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Thread started 08/14/08 2:01am

bobsteezy

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English version haiku. bring yours

Activity? Nah.
Relaxation. Bed time now.
In L.A. I chill.
We all want the stuff that's found in our wildest dreams.

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Reply #1 posted 08/14/08 2:57am

Christopher

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me too
what's your tattoo of
3am
strawberry,raspberry all those good things
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Reply #2 posted 08/14/08 2:58am

HamsterHuey

What are the haiku rules again?
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Reply #3 posted 08/14/08 4:13am

PANDURITO

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Japanese haiku have been traditionally composed in 5-7-5 syllables. When poets started writing English haiku in the 1950's, they adopted this 5-7-5 form, thinking it created a similar condition for English-language haiku. This style is what is generally considered "traditional" English haiku.

Over the years, however, most haiku poets in North America have become aware that 17 English syllables convey a great deal more information than 17 Japanese syllables, and have come to write haiku in fewer syllables, most often in three segments that follow a short-long-short pattern without a rigid structure. This style is called by some "free-form" haiku.

geek

shhh http://www.ahapoetry.com/keirule.htm
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Reply #4 posted 08/14/08 6:56am

XxAxX

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new Imago thread. hmm
cat hair where it shouldn't be? omg
dustmites in the bed! disbelief
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Reply #5 posted 08/14/08 5:20pm

AnckSuNamun

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Christopher said:

me too
what's your tattoo of
3am
strawberry,raspberry all those good things

T-I-G-E-R-S! T-I-G-E-R-S! BAYSIDE! BAYSIDE!
We're the Bayside Tigers and we're on the Prowl.
Hear the Bayside Tigers growl. Grrrrr-ooooowwwwl!



tease We broke the rules.
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Reply #6 posted 08/14/08 5:44pm

Fauxie

Wait winter morning,
I've only just awoken!
Greet me at the door.
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Reply #7 posted 08/14/08 5:45pm

Fauxie

Warm under blanket,
Watching thunder and lightning.
The chattering rails.

...

Leaping silver fish,
Reflecting trees and grasses?
It was a fish-hook!

...

Taking a shower,
Behind the net, a gecko,
Asking for a wash!

...

See amnesia's leaves,
Caress my hands as they dance.
How long stirs the branch?
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Reply #8 posted 08/14/08 5:47pm

SirPsycho

i can't believe it.
maybe thats the reason why
it feels so un real.
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Reply #9 posted 08/14/08 6:35pm

Byron

What the hell was that
Fetish at it's most surreal?
Somebody tell me
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Reply #10 posted 08/14/08 6:49pm

notaprintztype

two times cinema
bella mistress of spices
not a bad thursday
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Reply #11 posted 08/14/08 6:51pm

Fauxie

Byron said:

What the hell was that
Fetish at it's most surreal?
Somebody tell me


Sounds like Imago got you with a meatspin link or something. lol
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Reply #12 posted 08/14/08 7:04pm

Byron

Fauxie said:

Byron said:

What the hell was that
Fetish at it's most surreal?
Somebody tell me


Sounds like Imago got you with a meatspin link or something. lol

lol Thankfully, no lol...
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Reply #13 posted 08/14/08 9:02pm

sammij

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i love how you taste
when you kiss me how you do...
u haz a flavr.


biggrin
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #14 posted 08/14/08 9:06pm

SirPsycho

sammij said:

i love how you taste
when you kiss me how you do...
u haz a flavr.


biggrin


plaugerism!
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Reply #15 posted 08/14/08 9:07pm

sammij

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SirPsycho said:

sammij said:

i love how you taste
when you kiss me how you do...
u haz a flavr.


biggrin


plaugerism!

omfg ! no way!
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #16 posted 08/14/08 9:20pm

SirPsycho

sammij said:

SirPsycho said:



plaugerism!

omfg ! no way!


whistling

http://www.mercurial.cc/i...flavor.jpg
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Reply #17 posted 08/15/08 5:28am

sammij

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SirPsycho said:

sammij said:


omfg ! no way!


whistling

http://www.mercurial.cc/i...flavor.jpg
[Edited 8/14/08 21:20pm]

they totally bit off of MY work. hmph!
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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