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Thread started 11/15/06 6:26pm

toddband45

What do you think of my poem? I got the idea from another topic's title. It just came to me.

"Alexis De Paris"


Love is too sweet to taste.
Eyes like yours is all I ever wanted.
But, in this dead heart there is a waterfall.
As the water goes through my veins, I can feel the heat rising.
Why is the water so hot?


Love is completely pure.
Mouth like yours is all I ever wanted.
But, in this dead body there is a railroad.
As the bodys are in my body, I can feel them turn to dust.
Why is the water so hot?


Love is too sweet to taste.
Voice like yours is all I ever wanted.
But, my dead ears comes to life.
This life is what I was waiting for all my life.
Why is the water so hot?
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Reply #1 posted 11/15/06 6:40pm

shausler
Org ganic ! cool
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Reply #2 posted 11/15/06 6:43pm

Shanti1

shausler said:

Org ganic ! cool



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