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"Luke & Leia" - my latest short film After all this time, I finally have a result. ![]() I'm hoping this makes it as a finalist in Atom.com's Star Wars Fan Film contest this year. Keep your fingers crossed for me. | |
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good luck ![]() To make a thief, make an owner; to create crime, create laws. | |
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Sheesh... I guess the Org doesn't know me anymore. ![]() | |
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Everyone's a critic when you're online...
A+ for effort C+ for the end results The editing could have been tighter, the actors could've been more animated in their delivery (less wooden) and the shots could've been less static (think Tarantino's angles) but then again, what do I know... ![]() A working class Hero is something to be ~ Lennon |
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I want to be in one of your movies!!!!
Good luck!! Woohoo! MyeternalgrattitudetoPhil&Val.Herman said "We want sweaty truckers at the truck stop! We want cigar puffing men that look like they wanna beat the living daylights out of us" Val"sporking is spooning with benefits" | |
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Funny concept ![]() the acting could use a lot of work, and the dialogue - as informal as you want it to sound, doesn't sound natural and comes off as being read rather than actually spoken i would cut down the credits to under 2minutes and give the story a tad more room to breathe different camera shots would be great, closeups of the two speakers, etc. (especially more when dude with black eye tries to show it off in his emo way lol) could you possibly include some star wars imagery in your film instead of just talking about it? i kept hoping that when he pulled out in his car that there would be some crazy effect making it look like it was hovering like Luke's ride did ![]() [Edited 4/30/09 8:58am] [...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...] | |
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![]() To make a thief, make an owner; to create crime, create laws. | |
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There we go! Constructive criticism! ![]() There were a few things in the editing that bothered me for which I just couldn't do anything with. Kinda wish I had another camera operator at the time, but it's a little late for that now. ![]() Thanks for the comments! ![]() | |
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![]() very kevin smith, todd! ![]() i'll pass this along to the SW Galaxy geek I know ![]() ![]() | |
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I have to get ready for a wedding, but I will definitely be watching this later! ![]() The Normal Whores Club | |
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FunkMistress said: I have to get ready for a wedding, but I will definitely be watching this later!
![]() you're getting married again?!? ![]() | |
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those boys are cute as hell!
wait, are they legal? ![]() | |
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TMPletz said: Sheesh... I guess the Org doesn't know me anymore.
![]() i do! ![]() ![]() | |
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I agree. The music kicks ass! Sodanation gave me exactly the kind of sound I was looking for. ![]() Thanks all! | |
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After a few people have suggested that the intro be trimmed down, I went ahead and did it as well as getting the aspect ratio better for the widescreen YouTube viewer (can't really tell here in the embedded viewer, though).
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oh wow lol... you didn't just cut it down you got rid of it altogether! ![]() i think you could throw a "flaming death productions presents" luke and leia all of that intro footage you shot ![]() not even the getting out of the car and walking into the restaurant? ![]() ![]() | |
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emm said: oh wow lol... you didn't just cut it down you got rid of it altogether!
![]() i think you could throw a "flaming death productions presents" luke and leia all of that intro footage you shot ![]() not even the getting out of the car and walking into the restaurant? Eh... for the contest purposes, it's not needed. The full intro edition will be the special edition. ![]() | |
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