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Reply #30 posted 10/11/07 10:03am

Rhondab

Strength comes from the war

the war of words, the lighter hue says your beauty is unworthy and ironically, so do some of your brothas but you fight on, Overstanding the revolution has nothing to do with white skin but the infection that has taken over a people still in invisible chains and bling'd out planations.

the scars of war left on your belly, breasts and thighs, birthing the next generation, alone but you raise, you rise and you develop a new generation of activists, revoluntionaries demanding to be educated and not be treated as the black teens "as portrayed on tv". A new breed of new strength never seen. a harder war when the enemy is invisible. You teach, You overstand what true motherhood is.....what it is...what it t'is....

Grimacing as you walk through the streets, nappy-headed and hoe comes from faces that look like you...fuck Don Imus....what about Tyrone, Dre and Ray Ray....longing for the black barbie or a white one for that matter.....thinkin' they bein' enlighten as the hit the blunt and talkin' shit about the natural you. Walk ya Walk...Prideful.....Strut and Prance.....the revoluntary sista takin' back the family....takin' back our beauty....takin' back our men.....

What a mockery that afrocentricity is a style not a mindset for so many of the black skinned people living in America. No need to rock the ankh because life is in her, she brings it, not worn as adornment. She is life, She is the first smile a baby makes.....she is the sunrise....she is the fullmoon...

let this revolution be televised.....sista

ClevaWords 2007
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Reply #31 posted 10/11/07 10:25am

sammij

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i keep a journal specifically for this reason, some bits from that:

"this mess escapes my lips like soot from an old smokestack; black, jaded, poisonous..."

...i sit here in a quarry - after my levee broke...i cried the tears i told myself i wouldn't anymore... frustrated, i smoke - while black crows perch and stare - mocking me... the wind blows but i can't feel it's chill... i can only see it's effects on the trees and the creatures they protect...

...an unstable offspring brought into an unstable universe - should the sum be then cancelled out? who knows, certainly not it... "it" - can i call u that? maybe you'll know me, perhaps know of me, or even neither case... many unsure of your presence as you are unstable.... Rage on both sides, a sort of negativity that none need start with, but i digress and welcome u nonetheless...


chewed me up and spat me out
like gum you'd buy
...@ a dollar store...
lusted for the sugar
but avoided the consistency
i'm nothing but stale debris
on the souls... of your shoes...
and yet i still remain
while you make your way
into you next cheap/disposable thrill..
sick.



so...-
what did come first?
love, or the falling into it?
logistics dictates there must be
a fall before the landing...
my manipulated/configurated heart strings
--dictate otherwise...

...i saw a man the other day
skanking amidst tv totem poles
and contemporary idols of jaded worship...
(this is actually a true account lol )


twocents
[Edited 10/11/07 10:27am]
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #32 posted 10/11/07 10:32am

JDInteractive

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I regret not keeping my travel journal up to date. Aside from that I'm too shy to reveal my deepest thoughts on here.
There's Joy In Expatriation.
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Reply #33 posted 10/11/07 10:33am

2elijah

billyjackbitch said:

2elijah said:


Just Because


Sometimes in life we encounter people that

are envious or bitter of our happiness or success

We may never know those reasons why

Could be their lack of inner peace and joy within their souls

They spend most of their time and energy

wishing they had what others were blessed with

instead of appreciating the blessings they already have

So they take their anger and discontent out on the rest

of the world.....just because









LOVE


Love is a powerful emotion.

It's the deepest part of our souls

and the center of our hearts.

It flows like a river through our veins.

An emotion so strong it holds relationships and

families together, yet at the same time, so powerful

it causes heartache and pain



Daily Cup of Tea for the Soul
Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah
[Edited 10/11/07 8:48am]
[Edited 10/11/07 8:56am]



Amen.

Hell,... WARS were started for love.



Thanks I appreciate that you like my poetry... hug
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Reply #34 posted 10/11/07 10:34am

sammij

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JDInteractive said:

I regret not keeping my travel journal up to date. Aside from that I'm too shy to reveal my deepest thoughts on here.

i admitt it was hard to post some of what's up there
just because i know how i write, and while i think it's deep (not taking myself TOO seriously of course) i feel that i'm open to harsh criticism, like with my art... nod
i can see what you mean
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #35 posted 10/11/07 10:34am

2elijah

Rhondab said:

Fixin to.....



Woke up this morning and figured some shit out.....I figured this and that and the other thing too....I figured you didn't know that I knew....that thing wasn't real. I figured that the me, she and he thing would pass. I figured that I would be aight. I figured that I need to be fixin' to do that and this and the other. I figured that he would be needin' to see, feel and touch. I figured I needed to get ready, get fixin' to get ready to do that thing, the next thing and the other thing. I figured that I wouldn't hear from you today so I figured I'd just talk to the next, the rest but no, no not the best. I figured I'd just walk, talk and just fixin' to do more, do the next thing. I have to pass on the present thing but its the best thing but its the thing that I figured I can't get to so what's the next thing....

I'm fixin' to see.

7/24/07




clapping..you just tripped me out with this one.
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Reply #36 posted 10/11/07 11:02am

2elijah

Rhondab said:

Strength comes from the war

the war of words, the lighter hue says your beauty is unworthy and ironically, so do some of your brothas but you fight on, Overstanding the revolution has nothing to do with white skin but the infection that has taken over a people still in invisible chains and bling'd out planations.

the scars of war left on your belly, breasts and thighs, birthing the next generation, alone but you raise, you rise and you develop a new generation of activists, revoluntionaries demanding to be educated and not be treated as the black teens "as portrayed on tv". A new breed of new strength never seen. a harder war when the enemy is invisible. You teach, You overstand what true motherhood is.....what it is...what it t'is....

Grimacing as you walk through the streets, nappy-headed and hoe comes from faces that look like you...fuck Don Imus....what about Tyrone, Dre and Ray Ray....longing for the black barbie or a white one for that matter.....thinkin' they bein' enlighten as the hit the blunt and talkin' shit about the natural you. Walk ya Walk...Prideful.....Strut and Prance.....the revoluntary sista takin' back the family....takin' back our beauty....takin' back our men.....

What a mockery that afrocentricity is a style not a mindset for so many of the black skinned people living in America. No need to rock the ankh because life is in her, she brings it, not worn as adornment. She is life, She is the first smile a baby makes.....she is the sunrise....she is the fullmoon...

let this revolution be televised.....sista

ClevaWords 2007







Spoken like a true sista..... worship worship worship
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Reply #37 posted 10/11/07 11:05am

2elijah

7 Ingredrients for Compassion

1 teaspoon of warmth

2 cups of joy

3 tablespoons of smiles

4 jars of positivity

5 bottles of kindness

6 cans of understanding

7 bushels of love

Now mix it altogether and

spread it throughout the world



Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah
[Edited 10/11/07 11:21am]
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Reply #38 posted 10/11/07 11:24am

2elijah



DREAM

Live your dream

Live your passion

There is nothing

in this world

you cannot have

if you believe

you can make it happen

....Dream!



Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah
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Reply #39 posted 10/11/07 11:29am

2elijah

Happiness


Living through someone else's happiness,

will eventually make for an unhappy person;

seek what makes you content in life…

and happiness will find you
.






Peace





What is Peace?

The clouds moving in the sky

The sun setting over the mountains

Birds flying over the trees

The smell of roses

The whistle of the winds over the hills

The ballet of the ocean waves dancing on a beach

A silent moment

Peace....it's worth more than a million pieces of gold
.




Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah
[Edited 10/11/07 11:45am]
[Edited 10/11/07 11:47am]
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Reply #40 posted 10/11/07 11:30am

Rhondab

2elijah said:

Happiness




Living through someone else's happiness,

will eventually make for an unhappy person;

seek what makes you content in life…

and happiness will find you.






Peace

What is Peace?

The clouds moving in the sky

The sun setting over the mountains

Birds flying over the trees

The smell of roses

The whistle of the winds over the hills

The ballet of the ocean waves dancing on a beach

A silent moment

Peace....it's worth more than a million pieces of gold.







Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah



very soothing...very peaceful vibe.
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Reply #41 posted 10/11/07 11:37am

Imago

There is silence now between us,
I trespassed on the edge of your forgiveness,
invaded your illusions of closeness,
made an ass of myself to witness,

How I long to bridge the gap between us,
Like the blackness of space between the earth and venus,
I long for your lips around my penis,
your lips around my penis,
your lips around my penis. pray





space edit
[Edited 10/11/07 11:38am]
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Reply #42 posted 10/11/07 11:42am

eraclito

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sammij said:

i keep a journal specifically for this reason, some bits from that:

"this mess escapes my lips like soot from an old smokestack; black, jaded, poisonous..."

...i sit here in a quarry - after my levee broke...i cried the tears i told myself i wouldn't anymore... frustrated, i smoke - while black crows perch and stare - mocking me... the wind blows but i can't feel it's chill... i can only see it's effects on the trees and the creatures they protect...

...an unstable offspring brought into an unstable universe - should the sum be then cancelled out? who knows, certainly not it... "it" - can i call u that? maybe you'll know me, perhaps know of me, or even neither case... many unsure of your presence as you are unstable.... Rage on both sides, a sort of negativity that none need start with, but i digress and welcome u nonetheless...


chewed me up and spat me out
like gum you'd buy
...@ a dollar store...
lusted for the sugar
but avoided the consistency
i'm nothing but stale debris
on the souls... of your shoes...
and yet i still remain
while you make your way
into you next cheap/disposable thrill..
sick.



so...-
what did come first?
love, or the falling into it?
logistics dictates there must be
a fall before the landing...
my manipulated/configurated heart strings
--dictate otherwise...

...i saw a man the other day
skanking amidst tv totem poles
and contemporary idols of jaded worship...
(this is actually a true account lol )


twocents
[Edited 10/11/07 10:27am]


dig that flow..
are you ready for submission

cidade de deus
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Reply #43 posted 10/11/07 11:44am

2elijah

Rhondab said:

2elijah said:

Happiness




Living through someone else's happiness,

will eventually make for an unhappy person;

seek what makes you content in life…

and happiness will find you.






Peace

What is Peace?

The clouds moving in the sky

The sun setting over the mountains

Birds flying over the trees

The smell of roses

The whistle of the winds over the hills

The ballet of the ocean waves dancing on a beach

A silent moment

Peace....it's worth more than a million pieces of gold.







Copyright 2007
www.poetrypoem.com/2elijah



very soothing...very peaceful vibe.



Tnanks! smile
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Reply #44 posted 10/11/07 12:21pm

wlcm2thdwn

“Weeping may endure for a night, but joy cometh in the morning. (Psalms 30:5)”
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Reply #45 posted 10/11/07 12:29pm

HamsterHuey

The traces of a new truth emerge
I can see them reflected in your eyes
Your perception of me changed
But I did not feel different
Until I saw this perception dawn

Not to much fallen
But slithered off the pedestal
I feel tainted by the fact that you
You of all people
Lost faith in me
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Reply #46 posted 10/11/07 5:30pm

Fauxie

He's not just a flirt
He bought me a t-shirt
If I could go west
I'd show him my best
But if he comes east
It will be the least
Since I have a wife
And don't need the strife
I know that there's envy
That's how metro men be
I send him nice orgnotes
Say thank you for sweet dotes
He's not just a flirt
He bought me a t-shirt
I feel like I owe 'im
So here is my poem

rose

batting eyes
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Reply #47 posted 10/11/07 5:49pm

teller

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"Given the tenaciousness of our narcissism, its tentacles can be subtle and penetrating. We must continue to hack away at them day by day, week after week, month after month, and year after year. And there are all manner of pitfalls on the journey, such as being proud of how humble you have become." -- M. Scott Peck
Fear is the mind-killer.
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Reply #48 posted 10/11/07 11:06pm

sammij

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eraclito said:

sammij said:

i keep a journal specifically for this reason, some bits from that:

"this mess escapes my lips like soot from an old smokestack; black, jaded, poisonous..."

...i sit here in a quarry - after my levee broke...i cried the tears i told myself i wouldn't anymore... frustrated, i smoke - while black crows perch and stare - mocking me... the wind blows but i can't feel it's chill... i can only see it's effects on the trees and the creatures they protect...

...an unstable offspring brought into an unstable universe - should the sum be then cancelled out? who knows, certainly not it... "it" - can i call u that? maybe you'll know me, perhaps know of me, or even neither case... many unsure of your presence as you are unstable.... Rage on both sides, a sort of negativity that none need start with, but i digress and welcome u nonetheless...


chewed me up and spat me out
like gum you'd buy
...@ a dollar store...
lusted for the sugar
but avoided the consistency
i'm nothing but stale debris
on the souls... of your shoes...
and yet i still remain
while you make your way
into you next cheap/disposable thrill..
sick.



so...-
what did come first?
love, or the falling into it?
logistics dictates there must be
a fall before the landing...
my manipulated/configurated heart strings
--dictate otherwise...

...i saw a man the other day
skanking amidst tv totem poles
and contemporary idols of jaded worship...
(this is actually a true account lol )


twocents
[Edited 10/11/07 10:27am]


dig that flow..

thank you giggle rose
i write strange shit sometimes, those are just bits and peices from randomly picked pages...
...the little artist that could...
[...i think i can, i think i can, i think i can...]
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Reply #49 posted 10/11/07 11:18pm

KidaDynamite

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Graycap23 said:

The sandals in which I walk
Hold sand from a thousand lands
Regardless the language I talk
Nothing changes the foundation of a man


omg I like this, "ALOT"!
surviving on the thought of loving you, it's just like the water
I ain't felt this way in years...
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Reply #50 posted 10/11/07 11:35pm

Fauxie

KidaDynamite said:

Graycap23 said:

The sandals in which I walk
Hold sand from a thousand lands
Regardless the language I talk
Nothing changes the foundation of a man


omg I like this, "ALOT"!


co-sign
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Reply #51 posted 10/11/07 11:47pm

evenstar

oh fucking hell, why not. please don't make fun of me too badly, guys, i don't write much anymore. lol

did you hold me as a baby?
i'm twenty now,
you're both dead.
the burial was a haze
though i fondly recall making daisy chains
in cemetery grass with the other granddaughter you ignored.
your daughter didn't mind the smudges on our dresses,
maybe you'll also excuse this guiltless apathy.
did you never wonder what could have been?

boxed
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Reply #52 posted 10/11/07 11:55pm

Fauxie

orgburp
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Reply #53 posted 10/11/07 11:58pm

Fauxie

evenstar said:

oh fucking hell, why not. please don't make fun of me too badly, guys, i don't write much anymore. lol

did you hold me as a baby?
i'm twenty now,
you're both dead.
the burial was a haze
though i fondly recall making daisy chains
in cemetery grass with the other granddaughter you ignored.
your daughter didn't mind the smudges on our dresses,
maybe you'll also excuse this guiltless apathy.
did you never wonder what could have been?

boxed


Very poignant and, frankly, sad. comfort

Ok, I'll post the ones I had on myspace.

Anger

Balcony bound, to pace and to simmer,
To think complication into catastrophe,
Mistake into malice, solacer to sinner.
Maybe, just maybe, it was me?


(Untitled)

Twenty suicidal tendencies a day,
Tired but yet old.
Bed-ridden, and animated only in sporadic, violent oscillation,
And looking every one of my years two-fold.
"The seventeenth 'last time' will be the easiest", I joked.
The doctor was not amused and his whole countenance frowned.
I croaked.
From lip to brow and back again, a wave of disapproval.
"What are we going to do with you?", he said.
"I don't know, but if you give me a cigarette I'll be your best friend."
He took his frown and rose from beside my bed.
I croaked again and drifted off to sleep, smiling foolishly to the end.


Sincerely, Please Don't Die

I heard you calling out last night. Oh tell me, did you fall?
'Twas raining hard, and more besides, I was watching football.
Your family were not at home, and didn't rush to your aid?
Your boastful tongue has cost you that, as now their loyalty fades.
They never knew the man you are, but now the murmurs grow.
Blood is only so thick, and thus, in time you'll reap what was sown,
A bitter, vile crop that sheds your skin, laid bare to all.
Sincerely please don't die because I'd rather watch you fall.
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Reply #54 posted 10/12/07 1:15am

Christopher

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evenstar said:

oh fucking hell, why not. please don't make fun of me too badly, guys, i don't write much anymore. lol

did you hold me as a baby?
i'm twenty now,
you're both dead.
the burial was a haze
though i fondly recall making daisy chains
in cemetery grass with the other granddaughter you ignored.
your daughter didn't mind the smudges on our dresses,
maybe you'll also excuse this guiltless apathy.
did you never wonder what could have been?

boxed

wow

that was good.

i wrote this ages ago(may 2001 or so). who knows now.i hardly if ever write anything anymore.

have a looksy




Dante's Swim

Dante took a swim in the river but he never came back
I wonder if hes still breathing if hes still intact?
Maybe i’ll get a postcard from somewhere
Maybe he’ll find what hes looking for there?
I found a picture of us today the back reads
“Taken Sunday the 24th middle of May
All I could think was "does knowing somebody mean not knowing them at all"?
Can you stay built like bricks or will you fall?
Dante’s Swim.
Memories are all I have left to remember him by-pictures,letters,movies,cds
Will you remember me?

Dante’s Swim.
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Reply #55 posted 10/12/07 1:37am

Fauxie

Christopher said:

evenstar said:

oh fucking hell, why not. please don't make fun of me too badly, guys, i don't write much anymore. lol

did you hold me as a baby?
i'm twenty now,
you're both dead.
the burial was a haze
though i fondly recall making daisy chains
in cemetery grass with the other granddaughter you ignored.
your daughter didn't mind the smudges on our dresses,
maybe you'll also excuse this guiltless apathy.
did you never wonder what could have been?

boxed

wow

that was good.

i wrote this ages ago(may 2001 or so). who knows now.i hardly if ever write anything anymore.

have a looksy




Dante's Swim

Dante took a swim in the river but he never came back
I wonder if hes still breathing if hes still intact?
Maybe i’ll get a postcard from somewhere
Maybe he’ll find what hes looking for there?
I found a picture of us today the back reads
“Taken Sunday the 24th middle of May
All I could think was "does knowing somebody mean not knowing them at all"?
Can you stay built like bricks or will you fall?
Dante’s Swim.
Memories are all I have left to remember him by-pictures,letters,movies,cds
Will you remember me?

Dante’s Swim.


I like that. thumbs up!
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Reply #56 posted 10/12/07 1:49am

Christopher

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Fauxie said:



I like that. thumbs up!

thank ya!

and i didnt even share my "i love you prince!" poems yet smile
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Reply #57 posted 10/12/07 1:58am

JDInteractive

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Christopher said:

Memories are all I have left to remember him by-pictures,letters,movies,cds

Will you remember me?[/i]


Gay. smile
There's Joy In Expatriation.
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Reply #58 posted 10/12/07 2:05am

shanti0608

Sacrifice ~

To cherish, behold, bewilder, be kind
love bittersweet grows deeper in time
understanding, compassion, resistance, remind
human heart, human mind every so harder to find
twisting, turning, harsh, intensity flows
fill me with extremes, contentment finally chose
beating, racing, bruising, creating
life a new, emerging, taking, being....everlasting.
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Reply #59 posted 10/12/07 2:08am

Fauxie

Christopher said:

Fauxie said:



I like that. thumbs up!

thank ya!

and i didnt even share my "i love you prince!" poems yet smile


Oh shit, me too! My prince poems are electric! Especially when I rhyme 'newpower' with devour. nod
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