I was born...
so are u...
do U think about the things..
that u truly do...
does it matter..
in the end...
what u say to a friend...
will U be kind or become mean...
to find out what u truly feel...
are u born to help each other...
not to hurt with saying another..,
word...
someday soon...
someday...soon..
U might be born again...

think of this...
beyond what U allways do...
do what u wouldnt...to another...
that u never thought u could do...
positive note...
dont let your actions...
bring u down...
in the end...
what u say to your self...is like to a friend...
will u be kind or become mean...
to find out what U truly can be...
are u born to help each other...
not to hurt with saying another...
word...
some day soon...
some day soon...
some day soon...U might not get a chance to B U again...



Just felt light writing...
tx.
SingMia

TipN4U said:

Pardon me but ONLY WORSHIP GOD the father...

but mayB that icon can have candy thrown from it's hand or a balloon...

Thank u tho.

U know when each of us opens our mouths "THERE IS POETRY"
Just depends if your ALLEN POE, WILLIAM SHAKESPEARE or ANN LANDERS ahem COUGH.

SingMia

Food for thought as always! That "U might not get to be U again" line is haunting.

Emotions are simultaneously complex and simple. We often let our mind interfere with our hearts. We convince ourselves that we feel differently than we really do. It takes true courage to live by the heart.

I can't read this, I don't speak Princebonics. If anyone can translate it to English, I'd be much obliged

ian said:

Please, no one bother.

IceNine said:

Oh come now, it takes courage to post stuff like this!

TipN4U said:

The emoticon is taking a bow! The author selected worship to define it... I see it as ..Taking a Bow! Respect for your art and it's truths..

Moonbeam said:

It takes courage to jump off a tall building with a bungee cord tied to your nutsack too... I just won't do it.



Seriously, she/he can post what they want and I am proud that they have the guts to do it, considering the fact that many of us will think what they write is utter garbage.

The emoticon is taking a bow! The author selected worship to define it... I see it as ..Taking a Bow! Respect for your art and it's truths..[/quote]

THANK U...for defining that for me...becuz I would have to stop writing if it got NUTS here regarding it. WELL wait, I dont think I would stop writing but...perhaps it might bother me a bit if people thought I was getting an ego or something becuz...ego is nothing but puffed air. SO thank U (seriously for defining that for me).

PS...now if U and I went to japan we can BOW all day long...thats a place where BOWING is seriously respectful. Makes you wonder why we have lost (ALL OF US) our hand shakes, hugs, or just respect in AMERICA. Would be nice to get that back.

DO you remember when you were a kid (neighbors would have summer cook outs together without wanting to know about gossip or anything just sitting down and enjoying a great meal together? even just at the supper table)). Boy would that be nice to get that Back 2.

Love SingMia

TipN4U said:

THANK U...for defining that for me...becuz I would have to stop writing if it got NUTS here regarding it. WELL wait, I dont think I would stop writing but...perhaps it might bother me a bit if people thought I was getting an ego or something becuz...ego is nothing but puffed air. SO thank U (seriously for defining that for me).

PS...now if U and I went to japan we can BOW all day long...thats a place where BOWING is seriously respectful. Makes you wonder why we have lost (ALL OF US) our hand shakes, hugs, or just respect in AMERICA. Would be nice to get that back.

DO you remember when you were a kid (neighbors would have summer cook outs together without wanting to know about gossip or anything just sitting down and enjoying a great meal together? even just at the supper table)). Boy would that be nice to get that Back 2.

Love SingMia[/quote]

Agreed!

IceNine said:

IceNine, well said. Thank you.

nice poem
but u r really weard...!

WTF?



I me, Prince and Sahar! Now shoot me down!!!

TipN4U said:

w/MUSIC ... can't 4get the MUSIC ... aaah, yes. ... nice memory indeed.
one LOVE

IceNine said:

That's really cruel and heartless.

Natsume said:

Not really... I think that it is cool that they post what they wish... I don't have to like it and my taste might be really bad in what I like and don't like... their stuff could be great and I could be totally off.

I really am proud that they are secure enough to do their thing and I am certainly not trying to tell them not to do it.

TipN4U said:

I don't come to the Org to be preached too.

IceNine said:

That much I understand and appreciate... but it's the last part ("considering the fact that many of us will think what they write is utter garbage") that throws me off. I know you don't have to like it and never thought this, but it's still cruel to say that the majority of the org hates what they have written.

If you want to criticize, feel free to do so... but in can be done in a tactful manner. If you don't like it, tell us why that is instead of just saying "this is garbage"... constructive criticism and all that.

Natsume said:

Actually, I didn't say that "the majority of the org" hates what they wrote... I said that "many of us" would think that and many of us probably don't like it... I don't know how many people it takes to be "many," but there are those who don't like it.

For those who like it, I am glad that you like it and if it is to your taste, I hope that they post more for your enjoyment.

By way of criticism, I simply don't find it to be compelling poetry and I don't find the message to be that compelling either.

IceNine said:

Sorry, I was going for emphasis there.



Thanks.

aspera773 said:

This quote made me think that there are those of us who come from those kinds of backgrounds (neighbors would have summer cook outs together without wanting to know about gossip or anything just sitting down and enjoying a great meal together) and still try to have functions like that today, mainly in Detroit, the Detroit Crawl puts together cookouts, backyard parties or just any kind of get together they could to share each others sprit, Which in time... gets passed down to young kids, that pass it on to future generations...

We must keep this going...

RiccoTheArtist said:

Chile, don't have me goin' broke w/da quickness ... i'm already try'na get 2 Detroit 4 one of these gatherings ... i've heard nuthin' but good things about this city.
So much money 2 save, so little time (& honey U know i'm try'na get 2 Ur shop 2 partake in one of those creations from the LIFE diVINE).
Much LOVE, Ricco. Really hope i get 2 meet U & yamomma at this year's celebration (if there is one) ... really dig the positive LIGHT coming from Ur souls.
one LOVE

TipN4U said:

TipN4U, another great peice. love ur stuff. look into publishing it. thanx.