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fan fiction- deleted the post. It has to be 750 words and I'm way over the limit and haven't gotten to the searching for the kids yet. What can I cut do you think? Do the characters seem funny? Are they believable? Can you tell what each character does/who they are?
How is the dialogue. Does it have a point of view? Is it character driven? What emotion do you get out of it so far? never mind. [Edited 9/13/09 20:41pm] | |
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19 looks and no response?
wow ok. | |
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