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Thread started 09/13/09 3:01am

missmad

fan fiction- deleted the post.

It has to be 750 words and I'm way over the limit and haven't gotten to the searching for the kids yet. What can I cut do you think? Do the characters seem funny? Are they believable? Can you tell what each character does/who they are?

How is the dialogue. Does it have a point of view? Is it character driven? What emotion do you get out of it so far?



never mind.
[Edited 9/13/09 20:41pm]
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Reply #1 posted 09/13/09 3:38pm

missmad
19 looks and no response?

wow ok.
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