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Reply #30 posted 03/26/08 3:40pm

ArielB	O.K. here is my Attempt to write a Tanka Don't laugh at me please It is my first try at it Thank you very much, bye bye
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Reply #31 posted 03/26/08 4:08pm

Runza	LiquidGold said: Runza said: standing here in mind sitting slouched and broken in body disconnect the phone after one little sound drives both outside the walls This was fun. Wrong amount of syllables Really? I still counted 31? I'm wondering if my brain is melting from the effort. Not being nasty, I'm truly confused.
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Reply #32 posted 03/26/08 6:32pm

Flowerz	Runza said: LiquidGold said: Wrong amount of syllables Really? I still counted 31? I'm wondering if my brain is melting from the effort. Not being nasty, I'm truly confused. the 1st n 3rd lines have to only have 5 syllables
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Reply #33 posted 03/26/08 9:10pm

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Runza said:

LiquidGold said:

Wrong amount of syllables

Really? I still counted 31?
I'm wondering if my brain is melting from the effort.
Not being nasty, I'm truly confused. confuse

standing here in mind
sitting slouched and broken in body 9 syllables. Should be 7
disconnect the phone
after one little sound 6 syllables. Should be 7
drives both outside the walls 6 syllables. Should be 7

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Reply #34 posted 03/26/08 9:24pm

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