the nerve to give a copy of this poem to the person about whom it was written...sadly it cost me our friendship......but hopefully it will all work out n the end... I would like to thank you all for the kind words and the encouragement that u have shown...it makes writting soo much easier knowing that there are ppl out there who enjoy your work... I am very sorry to hear about that alex JaneyPoos used to be it... then they changed what it was. Now what I am isn't it and what is it is strange and frightening to me...
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