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Thread started 08/22/05 7:04pm

Imago777

HE SHOOK Like the Moon over WATER

It is said that in his fear, he shook like the reflection of the moon over rushing water.
And for good reason, he trembled in the night. For his beloved father, stepmother, and wife—all these tender and dear to him would die. His best friend and cousin would also perish. Even his little boy would not be spared.

He agonized over the end of all things. The memories, the joy, the companionship of all who he loved and loved him—these souls would vanish in sickness and death like the flash of a pan.

For all his wealth, his esteem, his unrivaled wit—he was powerless in the knowledge of their eminent doom. Life was a riot of chaotic episodes of fleeting laughs and tender moments giving way to the march of mortal finality—and rich and poor were content to have it so.

But he was not content. Not happy to watch those he cherished so dearly wither into the void like meaningless drops of rain in the ocean to be lost to him forever. He would fight it. With every fibre in his heart, he would find a way to stop their eminent demise. With every bit of strength in he could muster he knew he had to end their journey to this death.

Optimism is but hope and a delusion.
Pain seeps through the fabric of every life,
Action is the course to stopping this sad procession,
Siddhartha crept out of his palace like the calm mist of morning, following his clarion call to save his son, his wife, his father, and me.

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[Edited 8/22/05 20:35pm]
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Reply #1 posted 08/22/05 7:15pm

Muse2NOPharaoh

Beautiful.... painful
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Reply #2 posted 08/22/05 7:18pm

weepingwall

Imago777 said:

It is said that in his fear, he shook like the reflection of the moon over rushing water.
And for good reason, he trembled in the night. For his beloved father, stepmother, and wife—all these tender and dear to him would die. His best friend and cousin would also perish. Even his little boy would not be spared.

He agonized over the end of all things. The memories, the joy, the companionship of all who he loved and loved him—these souls would vanish in sickness and death like the flash of a pan.

For all his wealth, his esteem, his unrivaled wit—he was powerless in the knowledge of their eminent doom. Life was a riot of chaotic episodes of fleeting laughs and tender moments giving way to the march of mortal finality—and rich and poor were content to have it so.

But he was not content. Not happy to watch those he cherished so dearly wither into the void like meaningless drops of rain in the ocean to be lost to him forever. He would fight it. With every fibre in his heart, he would find a way to stop their eminent demise. With every bit of strength in he could muster he knew he had stop their journey to this death.

Optimism is but hope and a delusion.
Pain seeps through the fabric of every life,
Action is the course to stopping this sad procession,
Siddhartha crept out of his palace like the calm mist of morning, following his clarion call to save his son, his wife, his father, and me.

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[Edited 8/22/05 19:06pm]








Nice....
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Reply #3 posted 08/22/05 7:43pm

Imago777

I'm good at being serious, huh? biggrin
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Reply #4 posted 08/22/05 7:57pm

weepingwall

Imago777 said:

I'm good at being serious, huh? biggrin



like a fish out of water..
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Reply #5 posted 08/22/05 8:31pm

Muse2NOPharaoh

Imago777 said:

I'm good at being serious, huh? biggrin



At times.....indeed!
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Reply #6 posted 08/22/05 8:32pm

althom

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confused
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Reply #7 posted 08/22/05 8:33pm

Imago777

althom said:

confused

think of it as an analogy for your photographic career, doomed to wither into nothingness. nod
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Reply #8 posted 08/22/05 8:34pm

althom

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Imago777 said:

althom said:

confused

think of it as an analogy for your photographic career, doomed to wither into nothingness. nod

No....that's my sex life. neutral
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Reply #9 posted 08/22/05 8:36pm

SammiJ

eek
wow.
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Reply #10 posted 08/22/05 8:36pm

Imago777

althom said:

Imago777 said:


think of it as an analogy for your photographic career, doomed to wither into nothingness. nod

No....that's my sex life. neutral

Perhaps you should combine the two.


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Reply #11 posted 08/22/05 8:36pm

althom

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Imago777 said:

althom said:


No....that's my sex life. neutral

Perhaps you should combine the two.


orgnote me.

eek
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Reply #12 posted 08/22/05 8:37pm

ImagoMind777

SammiJ said:

eek
wow.

U likey likey? batting eyes
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Reply #13 posted 08/22/05 8:57pm

SammiJ

ImagoMind777 said:

SammiJ said:

eek
wow.

U likey likey? batting eyes

i did nod
it was sad tho sad
but very very good

do u write often?
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Reply #14 posted 08/22/05 9:01pm

ImagoMind777

SammiJ said:

ImagoMind777 said:


U likey likey? batting eyes

i did nod
it was sad tho sad
but very very good

do u write often?


Only when I'm naked.
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Reply #15 posted 08/22/05 9:03pm

SammiJ

ImagoMind777 said:

SammiJ said:


i did nod
it was sad tho sad
but very very good

do u write often?


Only when I'm naked.

which is prolly often then
disbelief
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Reply #16 posted 08/22/05 9:04pm

ImagoMind777

SammiJ said:

ImagoMind777 said:



Only when I'm naked.

which is prolly often then
disbelief



I want to write a book.
I'd really like to write a story on the buddha, though I don't want it to be a religious story as much as a human one.

It just seems that I have a hard time commiting time to it. And learning how to write.
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Reply #17 posted 08/22/05 9:06pm

madartista

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I can't help but think...

so many speak of the moon as though it has no flaws


Interesting, ImagoMan....
let me come over it's a beautiful day to play with you in the dark
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Reply #18 posted 08/22/05 9:11pm

ImagoMind777

madartista said:

I can't help but think...

so many speak of the moon as though it has no flaws


Interesting, ImagoMan....



I picture you saying that with bedroom eyes. :swoon:
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Reply #19 posted 08/22/05 9:16pm

madartista

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ImagoMind777 said:

I picture you saying that with bedroom eyes. :swoon:


That's a lotta words for bedroom eyes...
let me come over it's a beautiful day to play with you in the dark
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Reply #20 posted 08/22/05 9:25pm

SammiJ

ImagoMind777 said:

SammiJ said:


which is prolly often then
disbelief



I want to write a book.
I'd really like to write a story on the buddha, though I don't want it to be a religious story as much as a human one.

It just seems that I have a hard time commiting time to it. And learning how to write.

nod keep doing it seriously...
i'd buy your book
the way u write, it's very poetic...has a nice flow 2 it
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Reply #21 posted 08/23/05 4:43am

ImagoMind777

SammiJ said:

ImagoMind777 said:




I want to write a book.
I'd really like to write a story on the buddha, though I don't want it to be a religious story as much as a human one.

It just seems that I have a hard time commiting time to it. And learning how to write.

nod keep doing it seriously...
i'd buy your book
the way u write, it's very poetic...has a nice flow 2 it



eek call
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Reply #22 posted 08/23/05 4:51am

Fauxie

Where's the rest of it? confused





Seriously though, I like the way you write. I don't like the way you spell, but that's more about my own personal demons than anything. But I digress, everything you write is of interest to me. Do try to find the time to write a book, even if it's a very slow process with all your work commitments and stuff. thumbs up!
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Reply #23 posted 08/23/05 5:00am

Imago777

Fauxie said:

Where's the rest of it? confused





Seriously though, I like the way you look. I don't like the way you spell, but that's more about my own personal demons than anything. But I digress, everything you write is of interest to me. Do try to find the time to write a book, even if it's a very slow process with all your work commitments and stuff. thumbs up!



eek
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Reply #24 posted 08/23/05 5:03am

Fauxie

Fauxie said:

Where's the rest of it? confused





Seriously though, I like the way you write. I don't like the way you smell, but that's more about my own personal demons than anything. But I digress, everything you write is of interest to me. Do try to find the time to write a book, even if it's a very slow process with all your work commitments and stuff. thumbs up!
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barf
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Reply #25 posted 08/23/05 5:09am

Imago777

Fauxie said:

Fauxie said:

Where's the rest of it? confused





Seriously though, I like the way you write. I don't like the way you smell, but that's more about my own personal demons than anything. But I digress, everything you write is of interest to me. Do try to find the time to write a book, even if it's a very slow process with all your work commitments and stuff. thumbs up!
[Edited 8/23/05 5:02am]


barf



That's my scent woman.


Learn it!



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Reply #26 posted 08/23/05 5:11am

Fauxie

Imago777 said:

Fauxie said:



barf



That's my scent woman.


Learn it!



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drool I wish!

Probably you too!



I have to get offline now. I'm having cynicism issues today. You wouldn't like me when I'm cynical. no no no! Have a good day! hug
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Reply #27 posted 08/23/05 5:33am

Mach

Imago777 said:

It is said that in his fear, he shook like the reflection of the moon over rushing water.
And for good reason, he trembled in the night. For his beloved father, stepmother, and wife—all these tender and dear to him would die. His best friend and cousin would also perish. Even his little boy would not be spared.

He agonized over the end of all things. The memories, the joy, the companionship of all who he loved and loved him—these souls would vanish in sickness and death like the flash of a pan.

For all his wealth, his esteem, his unrivaled wit—he was powerless in the knowledge of their eminent doom. Life was a riot of chaotic episodes of fleeting laughs and tender moments giving way to the march of mortal finality—and rich and poor were content to have it so.

But he was not content. Not happy to watch those he cherished so dearly wither into the void like meaningless drops of rain in the ocean to be lost to him forever. He would fight it. With every fibre in his heart, he would find a way to stop their eminent demise. With every bit of strength in he could muster he knew he had to end their journey to this death.

Optimism is but hope and a delusion.
Pain seeps through the fabric of every life,
Action is the course to stopping this sad procession,
Siddhartha crept out of his palace like the calm mist of morning, following his clarion call to save his son, his wife, his father, and me.

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[Edited 8/22/05 20:35pm]



deep ... dark


biggrin


awesome
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Reply #28 posted 08/23/05 9:14am

Sweeny79

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I love what you post of your writing.

Do you ever write a full story or just these little excerpts?
In spite of the cost of living, it's still popular.
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Reply #29 posted 08/23/05 2:45pm

Imago777

Does this mean yall ladies will sleep with me?


confuse



call
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