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Thread started 09/06/05 4:18pm

jerseykrs

I wrote a poem.

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral
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Reply #1 posted 09/06/05 4:23pm

shausler

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral



its what got me started


wink
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Reply #2 posted 09/06/05 4:24pm

jerseykrs

shausler said:

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral



its what got me started


wink



LOL, I don't want to feed the monster.
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Reply #3 posted 09/06/05 4:25pm

shanti0608

shausler said:

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral



its what got me started


wink



Your the best though....

rose
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Reply #4 posted 09/06/05 4:27pm

Imago777

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.





Thank you
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Reply #5 posted 09/06/05 4:30pm

jerseykrs

Imago777 said:

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.





Thank you



Don't even start mister "post a bulletin and an org thread to pimp my blog".



rolleyes
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Reply #6 posted 09/06/05 6:55pm

shausler

jerseykrs said:

shausler said:




its what got me started


wink



LOL, I don't want to feed the monster.



every monster

starts with a seed

fa fa fout

watch it

bleed
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Reply #7 posted 09/06/05 7:02pm

dancinggyrl

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just post it...you never know who will appreciate it...It's from your soul, right? maybe not boxed do it anyway razz
[Edited 9/6/05 19:04pm]
[Edited 9/6/05 19:05pm]
If you have to ask, it's more than worth it.
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Reply #8 posted 09/06/05 7:05pm

shausler

pa pa pa pa

just post yo

poem

if you dont post 2

no one will

know em

like strands of hair

comeon yo lets

comb em

papapapapapapa[

post yo poem

sha sha sha sha sha sha sha sha

show

em
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Reply #9 posted 09/06/05 7:07pm

shausler

hey


sha sha
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Reply #10 posted 09/06/05 7:08pm

dancinggyrl

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exactly... wink

shausler said:

pa pa pa pa

just post yo

poem

if you dont post 2

no one will

know em

like strands of hair

comeon yo lets

comb em

papapapapapapa[

post yo poem

sha sha sha sha sha sha sha sha

show

em
If you have to ask, it's more than worth it.
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Reply #11 posted 09/06/05 7:09pm

shausler

jersey n dat world

call out to you

post it

coast on

what u can do

krs dont mean to be

a

pest ova you so

post it

ill toast all

that you can do







heyyyyy


sha sha
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Reply #12 posted 09/06/05 8:20pm

jerseykrs

only because shaus is a wonderful soul.....






down to the filter, one by one
I can't get out of my own way,
and I'm too fat to run.

A minute ago, I could see the end to this maze
it's not in my vision now, I'm gasping and wheezing
is it the smog, or just a thick haze?

Maybe I'm just giving up..... sad
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Reply #13 posted 09/06/05 8:38pm

Fauxie

jerseykrs said:

only because shaus is a wonderful soul.....






down to the filter, one by one
I can't get out of my own way,
and I'm too fat to run.

A minute ago, I could see the end to this maze
it's not in my vision now, I'm gasping and wheezing
is it the smog, or just a thick haze?

Maybe I'm just giving up..... sad



thumbs up!

No need to worry, there's potential there. Expand upon it a little, refine it, and you'll have it.
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Reply #14 posted 09/06/05 8:58pm

notoriousj

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral




I want your attention...the things I would do whistling



<----- innocent
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Reply #15 posted 09/06/05 9:08pm

jerseykrs

notoriousj said:

jerseykrs said:

But it's such shite I won't post it.


Maybe I just want attention. neutral




I want your attention...the things I would do whistling



<----- innocent



A shitty night has ended pretty well.

Maybe it's the wine.
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Reply #16 posted 09/07/05 12:35pm

MIGUELGOMEZ

jerseykrs said:

only because shaus is a wonderful soul.....






down to the filter, one by one
I can't get out of my own way,
and I'm too fat to run.

A minute ago, I could see the end to this maze
it's not in my vision now, I'm gasping and wheezing
is it the smog, or just a thick haze?

Maybe I'm just giving up..... sad



I love your poem.....and don't give up.


M
MyeternalgrattitudetoPhil&Val.Herman said "We want sweaty truckers at the truck stop! We want cigar puffing men that look like they wanna beat the living daylights out of us" Val"sporking is spooning with benefits"
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