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Thread started 12/17/07 7:50pm

baroque

stream of consciousness.: the org story!

In literary criticism, stream of consciousness is a literary technique that seeks to portray an individual's point of view by giving the written equivalent of the character's thought processes, either in a loose interior monologue, or in connection to his or her sensory reactions to external occurrences. Stream-of-consciousness writing is strongly associated with the modernist movement. The introduction of the term to describe literature, transferred from psychology, is attributed to May Sinclair.

so with that said..
let's create our own stream of consciousness story, i'll end it then someone else has to had more detail into the store.
you'll be surprise what you have stored..here we go.

"once in the randomly existed universe, a diverse and somewhat obscure reality did unfold. legions of nameless faces did thread in a procession known as conformity. slowly walking in a drone-like tone. thoughts exploded in their minds like rain droplets. from afar the building there did lie a girl watching all of this. she did want to escape the drear from the dreary. so she ran down the beige colored stairs. open the door, and ran as lighting and scarecrows said ,"hello". perplexed by this the girl, ran into the mire to see herself in the reflection of desire. unaware of such thought, she ran back into the procession. unaware of reality, the girl then walked like a prose poem, lifeless, limitless, and lethargic. at the palace, where men and women gave their souls for objects, the voiceless agressive voice did spew biased ideas! she turned the door and..."

this where you take the story..

type without care, whatever is in your mind. do not correct yourself, even if does make sense. the point is see how much you can rid of your sub-conscious mind.
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[Edited 12/17/07 23:02pm]
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Reply #1 posted 12/17/07 7:58pm

baroque

i posted this in the wrong forum, would a mod be lamb enough to send into the general section.
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Reply #2 posted 12/17/07 7:59pm

baroque

baroque said:

i posted this in the wrong forum, would a mod be lamb enough to send into the general section.



never mind resposted in the general section..erase this then please..sorry once again for my mistake.
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Reply #3 posted 12/17/07 8:14pm

Whitnail

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baroque said:

In literary criticism, stream of consciousness is a literary technique that seeks to portray an individual's point of view by giving the written equivalent of the character's thought processes, either in a loose interior monologue, or in connection to his or her sensory reactions to external occurrences. Stream-of-consciousness writing is strongly associated with the modernist movement. The introduction of the term to describe literature, transferred from psychology, is attributed to May Sinclair.

so with that said..
let's create our own stream of consciousness story, i'll end it then someone else has to had more detail into the store.
you'll be surprise what you have stored..here we go.

"once in the randomly existed universe, a diverse and somewhat obscure reality did unfold. legions of nameless faces did thread in a procession known as conformity. slowly walking in a drone-like tone. thoughts exploded in their minds like rain droplets. from afar the building there did lie a girl watching all of this. she did want to escape the drear from the dreary. so she ran down the beige colored stairs. open the door, and ran as lighting and scarecrows said ,"hello". perplexed by this the girl, ran into the mire to see herself in the reflection of desire. unaware of such thought, she ran back into the procession. unaware of reality, the girl then walked like a prose poem, lifeless, limitless, and lethargic. at the palace, where men and women gave their souls for objects, the voiceless agressive voice did spew biased ideas! she turned the door and..."

this where you take the story..

remember type with care, whatever is in your mind. do not correct yourself, even if does make sense. the point is see how much you can rid of your sub-conscious mind.
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as you have used this word, no one has a clue what you are on about but

she turned the door and..."

faced into an empty room, full of people she knew from a time when she would walk through doors unforgiving of the past, this lead her down a path which she realised was going over to where she had begun, a voice called and she blushed as....."
If it were not for insanity, I would be sane.

"True to his status as the last enigma in music, Prince crashed into London this week in a ball of confusion" The Times 2014
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Reply #4 posted 12/17/07 11:02pm

baroque

i give up this thread it was a flop.
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Reply #5 posted 12/17/07 11:05pm

KidaDynamite

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baroque said:

i give up this thread was a flop.


stoned
surviving on the thought of loving you, it's just like the water
I ain't felt this way in years...
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Reply #6 posted 12/17/07 11:52pm

Fauxie

The thread in self is not a failure though. Only the content. Now you have a choice to either come up with a good idea, or let the thread die. smile

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Reply #7 posted 12/17/07 11:58pm

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Fauxie said:

The thread in self is not a failure though. Only the content. Now you have a choice to either come up with a good idea, or let the thread die. smile

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I thought the concept had merit! shrug
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Reply #8 posted 12/18/07 12:04am

Fauxie

Muse2NOPharaoh said:

Fauxie said:

The thread in self is not a failure though. Only the content. Now you have a choice to either come up with a good idea, or let the thread die. smile

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I thought the concept had merit! shrug


The org story concept definitely does. It's worked before and it'll work again. The content is just too highbrow. If they had Imago come in and edit, substitute in the odd 'ass' here, a 'lips around my penis there, it could still be a success.
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Reply #9 posted 12/18/07 12:27am

Christopher

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Fauxie said:

Muse2NOPharaoh said:


I thought the concept had merit! shrug


The org story concept definitely does. It's worked before and it'll work again. The content is just too highbrow. If they had Imago come in and edit, substitute in the odd 'ass' here, a 'lips around my penis there, it could still be a success.

ok this is kinda like the prince fiction threads? i can totally do this!
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Reply #10 posted 12/18/07 12:29am

Fauxie

Christopher said:

Fauxie said:



The org story concept definitely does. It's worked before and it'll work again. The content is just too highbrow. If they had Imago come in and edit, substitute in the odd 'ass' here, a 'lips around my penis there, it could still be a success.

ok this is kinda like the prince fiction threads? i can totally do this!


Exactly! That's the spirit. Baroque gave the inspiration, now let's put some flesh on the bones of the idea and turn it into a winner! woot!
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Reply #11 posted 12/18/07 12:44am

Christopher

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baroque said:



"once in the randomly existed universe, a diverse and somewhat obscure reality did unfold. legions of nameless faces did thread in a procession known as conformity. slowly walking in a drone-like tone. thoughts exploded in their minds like rain droplets. from afar the building there did lie a girl watching all of this. she did want to escape the drear from the dreary. so she ran down the beige colored stairs. open the door, and ran as lighting and scarecrows said ,"hello". perplexed by this the girl, ran into the mire to see herself in the reflection of desire. unaware of such thought, she ran back into the procession. unaware of reality, the girl then walked like a prose poem, lifeless, limitless, and lethargic. at the palace, where men and women gave their souls for objects, the voiceless agressive voice did spew biased ideas! she turned the door and..."



ended up in new york.no money no shoes but with her soul.obviously she wanted to eat but alas she had no money...prosittution? i think not.selling her soul for a bowl is not what she had in mind.she then flew to mars and found out she was one of the chosen few lead back home.but not in that outfit....she had to strip naked and bare her soul in a poem about flowing rivers and giant men only known in fables.she told of tales far and near scary and sincere.why this is all rhyming is beyond me....she goes on
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Reply #12 posted 12/18/07 12:44am

Christopher

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omg baroque better come back! neutral
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Reply #13 posted 12/18/07 1:09am

Fauxie

You're right. I was only here to encourage, not to participate. I don't believe in it that much.
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Reply #14 posted 12/18/07 1:40am

Christopher

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Fauxie said:

You're right. I was only here to encourage, not to participate. I don't believe in it that much.

lol neutral

hes right this thread was a miss disbelief
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Reply #15 posted 12/18/07 3:58am

roodboi

how many "We Are All Gay" threads can there be at one time??
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Reply #16 posted 12/18/07 9:13am

baroque

Christopher said:

omg baroque better come back! neutral



lol sorry i feel asleep, thank you for helping me out!

perhaps next time, my thread will rule! now that i know that the org sense of humor. which is that of a high school student!

in all regards, thank you once again christopher.

with you love,

baroque!
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Reply #17 posted 12/18/07 9:49am

HamsterHuey

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how many "We Are All Gay" threads can there be at one time??


There can be only one, you cunty. Two-faced dog, slightly hornying me up on that thread, then dissing me here. Fucking straightjacket.
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Reply #18 posted 12/18/07 9:54am

roodboi

HamsterHuey said:

roodboi said:

how many "We Are All Gay" threads can there be at one time??


There can be only one, you cunty. Two-faced dog, slightly hornying me up on that thread, then dissing me here. Fucking straightjacket.



no dissing intended....this was obviously a cheap knock off...just sayin'...
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Reply #19 posted 12/18/07 1:01pm

horatio

baroque said:

Christopher said:

omg baroque better come back! neutral



lol sorry i feel asleep, thank you for helping me out!

perhaps next time, my thread will rule! now that i know that the org sense of humor. which is that of a high school student!

in all regards, thank you once again christopher.

with you love,

baroque!



the thread was off to a good start until it came to this point rolleyes
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Reply #20 posted 12/18/07 1:08pm

baroque

horatio said:

baroque said:




lol sorry i feel asleep, thank you for helping me out!

perhaps next time, my thread will rule! now that i know that the org sense of humor. which is that of a high school student!

in all regards, thank you once again christopher.

with you love,

baroque!



the thread was off to a good start until it came to this point rolleyes



the epitome of the org sense of humor, has shown IT'S Face.
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Reply #21 posted 12/18/07 1:17pm

horatio

baroque said:

horatio said:




the thread was off to a good start until it came to this point rolleyes



the epitome of the org sense of humor, has shown IT'S Face.


really.
comfort
woe is the life barqoue leads on the org being of much more refinement and intelligence than all its subjects combined.
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Reply #22 posted 12/18/07 1:27pm

baroque

horatio said:

baroque said:




the epitome of the org sense of humor, has shown IT'S Face.


really.
comfort
woe is the life barqoue leads on the org being of much more refinement and intelligence than all its subjects combined.



was i kidding..drama..q..
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Reply #23 posted 12/18/07 5:08pm

Fauxie

OH MY GOD THIS THREAD IS SHIT!
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Reply #24 posted 12/18/07 7:11pm

baroque

Fauxie said:

OH MY GOD THIS THREAD IS SHIT!



why do you attack me!

i have seen stupider thread, when i post something it always looked at very negative.
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Reply #25 posted 12/18/07 7:26pm

Fauxie

baroque said:

Fauxie said:

OH MY GOD THIS THREAD IS SHIT!



why do you attack me!

i have seen stupider thread, when i post something it always looked at very negative.


lol

I'm sorry.

It's not your fault. comfort
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Reply #26 posted 12/18/07 7:27pm

JustErin

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Awww...I was kinda hoping that this was another orger saying they had a dream with me in it.

What a let down. confused
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Reply #27 posted 12/18/07 7:30pm

Fauxie

JustErin said:

Awww...I was kinda hoping that this was another orger saying they had a dream with me in it.

What a let down. confused


comfort

:choke:

How's things?
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Reply #28 posted 12/18/07 8:06pm

JustErin

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Fauxie said:

JustErin said:

Awww...I was kinda hoping that this was another orger saying they had a dream with me in it.

What a let down. confused


comfort

:choke:

How's things?


Things are ok.

Last night I dreamed that I was a seat filler at the Oscars, front row. Some producer saw me and two other girls hanging out in the hall and asked us to do it for them. This dirty old man beside me wouldn't leave me alone. I remember thinking to myself, "Wtf am I doing here? Is this what my life has come to?".

I also remember saying to the girl beside me (another seat filler), "We all look exactly the same" cuz we all had our dark hair up the same way and had on similar dresses and even kinda looked alike.


shrug
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Reply #29 posted 12/18/07 8:27pm

Fauxie

JustErin said:

Fauxie said:



comfort

:choke:

How's things?


Things are ok.

Last night I dreamed that I was a seat filler at the Oscars, front row. Some producer saw me and two other girls hanging out in the hall and asked us to do it for them. This dirty old man beside me wouldn't leave me alone. I remember thinking to myself, "Wtf am I doing here? Is this what my life has come to?".

I also remember saying to the girl beside me (another seat filler), "We all look exactly the same" cuz we all had our dark hair up the same way and had on similar dresses and even kinda looked alike.


shrug


Wow, that's pretty vivid. Last night I dreamed I was at Mon's sister's wedding in Hawaii. My brain started wandering off during the ceremony thinking about what a half Thai half Hawaiian girl would look like. I woke up and felt quite upset that I hadn't managed to fully realise the image of that before I awoke. Then I felt a bit guilty. lol

Give my regards to your hair. hug
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