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Reply #30 posted 12/13/07 7:13pm

DanceWme

Imago said:

DanceWme said:



that shit is going on the shelf with the other christmas cards.falloff
u should've sent me a wallet size falloff


falloff



There's always Valentines day! woot!

oh God falloff




i got u!
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Reply #31 posted 12/13/07 7:13pm

GangstaFam

A Lover's Call XXVII

Where are you, my beloved? Are you in that little
Paradise, watering the flowers who look upon you
As infants look upon the breast of their mothers?

Or are you in your chamber where the shrine of
Virtue has been placed in your honor, and upon
Which you offer my heart and soul as sacrifice?

Or amongst the books, seeking human knowledge,
While you are replete with heavenly wisdom?

Oh companion of my soul, where are you? Are you
Praying in the temple? Or calling Nature in the
Field, haven of your dreams?

Are you in the huts of the poor, consoling the
Broken-hearted with the sweetness of your soul, and
Filling their hands with your bounty?

You are God's spirit everywhere;
You are stronger than the ages.

Do you have memory of the day we met, when the halo of
You spirit surrounded us, and the Angels of Love
Floated about, singing the praise of the soul's deed?

Do you recollect our sitting in the shade of the
Branches, sheltering ourselves from Humanity, as the ribs
Protect the divine secret of the heart from injury?

Remember you the trails and forest we walked, with hands
Joined, and our heads leaning against each other, as if
We were hiding ourselves within ourselves?

Recall you the hour I bade you farewell,
And the Miriamite kiss you placed on my lips?
That kiss taught me that joining of lips in Love
Reveals heavenly secrets which the tongue cannot utter!

That kiss was introduction to a great sigh,
Like the Almighty's breath that turned earth into man.

That sigh led my way into the spiritual world,
Announcing the glory of my soul; and there
It shall perpetuate until again we meet.

I remember when you kissed me and kissed me,
With tears coursing your cheeks, and you said,
"Earthly bodies must often separate for earthly purpose,
And must live apart impelled by worldly intent.

"But the spirit remains joined safely in the hands of
Love, until death arrives and takes joined souls to God.

"Go, my beloved; Love has chosen you her delegate;
Over her, for she is Beauty who offers to her follower
The cup of the sweetness of life.
As for my own empty arms, your love shall remain my
Comforting groom; your memory, my Eternal wedding."

Where are you now, my other self? Are you awake in
The silence of the night? Let the clean breeze convey
To you my heart's every beat and affection.

Are you fondling my face in your memory? That image
Is no longer my own, for Sorrow has dropped his
Shadow on my happy countenance of the past.

Sobs have withered my eyes which reflected your beauty
And dried my lips which you sweetened with kisses.

Where are you, my beloved? Do you hear my weeping
From beyond the ocean? Do you understand my need?
Do you know the greatness of my patience?

Is there any spirit in the air capable of conveying
To you the breath of this dying youth? Is there any
Secret communication between angels that will carry to
You my complaint?

Where are you, my beautiful star? The obscurity of life
Has cast me upon its bosom; sorrow has conquered me.

Sail your smile into the air; it will reach and enliven me!
Breathe your fragrance into the air; it will sustain me!

Where are you, me beloved?
Oh, how great is Love!
And how little am I!
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Reply #32 posted 12/13/07 7:15pm

evenstar

Between going and staying the day wavers,
in love with its own transparency.
The circular afternoon is now a bay
where the world in stillness rocks.

All is visible and all elusive,
all is near and can't be touched.

Paper, book, pencil, glass,
rest in the shade of their names.

Time throbbing in my temples repeats
the same unchanging syllable of blood.

The light turns the indifferent wall
into a ghostly theater of reflections.

I find myself in the middle of an eye,
watching myself in its blank stare.

The moment scatters. Motionless,
I stay and go: I am a pause.

--Octavio Paz
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Reply #33 posted 12/13/07 7:15pm

Sweeny79

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An Eastern Ballad


I speak of love that comes to mind:
The moon is faithful, although blind;
She moves in thought she cannot speak.
Perfect care has made her bleak.

I never dreamed the sea so deep,
The earth so dark; so long my sleep,
I have become another child.
I wake to see the world go wild.

Allen Ginsberg
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Reply #34 posted 12/13/07 7:18pm

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Suicide's Note


The calm,
Cool face of the river
Asked me for a kiss.

Langston Hughes
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Reply #35 posted 12/13/07 7:20pm

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Expect Nothing


Expect nothing. Live frugally
On surprise.
become a stranger
To need of pity
Or, if compassion be freely
Given out
Take only enough
Stop short of urge to plead
Then purge away the need.

Wish for nothing larger
Than your own small heart
Or greater than a star;
Tame wild disappointment
With caress unmoved and cold
Make of it a parka
For your soul.

Discover the reason why
So tiny human midget
Exists at all
So scared unwise
But expect nothing. Live frugally
On surprise.


Alice Walker
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Reply #36 posted 12/13/07 7:22pm

rushing07

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Grow

Danny -

When I see your name in a thread
When I hear your voice in my head
When I read your words - oh so wise
When of you I fantasize

I grow
My underwear don't fit me no more

[Edited 12/13/07 19:27pm]
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #37 posted 12/13/07 7:24pm

MoniGram

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Read my profile..I have a great poem..written by Willy Wonka on there. biggrin
Proud Memaw to Seyhan Olivia Christine ,Zoey Cirilo Jaylee & Ellie Abigail Lillian mushy
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Reply #38 posted 12/13/07 7:26pm

rushing07

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IT'S RAINING IN LOVE
by Richard Brautigan

I don't know what it is,
But I distrust myself
When I start to like a girl
A lot.

It makes me nervous.
I don't say the right things
Or perhaps I start
To examine,
Evaluate,
Compute
What I am saying.

If I say, "Do you think it's going to rain?"
and she says, "I don't know,"
I start thinking: Does she really like me?

In other words
I get a little creepy.

A friend of mine once said,
"It's twenty times better to be friends
with someone
than it is to be in love with them."

I think he's right and besides,
its raining somewhere, programming flowers
and keeping snails happy.
That's all taken care of.

BUT
if a girl likes me a lot
and starts getting real nervous
and suddenly begins asking me funny questions
and looks sad if I give the wrong answers
and she says things like,
"Do you think it's going to rain?"
and I say, "It beats me,"
and she says, "Oh,"
and looks a little sad
at the clear blue California sky,
I think: Thank God, it's you, baby, this time
Instead of me.

[Edited 12/13/07 19:27pm]
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #39 posted 12/13/07 7:29pm

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Too long to post

but this is my favorite poem ever mushy

The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock ~ T.S. Eliot


http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html
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Reply #40 posted 12/13/07 7:35pm

rushing07

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Sweeny79 said:

Too long to post

but this is my favorite poem ever mushy

The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock ~ T.S. Eliot


http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html


Sweet Jesus.
I hate every word of it. lol

Almost as much as THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL by William Blake
[Edited 12/13/07 19:36pm]
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #41 posted 12/13/07 7:36pm

Imago

rushing07 said:

Grow

Danny -

When I see your name in a thread
When I hear your voice in my head
When I read your words - oh so wise
When of you I fantasize

I grow
My underwear don't fit me no more

[Edited 12/13/07 19:27pm]

falloff

It's perfect. I love it. Putting it in my profile.
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Reply #42 posted 12/13/07 7:37pm

Sweeny79

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rushing07 said:

Sweeny79 said:

Too long to post

but this is my favorite poem ever mushy

The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock ~ T.S. Eliot


http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html


Sweet Jesus.
I hate every word of it. lol

Almost as much as THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL by William Blake
[Edited 12/13/07 19:36pm]



lol

I relate to every word of that poem!


I hate Wordsworth, I feel bad for it though. Seems some people think I'm commiting a sin by not reading him.
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Reply #43 posted 12/13/07 7:42pm

rushing07

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Imago said:

rushing07 said:

Grow

Danny -

When I see your name in a thread
When I hear your voice in my head
When I read your words - oh so wise
When of you I fantasize

I grow
My underwear don't fit me no more

[Edited 12/13/07 19:27pm]

falloff

It's perfect. I love it. Putting it in my profile.


kisses

I've got two of your poems in my profile mushy
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #44 posted 12/13/07 7:42pm

baroque

here something i'm working on..


ode to federico garcia lorca

i am seduced by spanish ardor
seduce by spanish wisdom.
he strums the chords of my imagination.
plays a whimsical note like passion-filed guitarist.

i am seducde by spanish ardor
his words intertwine passion and beauty
like metal and fire,
they form a sword who's sublime
message penetrates clearly.

its not done..i can't get pass these two stanzas..and i am aware of some grammar errors.

does make sense, two contradicting imagines.. still working on it.give me feedback?
[Edited 12/13/07 19:49pm]
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Reply #45 posted 12/13/07 7:47pm

evenstar

rushing07 said:

Sweeny79 said:

Too long to post

but this is my favorite poem ever mushy

The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock ~ T.S. Eliot


http://www.bartleby.com/198/1.html


Sweet Jesus.
I hate every word of it. lol

Almost as much as THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL by William Blake
[Edited 12/13/07 19:36pm]


eek no!

bheart
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Reply #46 posted 12/13/07 7:49pm

Sweeny79

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evenstar said:

rushing07 said:



Sweet Jesus.
I hate every word of it. lol

Almost as much as THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL by William Blake
[Edited 12/13/07 19:36pm]


eek no!

bheart



http://www.levity.com/alc...ke_ma.html


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Reply #47 posted 12/13/07 7:49pm

Imago

rushing07 said:

Imago said:


falloff

It's perfect. I love it. Putting it in my profile.


kisses

I've got two of your poems in my profile mushy

eek

I love you.
Good night hug
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Reply #48 posted 12/13/07 7:50pm

rushing07

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evenstar said:

rushing07 said:



Sweet Jesus.
I hate every word of it. lol

Almost as much as THE MARRIAGE OF HEAVEN AND HELL by William Blake
[Edited 12/13/07 19:36pm]


eek no!

bheart


Sorry.
Romanticism or Modernsim.
Same ol' mumbling of dirty junkies.
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #49 posted 12/13/07 7:57pm

evenstar

rushing07 said:

evenstar said:



eek no!

bheart


Sorry.
Romanticism or Modernsim.
Same ol' mumbling of dirty junkies.


DAN CAN HAVE YOU! bawl
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Reply #50 posted 12/13/07 7:58pm

rushing07

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evenstar said:

rushing07 said:



Sorry.
Romanticism or Modernsim.
Same ol' mumbling of dirty junkies.


DAN CAN HAVE YOU! bawl


lol

Caravaggio sucks too.

lol
I'm not mad at you, I'm mad at the dirt.
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Reply #51 posted 12/13/07 8:00pm

evenstar

rushing07 said:

evenstar said:



DAN CAN HAVE YOU! bawl


lol

Caravaggio sucks too.

lol


caravaggio. does. NOT. suck.

bitchfight
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Reply #52 posted 12/13/07 8:03pm

FarrahMoan

2the9s said:

'TIS the year's midnight, and it is the day's,
Lucy's, who scarce seven hours herself unmasks ;
The sun is spent, and now his flasks
Send forth light squibs, no constant rays ;
The world's whole sap is sunk ;
The general balm th' hydroptic earth hath drunk,
Whither, as to the bed's-feet, life is shrunk,
Dead and interr'd ; yet all these seem to laugh,
Compared with me, who am their epitaph.

Study me then, you who shall lovers be
At the next world, that is, at the next spring ;
For I am every dead thing,
In whom Love wrought new alchemy.
For his art did express
A quintessence even from nothingness,
From dull privations, and lean emptiness ;
He ruin'd me, and I am re-begot
Of absence, darkness, death—things which are not.

All others, from all things, draw all that's good,
Life, soul, form, spirit, whence they being have ;
I, by Love's limbec, am the grave
Of all, that's nothing. Oft a flood
Have we two wept, and so
Drown'd the whole world, us two ; oft did we grow,
To be two chaoses, when we did show
Care to aught else ; and often absences
Withdrew our souls, and made us carcasses.

But I am by her death—which word wrongs her—
Of the first nothing the elixir grown ;
Were I a man, that I were one
I needs must know ; I should prefer,
If I were any beast,
Some ends, some means ; yea plants, yea stones detest,
And love ; all, all some properties invest.
If I an ordinary nothing were,
As shadow, a light, and body must be here.

But I am none ; nor will my sun renew.
You lovers, for whose sake the lesser sun
At this time to the Goat is run
To fetch new lust, and give it you,
Enjoy your summer all,
Since she enjoys her long night's festival.
Let me prepare towards her, and let me call
This hour her vigil, and her eve, since this
Both the year's and the day's deep midnight is.

razz


Did you write this?
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Reply #53 posted 12/13/07 8:05pm

2the9s

FarrahMoan said:

2the9s said:

'TIS the year's midnight, and it is the day's,
Lucy's, who scarce seven hours herself unmasks ;
The sun is spent, and now his flasks
Send forth light squibs, no constant rays ;
The world's whole sap is sunk ;
The general balm th' hydroptic earth hath drunk,
Whither, as to the bed's-feet, life is shrunk,
Dead and interr'd ; yet all these seem to laugh,
Compared with me, who am their epitaph.

Study me then, you who shall lovers be
At the next world, that is, at the next spring ;
For I am every dead thing,
In whom Love wrought new alchemy.
For his art did express
A quintessence even from nothingness,
From dull privations, and lean emptiness ;
He ruin'd me, and I am re-begot
Of absence, darkness, death—things which are not.

All others, from all things, draw all that's good,
Life, soul, form, spirit, whence they being have ;
I, by Love's limbec, am the grave
Of all, that's nothing. Oft a flood
Have we two wept, and so
Drown'd the whole world, us two ; oft did we grow,
To be two chaoses, when we did show
Care to aught else ; and often absences
Withdrew our souls, and made us carcasses.

But I am by her death—which word wrongs her—
Of the first nothing the elixir grown ;
Were I a man, that I were one
I needs must know ; I should prefer,
If I were any beast,
Some ends, some means ; yea plants, yea stones detest,
And love ; all, all some properties invest.
If I an ordinary nothing were,
As shadow, a light, and body must be here.

But I am none ; nor will my sun renew.
You lovers, for whose sake the lesser sun
At this time to the Goat is run
To fetch new lust, and give it you,
Enjoy your summer all,
Since she enjoys her long night's festival.
Let me prepare towards her, and let me call
This hour her vigil, and her eve, since this
Both the year's and the day's deep midnight is.

razz


Did you write this?


It's John Donne.

I posted it because today is St Lucy's Day.

razz
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Reply #54 posted 12/13/07 8:06pm

FarrahMoan

2the9s said:

FarrahMoan said:



Did you write this?


It's John Donne.

I posted it because today is St Lucy's Day.

razz


What is this St. Lucy's Day? And, what does it allude to, exactly?
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Reply #55 posted 12/13/07 8:21pm

Muse2NOPharaoh

No!
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Reply #56 posted 12/13/07 8:26pm

FarrahMoan

Muse2NOPharaoh said:

No!


Boobs.
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Reply #57 posted 12/13/07 8:29pm

sammij

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rushing07 said:

evenstar said:



DAN CAN HAVE YOU! bawl


lol

Caravaggio sucks too.

lol

ohhh you've SO been black listed!
brick
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #58 posted 12/13/07 8:32pm

violator

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wrote this when i was about 17?
it's getting late as i
travel thru dark tunnels and
lights flicker in
the car while
homeless drunks mumble and doze
i sigh...
and think back 2 2nite
the way our bodies entwined
my skin melted in2
yours - choclate sweet
i shiver @
the thought of how u
kissed - touched - teased me
put me @ ease 4 the rest
of the night (shhh...peace)
i know this route
all 2 well
but u...
took me 2 a place
no train, plane, automobile
could ever go
u were my one-way ticket
2ecstasy - so 2 speak
our journey finished now
4 good, so sad
as i jump 2 my feet
she a tear as wheels screech
and step off
The Night Train...


clapping
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Reply #59 posted 12/13/07 8:33pm

Graycap23

The many bumps on this Purple ride
Had just as many cheers
One must learn 2 take in stride
All of the LOVE.....and of the tears

When the end is NEAR
The beginning has commenced
Where will U stand
On your views of Prince?
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