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from love gee wiz look at his eye's gee wiz how does he be so blind gee wiz she cloud say that she love you but only can pray that it is from heavein and thoe you would know if her love is realy real or is it not of him and will you only know then gee wiz you make me smlie the way you do the things you do due you make me feal like a river flowing so deep and so wide you make me whant to say gee wiz look at his eye's and see if you are realy real gee wiz gee wiz can i tell him how much i raly due need him in so many ways that i cant loes it now or for ever more all she can say is gee wiz how much more due i need to know or you but all she can say is gee wiz how much doe she love you so gee wiz it would knot matter any ways you would knot blieve or even have heart to under stand so all she can say is gee wiz how much does she love that fella so gee wiz only if he would know gee wiz . oh ok i dont care oh ok loves peace and love. colleen | |
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I got no words ... as in ... it does something, but I don't really know what and then ... the crappy spelling ruins it 
But it's worth working on some more 
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I love cheese whiz. Studies have shown the ass crack of the average Prince fan to be abnormally large. This explains the ease and frequency of their panties bunching up in it. |
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moderatorMars23 said: I love cheese whiz.
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One4All4Ever said: I got no words ... as in ... it does something, but I don't really know what and then ... the crappy spelling ruins it
But it's worth working on some more
I find it so hard to read, so I took out the gee whizzes: gee whiz look at his eyes, how does he be so blind she cloud say that she love you but only can pray that it is from heaven and though you would know if her love is really real or is it not of him and will you only know then you make me smile the way you do the things you do do you make me feel like a river flowing so deep and so wide you make me want to say look at his eyes and see if you are really real can I tell him how much I really due need him in so many ways that I can’t lose it now or for ever more all she can say is how much more do I need to know or you but all she can say is how much does she love you so it would not matter anyway you would not believe or even have heart to understand so all she can say is how much does she love that fella so only if he would know oh ok i dont care oh ok loves peace and love. colleen | |
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Here's one of mine 
Gee whiz a sudden blow, the great wings beating still. Above the staggering girl, her thighs caressed. By the dark webs, gee wiz, her nape caught in his bill, he holds her helpless breast upon his breast. Gee wiz, gee wiz, how can those terrified vague fingers push the feathered glory from her loosening thighs? And how can body, laid in that white gee wiz rush, but feel the strange heart beating where it lies? Gee wiz, a shudder in the loins engenders there. The broken wall, the burning roof, the gee wiz and tower. And Agamemnon dead. Being so caught up, so mastered by the brute blood of the air, gee wiz, did she put on his knowledge with his power before the indifferent beak could let her drop? Gee wiz. | |
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fhqwhgads said: Here's one of mine
Gee whiz a sudden blow, the great wings beating still. Above the staggering girl, her thighs caressed. By the dark webs, gee wiz, her nape caught in his bill, he holds her helpless breast upon his breast. Gee wiz, gee wiz, how can those terrified vague fingers push the feathered glory from her loosening thighs? And how can body, laid in that white gee wiz rush, but feel the strange heart beating where it lies? Gee wiz, a shudder in the loins engenders there. The broken wall, the burning roof, the gee wiz and tower. And Agamemnon dead. Being so caught up, so mastered by the brute blood of the air, gee wiz, did she put on his knowledge with his power before the indifferent beak could let her drop? Gee wiz. is this about a vulture? | |
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ZombieKitten said: fhqwhgads said: Here's one of mine
Gee whiz a sudden blow, the great wings beating still. Above the staggering girl, her thighs caressed. By the dark webs, gee wiz, her nape caught in his bill, he holds her helpless breast upon his breast. Gee wiz, gee wiz, how can those terrified vague fingers push the feathered glory from her loosening thighs? And how can body, laid in that white gee wiz rush, but feel the strange heart beating where it lies? Gee wiz, a shudder in the loins engenders there. The broken wall, the burning roof, the gee wiz and tower. And Agamemnon dead. Being so caught up, so mastered by the brute blood of the air, gee wiz, did she put on his knowledge with his power before the indifferent beak could let her drop? Gee wiz. is this about a vulture? It's Leda and The Swan by Yeats, but I added some gee wiz to it. I think it takes it to a whole other level, which is why I claimed it as my own. | |
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fhqwhgads said: ZombieKitten said: is this about a vulture? It's Leda and The Swan by Yeats, but I added some gee wiz to it. I think it takes it to a whole other level, which is why I claimed it as my own. sounds more like a nasty old buzzard than a swan  | |
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ZombieKitten said: fhqwhgads said: It's Leda and The Swan by Yeats, but I added some gee wiz to it. I think it takes it to a whole other level, which is why I claimed it as my own. sounds more like a nasty old buzzard than a swan | |
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