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A POEM Thread - Write SOMETHING Ur Feeling I don't care if it rymes or not.
Here, I'll start: THE GIFT - by AB777 Formulaic at best, desperation takes its toll in oily strokes and turpentine evaporation. No Muse serves as catalyst for shedding this artistic skin, such change a photocopy of wishing adoration, No place worthy of the canvas effigy, half baked in haste for hopes of just a fleeting glance, From you, a self-loathing hypocrite, a lovable dimwit, smart enough to put my dumbass in a trance, So here’s the creation, a trinket, offered with a bit of humble surrendering, My georgous prodigy, of whom I’ve obsessed in mentoring, And though years will separate and come between us, I still know I will long for your lips around my penis. Ur lips around my penis. Ur lips around my penis. | |
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precious moments
shared from afar how do u kno me so well? our souls entwined times before ours i'll never be the same now that i kno u... i love the way u love me i love the way u speak 2 me speak 2 me words of passion and desire... i am yours u are mine love, love, love... | |
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SammiJ said: precious moments
shared from afar how do u kno me so well? our souls entwined times before ours i'll never be the same now that i kno u... i love the way u love me i love the way u speak 2 me speak 2 me words of passion and desire... i am yours u are mine love, love, love... That's pretty creepy. | |
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AsianBoi777 said: SammiJ said: precious moments
shared from afar how do u kno me so well? our souls entwined times before ours i'll never be the same now that i kno u... i love the way u love me i love the way u speak 2 me speak 2 me words of passion and desire... i am yours u are mine love, love, love... That's pretty creepy. 
my man digs it u need 2 stop with the lips round penis bit  | |
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SammiJ said: AsianBoi777 said: That's pretty creepy.
my man digs it u need 2 stop with the lips round penis bit I don't know what you're talking about. 
Did U like it?  | |
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AsianBoi777 said: SammiJ said:
my man digs it u need 2 stop with the lips round penis bit I don't know what you're talking about.
Did U like it? i kinda got confused a bit i got scared when i reached the end... | |
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here's something I whipped up off the top of my head:
Buffalo Bill's defunct who used to ride a watersmooth-silver stallion and break onetwothreefourfive pigeonsjustlikethat Jesus he was a handsome man and what i want to know is how do you like your blueeyed boy Mister Death  I mean, like, where is the sun? | |
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  [Edited 6/3/05 21:48pm] | |
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Natsume said: here's something I whipped up off the top of my head:
Buffalo Bill's defunct who used to ride a watersmooth-silver stallion and break onetwothreefourfive pigeonsjustlikethat Jesus he was a handsome man and what i want to know is how do you like your blueeyed boy Mister Death 
I love it. Is it about me? | |
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Natsume said: here's something I whipped up off the top of my head:
Buffalo Bill's defunct who used to ride a watersmooth-silver stallion and break onetwothreefourfive pigeonsjustlikethat Jesus he was a handsome man and what i want to know is how do you like your blueeyed boy Mister Death Buffalo Bill's in Hayward? | |
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SammiJ said: precious moments
shared from afar how do u kno me so well? our souls entwined times before ours i'll never be the same now that i kno u... i love the way u love me i love the way u speak 2 me speak 2 me words of passion and desire... i am yours u are mine love, love, love... that was cute baby. | |
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alas and alack
my fishing day was slack all I caught was a boot that was black | |
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charlottegelin said: alas and alack
my fishing day was slack all I caught was a boot that was black
Good one. Is that an anology for sex? | |
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AsianBoi777 said: charlottegelin said: alas and alack
my fishing day was slack all I caught was a boot that was black
Good one. Is that an anology for sex? aren't they all? | |
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AsianBoi777 said:
I love it. Is it about me? totally. you look exactly like Buffalo Bill, after all.  I mean, like, where is the sun? | |
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Lonliness
Emptiness Drifting Floating 
Ohh purple joy oh purple bliss oh purple rapture! REAL MUSIC by REAL MUSICIANS - Prince "I kind of wish there was a reason for Prince to make the site crash more" ~~ Ben |
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loneliness eats away
dragging through another fucking day it's been too long my soul alone where are you? http://elmadartista.tumblr.com/ http://twitter.com/madartista | |
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Alice
You are amazing..... | |
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Ptownhood said: Alice
You are amazing..... Thanks. But I asked u not to call me Alice on the Org! http://elmadartista.tumblr.com/ http://twitter.com/madartista | |
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Stress in a mornin'
Stress at night Tires me out Makes me shite I'll be glad when it's over I'll be glad when it's done Then I won't have Such a sore bum ..   
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anticipation and the unknown
creeping silently with rose coloured eyes... watching and waiting to pounce so much to be thankful for and so much love emptiness please please go...love and contentment come take it's place  | |
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this is a line i've drawn but didn't feel the need to show you or anyone else yet you've noticed some things i don't get angry i don't interrogate and i always keep my keys in the left pocket of my jacket still this is a poem i'll write absent mindedly to remind myself of what was to come and how i could have handled it better and true love lives on lollipops and crisps | |
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Thomas, come and sing to me about the Boney king of Nowhere about your little boy named Noah about my grief and my self pity and it's sustained pantomime life fed by marketing machines and media and true love lives on lollipops and crisps | |
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I found myself today
Hiding behind my couch Looking for the change you brought I could buy a cheesecake Maybe that's all we are Desserts for the meal of life Bringing the same thing we always have Yet always searching for more Nothing matters more Than what I know Everything matters Just wait, just wait Look in the aisle Does it live there? Nothing can stop me now I've got my VISA card. | |
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New-Zeeland Buddha contemplates my speech, my movement and my underlying alterior motive sits for a while as my ass heats the chair and I drink my cold tea Coughs his Zen-taught cough of dust and says: you still believe in the lie that you told your god in whom you claim not to believe and true love lives on lollipops and crisps | |
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you have hair like screech
and you smell like peach i want to take you to the beach i try to climb your backfat but i dont reach . . [Edited 6/4/05 7:22am] | |
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i can't write poems  | |
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p0pstar said: i can't write poems
eeee project! lollychops!  | |
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Christopher said: p0pstar said: i can't write poems
eeee project! lollychops! hey Christopher I've missed you | |
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p0pstar said: Christopher said: eeee project! lollychops! hey Christopher I've missed you we missed yo azz to  i thought you were held against your will by jem or something 
lol how you been? | |
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