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Great job Vina, congrats! "You need people like me so you can point your fuckin' fingers and say, "That's the bad guy." "
Al Pacino- Scarface | |
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Big congrats, Vina...  I just read the poem...very, very good... | |
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Congrats!!! **************************************************
If the wind blew every petal from your precious red rose 
Would U be afraid of what U'd find inside? 
Prince - Dreamin' About U | |
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00769BAD said: you are so INDEPENDANT!!!
good work BABY!!! Listen man you can't be calling someone the same thing you call me I told you about that before. CONGRADULATIONS VINA I'm BAD's FIRST BORN Baby Girl
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Hee hee...
It's so weird because I just wrote down what I saw and repeated "I'm independent" every 4 lines. I guess that makes it poetry... My lyrics are sooo flowery, so this is very different for me... It doesn't even rhyme!!! I was kind of inspired by R.L. Buss when I wrote it. He's a friend of mine... (wink wink) Thanks for all the congrats, guys! 
Check out his stuff too  and submit something if you're a writer! | |
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Vina, between the music and poetry, you are one awesome individual.
Thanks for sharing. | |
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JamesMarshallHendrix said: Vina, between the music and poetry, you are one awesome individual.
Thanks for sharing.  Wow, man. Thank you.  | |
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It took me forever to respond to this, because my stupid computer has been jacked up, and wouldn't let me view the friggin' page!!! So, I must (belatedly) say "congratulations" to my wonderful friend, Vina Blue! I really enjoyed the poem! Quite good! Vina my dear, you are one talented lady! 
Do not hurry yourself in your spirit to become offended, for the taking of offense is what rests in the bosom of the stupid ones. (Ecclesiastes 7:9) | |
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congrats, vina!!! 
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CarrieLee said: Congratulations Vina! What an accomplishment!
I suck at poetry  Wait a minute! I personally find "boobies, boobies, boobies" to be highly poetic! A tribute to femine anatomy that is stunning in its simplicity! Or maybe I'm just a horndog?
Do not hurry yourself in your spirit to become offended, for the taking of offense is what rests in the bosom of the stupid ones. (Ecclesiastes 7:9) | |
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