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Reply #90 posted 12/14/07 3:41pm

One4All4Ever

sammij said:

One4All4Ever said:



excited

52/52 baby !!!

omg already?
lol i gots some work to do!


falloff

not yet, but if these people keep inspiring me ... it won't take 2 long tease
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Reply #91 posted 12/14/07 3:44pm

MoniGram

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One4All4Ever said:

Whateva said:

there ones was a boy named Alf
who couldn't keep it to himself
he gave it to whateva
she took it and said never
could I have so much pleasure by myself


redface giggle


Girl needs hands around her waist
a guide to shine a light
to lead her through the winterland
to warm her up at night
Fingers run through fairy hair
run down her curved back
hold her shoulders
pull her near
ready for attack
2 moons ago she would say neva
now she closes her eyes
is this a dream or is it real
she don't care, whateva

tease

yay! for 5-minute poetry ...
[Edited 12/14/07 15:35pm]



Beautiful!!!!!
Proud Memaw to Seyhan Olivia Christine ,Zoey Cirilo Jaylee & Ellie Abigail Lillian mushy
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Reply #92 posted 12/14/07 3:45pm

One4All4Ever

Whateva said:

there ones was a boy named Alf
who couldn't keep it to himself
he gave it to whateva
she took it and said never
could I have so much pleasure by myself


redface giggle


doh!
[Edited 12/14/07 15:45pm]
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Reply #93 posted 12/14/07 3:46pm

sammij

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boy you better be forwarding me this stuff as you go along! i need to create an archive! eek (to work with, of course tease )
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #94 posted 12/14/07 3:48pm

rushing07

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HamsterHuey said:

Teach me
Teach me how to teach myself
Hold me
Hold me I can’t hold myself
And when I’m able
Throw me back into the pool
Throw me back into the pool
Throw me back
Into…

Make me
Make me turn around again
Force me
Force me to open up again
And when I do
Throw me back into the pool
Throw me back into the pool
Throw me back
Into…

Inside The Pool
Warmth surrounds me
Inside The Pool
Safety allows me
To get undone
I get undone


The first two stanzas are remarkable.
A bit creepy too cuz that's kinda what
I've always wanted to say to my father.
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #95 posted 12/14/07 4:08pm

One4All4Ever

my twin sons turn 4 next week ...

2 angels
lighten up my days
give purpose to my life
I thank you two for all you give
you make me feel alive
4 years, and I am honoured
that I may be there for you
4 years, and I feel blessed
I love you both, I do
With all my heart
With all my soul
With everything I own
I'm proud of you
I'm there for you
I want it to be known
Unconditionally
I am
your dad
heart
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Reply #96 posted 12/14/07 4:18pm

rushing07

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One4All4Ever said:

my twin sons turn 4 next week ...

2 angels
lighten up my days
give purpose to my life
I thank you two for all you give
you make me feel alive
4 years, and I am honoured
that I may be there for you
4 years, and I feel blessed
I love you both, I do
With all my heart
With all my soul
With everything I own
I'm proud of you
I'm there for you
I want it to be known
Unconditionally
I am
your dad
heart


Awww, touched

there's so gonna laugh at this when they turn 15.
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #97 posted 12/14/07 4:19pm

One4All4Ever

rushing07 said:

One4All4Ever said:

my twin sons turn 4 next week ...

2 angels
lighten up my days
give purpose to my life
I thank you two for all you give
you make me feel alive
4 years, and I am honoured
that I may be there for you
4 years, and I feel blessed
I love you both, I do
With all my heart
With all my soul
With everything I own
I'm proud of you
I'm there for you
I want it to be known
Unconditionally
I am
your dad
heart


Awww, touched

there's so gonna laugh at this when they turn 15.


mad
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Reply #98 posted 12/14/07 4:22pm

rushing07

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One4All4Ever said:

rushing07 said:



Awww, touched

there's so gonna laugh at this when they turn 15.


mad


Believe me.

When I was 8 my brother was born so I decided to write a poem for my little bro. It was so sweet, so genuine, so loving - and it rhymed!!!

Right now every time my brother celebrated his birthday, the whole family recites the poem laughing their guts off. confused
[Edited 12/14/07 16:23pm]
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #99 posted 12/14/07 4:25pm

Muse2NOPharaoh

FarrahMoan said:

Muse2NOPharaoh said:

No!


Boobs.

I meant no poem not no boobs.... What do I care what Cloudbuster, 9'sy, Imago and Farrahmoan are doing?
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Reply #100 posted 12/14/07 4:27pm

rushing07

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Muse2NOPharaoh said:

FarrahMoan said:



Boobs.

I meant no poem not no boobs.... What do I care what Cloudbuster, 9'sy, Imago and Farrahmoan are doing?


Boobs?
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #101 posted 12/14/07 4:30pm

DiminutiveRock
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Last two stannzas of William Wordsworth's.
Ode Intimations of Immortality from Recollections of Early Childhood

Then sing, ye birds, sing, sing a joyous song!
And let the young lambs bound
As to the tabor's sound! 175
We in thought will join your throng,
Ye that pipe and ye that play,
Ye that through your hearts to-day
Feel the gladness of the May!
What though the radiance which was once so bright 180
Be now for ever taken from my sight,
Though nothing can bring back the hour
Of splendour in the grass, of glory in the flower;
We will grieve not, rather find
Strength in what remains behind; 185
In the primal sympathy
Which having been must ever be;
In the soothing thoughts that spring
Out of human suffering;
In the faith that looks through death, 190
In years that bring the philosophic mind.

And O ye Fountains, Meadows, Hills, and Groves,
Forebode not any severing of our loves!
Yet in my heart of hearts I feel your might;
I only have relinquish'd one delight 195
To live beneath your more habitual sway.
I love the brooks which down their channels fret,
Even more than when I tripp'd lightly as they;
The innocent brightness of a new-born Day
Is lovely yet; 200
The clouds that gather round the setting sun
Do take a sober colouring from an eye
That hath kept watch o'er man's mortality;
Another race hath been, and other palms are won.
Thanks to the human heart by which we live, 205
Thanks to its tenderness, its joys, and fears,
To me the meanest flower that blows can give
Thoughts that do often lie too deep for tears.
VOTE....EARLY
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Reply #102 posted 12/14/07 4:31pm

Muse2NOPharaoh

rushing07 said:

Muse2NOPharaoh said:


I meant no poem not no boobs.... What do I care what Cloudbuster, 9'sy, Imago and Farrahmoan are doing?


Boobs?

Speaking of boobs...

mad I knew I left one out! hammer
[Edited 12/14/07 16:32pm]
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Reply #103 posted 12/14/07 4:36pm

MoniGram

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One4All4Ever said:

my twin sons turn 4 next week ...

2 angels
lighten up my days
give purpose to my life
I thank you two for all you give
you make me feel alive
4 years, and I am honoured
that I may be there for you
4 years, and I feel blessed
I love you both, I do
With all my heart
With all my soul
With everything I own
I'm proud of you
I'm there for you
I want it to be known
Unconditionally
I am
your dad
heart



mushy
Proud Memaw to Seyhan Olivia Christine ,Zoey Cirilo Jaylee & Ellie Abigail Lillian mushy
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Reply #104 posted 12/14/07 4:39pm

rushing07

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Muse2NOPharaoh said:

rushing07 said:



Boobs?

Speaking of boobs...

mad I knew I left one out! hammer
[Edited 12/14/07 16:32pm]


lol

here's a poem by Charles Ducal

Muse

If she could just settle like silt,
digest in me like unconscious food,
be forgotten like a poem
from my youth. I most want to cherish
something of hers, a shirt or a report card
to demonstrate her part of me,
but not this body that grows sick,
this somber asylum where she keeps knitting
on masterpieces that I must write,
she, the madwoman in my head and my stomach,
who wanders around in me, scratching and biting,
the handmaiden of the Lord, who bore me.

[Edited 12/14/07 16:39pm]
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #105 posted 12/14/07 4:52pm

One4All4Ever

the sun plays hide and seek
behind the racing clouds
the wind plays through my hair
the traffic is too loud
I don't want to be alone
I want to be just me
In her warm embrace
Is where I want to be
make me tremble
caress my thoughts
make me whole tonight
make me shake
make me cry
hold me really tight
blow out that candle
close your eyes
let this be our night

heart
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Reply #106 posted 12/14/07 5:12pm

sammij

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One4All4Ever said:

the sun plays hide and seek
behind the racing clouds
the wind plays through my hair
the traffic is too loud
I don't want to be alone
I want to be just me
In her warm embrace
Is where I want to be
make me tremble
caress my thoughts
make me whole tonight
make me shake
make me cry
hold me really tight
blow out that candle
close your eyes
let this be our night

heart

you've got more to forward to me! no no no!
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #107 posted 12/14/07 5:23pm

veronikka

MoniGram said:

One4All4Ever said:

my twin sons turn 4 next week ...

2 angels
lighten up my days
give purpose to my life
I thank you two for all you give
you make me feel alive
4 years, and I am honoured
that I may be there for you
4 years, and I feel blessed
I love you both, I do
With all my heart
With all my soul
With everything I own
I'm proud of you
I'm there for you
I want it to be known
Unconditionally
I am
your dad
heart



mushy


Very cute mushy
Rhythm floods my heart♥The melody it feeds my soul
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Reply #108 posted 12/14/07 5:25pm

EverSoulicious

One4All4Ever said:

the sun plays hide and seek
behind the racing clouds
the wind plays through my hair
the traffic is too loud
I don't want to be alone
I want to be just me
In her warm embrace
Is where I want to be
make me tremble
caress my thoughts
make me whole tonight
make me shake
make me cry
hold me really tight
blow out that candle
close your eyes
let this be our night

heart
awwww that is amazing mushy
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Reply #109 posted 12/14/07 5:25pm

Imago



Twisted like a towel
ringed dry by roughened hands,
Deflated like a Halloween balloon,
approaching the end of November,

Exhausted by vampires,
who suck me off for their own ends,
Inflating themselves with my sacrifices,
The last time I felt the healing massage
of unselfish hands, I can’t remember,

Perhaps, I’m a man defeated,
unable to weed out foe or friend,
For I so willingly allow you to disect me,
Me, the great facade, the pathetic pretender,
Finally find cause to drop all pretense and surrender.

And if you mean to hurt or do me harm,
If you chose to break my heart or twist my arms,
I stand here before you now disarmed,
A broken frame defeated by the weaponry of your charms.


--Imago, written 2 minutes ago falloff

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Reply #110 posted 12/14/07 5:36pm

One4All4Ever

Imago said:



Twisted like a towel
ringed dry by roughened hands,
Deflated like a Halloween balloon,
approaching the end of November,

Exhausted by vampires,
who suck me off for their own ends,
Inflating themselves with my sacrifices,
The last time I felt the healing massage
of unselfish hands, I can’t remember,

Perhaps, I’m a man defeated,
unable to weed out foe or friend,
For I so willingly allow you to disect me,
Me, the great facade, the pathetic pretender,
Finally find cause to drop all pretense and surrender.

And if you mean to hurt or do me harm,
If you chose to break my heart or twist my arms,
I stand here before you now disarmed,
A broken frame defeated by the weaponry of your charms.


--Imago, written 2 minutes ago falloff

[Edited 12/14/07 17:36pm]


thumbs up!
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Reply #111 posted 12/14/07 5:40pm

Imago

One4All4Ever said:

Imago said:



Twisted like a towel
ringed dry by roughened hands,
Deflated like a Halloween balloon,
approaching the end of November,

Exhausted by vampires,
who suck me off for their own ends,
Inflating themselves with my sacrifices,
The last time I felt the healing massage
of unselfish hands, I can’t remember,

Perhaps, I’m a man defeated,
unable to weed out foe or friend,
For I so willingly allow you to disect me,
Me, the great facade, the pathetic pretender,
Finally find cause to drop all pretense and surrender.

And if you mean to hurt or do me harm,
If you chose to break my heart or twist my arms,
I stand here before you now disarmed,
A broken frame defeated by the weaponry of your charms.


--Imago, written 2 minutes ago falloff

[Edited 12/14/07 17:36pm]


thumbs up!



Bend me over. We need to get this thing done quick. I gotta run to Starbucks soon,

ky boff
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Reply #112 posted 12/14/07 5:49pm

One4All4Ever

Imago said:

One4All4Ever said:



thumbs up!



Bend me over. We need to get this thing done quick. I gotta run to Starbucks soon,

ky boff


I let the towel slip
careful, calculated
I throw me at your feet
in love, infatuated
the love you make to me
is a beatiful rendition
of red and blue and gold
it'll take us to perdition
but first we break the mold
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Reply #113 posted 12/14/07 5:50pm

RodeoSchro

Roses are red
Violets are blue
Fuck
I will be here all night doing my 2008 business plan
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Reply #114 posted 12/14/07 5:53pm

Imago

One4All4Ever said:

Imago said:




Bend me over. We need to get this thing done quick. I gotta run to Starbucks soon,

ky boff


I let the towel slip
careful, calculated
I throw me at your feet
in love, infatuated
the love you make to me
is a beatiful rendition
of red and blue and gold
it'll take us to perdition
but first we break the mold



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Reply #115 posted 12/14/07 5:54pm

One4All4Ever

Imago said:

One4All4Ever said:



I let the towel slip
careful, calculated
I throw me at your feet
in love, infatuated
the love you make to me
is a beatiful rendition
of red and blue and gold
it'll take us to perdition
but first we break the mold


wow ... you used that gif 2 times in under a minute falloff

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Reply #116 posted 12/14/07 5:57pm

sammij

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roses are red
daisies may be yellah
DAMN I CANT HANDLE THAT SHORT PURPLE FELLAH


falloff that gif is fucking KILLING me falloff bawl falloff
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #117 posted 12/14/07 5:58pm

rushing07

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sammij said:

roses are red
daisies may be yellah
DAMN I CANT HANDLE THAT SHORT PURPLE FELLAH


falloff that gif is fucking KILLING me falloff bawl falloff


Me 2. lol
I want it tattooed on my ass.
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #118 posted 12/14/07 6:00pm

Imago

rushing07 said:

sammij said:

roses are red
daisies may be yellah
DAMN I CANT HANDLE THAT SHORT PURPLE FELLAH


falloff that gif is fucking KILLING me falloff bawl falloff


Me 2. lol
I want it tattooed on my ass.



:frantically-searches-cregs-list-for-tattoo-novice-job-positions:
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Reply #119 posted 12/14/07 6:00pm

RodeoSchro

rushing07 said:

Me 2. lol
I want it tattooed on my ass.


What did one chair say to the other?

"Dammit, here comes another asshole."
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