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Thread started 09/04/05 2:45pm

andykeen

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My poem "Help in Orleans"

Well i haven't wrote a poem in ages, but from what has been going on in this world, i thought i would have a go...

"Help in orleans"

When it seems like no one can help you
You fear this world you once trusted
Family, friends still not found
Hold what you love dear, though your heart has suffered

Lights fly by in the night sky
Hands from the helpless that aren’t waving good bye
Children crying naked from their parents
Who will keep them from their nightmares?

Whispers to god from families un-seen
Trapped inside thinking they were safe
Crowds making there way through the floods
Screams of pain to objects in the sky

Its a lot harder to say you never helped
[Edited 9/4/05 14:48pm]

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Reply #1 posted 09/04/05 2:56pm

2the9s	That's nice, andy.
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Reply #2 posted 09/04/05 3:07pm

MIGUELGOMEZ	Awesome Andy!!!! M MyeternalgrattitudetoPhil&Val.Herman said "We want sweaty truckers at the truck stop! We want cigar puffing men that look like they wanna beat the living daylights out of us" Val"sporking is spooning with benefits"
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Reply #3 posted 09/04/05 3:08pm

andykeen

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Thanks, I'm not a great writer, and i know that, but I just feel really Pee'd off as i cant do much, i dont own a credit card 2 donate money, I just wish i could do more!
[Edited 9/4/05 15:49pm]

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Reply #4 posted 09/04/05 6:24pm