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Reply #60 posted 06/04/05 6:46am

Christopher

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lollyp0p said:


I have madonnas wax model which i stole from the wax work, just got to make sure you don't look too hot and melt them rolleyes


lol, ill just wear no bra that day batting eyes
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Reply #61 posted 06/04/05 6:48am

SammiJ

...wtf?
confuse
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Reply #62 posted 06/04/05 6:48am

Telecaster

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SammiJ said:

...wtf?
confuse


Who you wtf-in at?

Lolly and Chris? Ignore them jackers.
Where the sky goes on for miles/And never tires of an improbable blue
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Reply #63 posted 06/04/05 6:50am

lollyp0p

Christopher said:

lollyp0p said:


I have madonnas wax model which i stole from the wax work, just got to make sure you don't look too hot and melt them rolleyes


lol, ill just wear no bra that day batting eyes



hot dripping wax ....

horny


oops wrong thread
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Reply #64 posted 06/04/05 6:50am

lollyp0p

Telecaster said:

SammiJ said:

...wtf?
confuse


Who you wtf-in at?

Lolly and Chris? Ignore them jackers.



sad

cry
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Reply #65 posted 06/04/05 6:51am

SammiJ

Telecaster said:

SammiJ said:

...wtf?
confuse


Who you wtf-in at?

Lolly and Chris? Ignore them jackers.

will do
mr.green
[Edited 6/4/05 6:51am]
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Reply #66 posted 06/04/05 7:14am

Telecaster

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lollyp0p said:

Telecaster said:



Who you wtf-in at?

Lolly and Chris? Ignore them jackers.



sad

cry


Pouting won't help. Let the poets have their thread, common!
Where the sky goes on for miles/And never tires of an improbable blue
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Reply #67 posted 06/04/05 7:17am

lollyp0p

Telecaster said:

lollyp0p said:




sad

cry


Pouting won't help. Let the poets have their thread, common!


but AB said he missed me jacking his threads so i am actually making Dan feel better about himself, he looked so sad before.
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Reply #68 posted 06/04/05 7:18am

Telecaster

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So much love in one man
If he could focus on one
He would be quite the dan
Where the sky goes on for miles/And never tires of an improbable blue
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Reply #69 posted 06/04/05 8:29am

IstenSzek

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Telecaster said:

So much love in one man
If he could focus on one
He would be quite the Dan


smile
and true love lives on lollipops and crisps
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Reply #70 posted 06/04/05 8:40am

IstenSzek

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And this is how the day begins,
how everything always begins and ends;
with Crespeau playing Liszt
crauched at his piano in the corner of my room

I can't remember everything
that happened here last night.
The only thing that I can call
to mind is that at one point I

Gazed into the barrel of
a small organic gun
Sensed tectonic movement,
got so scared
I could not even
bring myself to shit my pants

The shaman's voice rang in my ear
"We're heading for collision,
and you, sad fuck, you're shit faced".

I watched him climb on top the athol
with an eye to watch the sky
monitoring every movement
as I swallowed all my pride

But Heaven bled forgiveness and I
had to take a piss
Spread my legs and prayed
for a toilet, for a halo, for a helium balloon

Clamped my balls as Shaman cut
a hole into my stomach
dragged out the intestants which he
contemplated briefly
like tealeaves, like coffee
like paper in the wind

My breath expanding, wide eyed lease
a smell of bleech and icing, I screamed:
"Listen now, you brute, I need your
wisdom, your curriculum.
I need some drugs to hide inside
a pill-enthralled delirium".

"Coffeebeans and peppermints,
you're stitched up to the throat",
he said, "Polorised, deodorised
with stolen grievance in your coat".

"Besides", he said, "don't fool yourself,
we've all been set up, had our drink spiked
date-raped and bedazzled".

So this is how the day begins
how everything always begins and ends
with Crespeau lying - up, around
and through his teeth to me
and true love lives on lollipops and crisps
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Reply #71 posted 06/04/05 9:09am

ReturnOfDOOK

madartista said:

Ptownhood said:

Alice

You are amazing.....


Thanks.

But I asked u not to call me Alice on the Org!

lol
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Reply #72 posted 06/04/05 9:13am

CarrieMpls

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Ptownhood said:

Alice

You are amazing.....


omg

Alice is my mom. And yes, she is pretty amazing.

biggrin
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Reply #73 posted 06/04/05 9:14am

CynthiasSocks

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Feeling so sexy
New Versace sunglasses
Worth every penny
Socks still got butt like a leather seat...
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Reply #74 posted 06/04/05 9:15am

CarrieMpls

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CarrieMpls said:

For ab777


alright that's it.
change your avie.
now.
thanks.


smile


Yay! It worked! yay!
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Reply #75 posted 06/04/05 11:24am

Natsume

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Christopher said:

you have hair like screech
and you smell like peach
i want to take you to the beach
i try to climb your backfat but i dont reach

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[Edited 6/4/05 7:22am]

like, totally awesome dude!

horns
I mean, like, where is the sun?
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Reply #76 posted 06/04/05 11:35am

littlemissg

Longing
I don't think about it
It exist anyway
Feeling
many feelings
I'm aware
but not concerned
Longing often burns
that's why I cold.
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Reply #77 posted 06/08/05 2:25am

Natisse

tripping over myself...too late to turn
when will this sun ever cease to burn
flying high and flying low
too high to touch the sky
but too low to keep my feet on the earth below...

peace come cover my eyes dove
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Reply #78 posted 06/08/05 3:33am

Natisse

rollercoaster ride or rushing tide
any way the wind blows...

up...down...side to side
I can slow it yes I can

nod
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Reply #79 posted 06/08/05 5:20am

Fauxie

Ok, I'll write this on the spot. Forgive me if it's not so great. smile

Not kicked but heaped, the sand on my face,
With a fervour so unwitting as to be asburd.
You drank my tea and crashed at my place,
As I buried myself, not knowing she had heard,
Your name, your incriminating name,
As I mumbled in my slumber I dug my grave.
And so I awoke with no pangs of shame,
Not expecting inquisition,
Not prepared for blame,
But upon my second awakening I knew I was saved.

Optional coda:

AB's lips around my penis,
AB's lips around my penis.

...
[Edited 6/8/05 5:22am]
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Reply #80 posted 06/08/05 5:22am

jerseykrs

You's guys are so creative. I always feel so inferior. Honestly.
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Reply #81 posted 06/08/05 5:24am

AsianBomb777

Fauxie said:

Ok, I'll write this on the spot. Forgive me if it's not so great. smile

Not kicked but heaped, the sand on my face,
With a fervour so unwitting as to be asburd.
You drank my tea and crashed at my place,
As I buried myself, not knowing she had heard,
Your name, your incriminating name,
As I mumbled in my slumber I dug my grave.
And so I awoke with no pangs of shame,
Not expecting inquisition,
Not prepared for blame,
But upon my second awakening I knew I was saved.

Optional coda:

AB's lips around my penis,
AB's lips around my penis.

...
[Edited 6/8/05 5:22am]

falloff
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Reply #82 posted 06/08/05 5:38am

Fauxie

AsianBomb777 said:

Fauxie said:

Ok, I'll write this on the spot. Forgive me if it's not so great. smile

Not kicked but heaped, the sand on my face,
With a fervour so unwitting as to be asburd.
You drank my tea and crashed at my place,
As I buried myself, not knowing she had heard,
Your name, your incriminating name,
As I mumbled in my slumber I dug my grave.
And so I awoke with no pangs of shame,
Not expecting inquisition,
Not prepared for blame,
But upon my second awakening I knew I was saved.

Optional coda:

AB's lips around my penis,
AB's lips around my penis.

...
[Edited 6/8/05 5:22am]

falloff



u likey? smile
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Reply #83 posted 06/08/05 7:07am

Fauxie

Metaphors mask your overt moribundity,
Allusions allude to pretense not profundity,
Simile is showy like your turgid intentions.
Impenetrable imagery impairs your invention.
Your consonance creaks and your parody pales,
Wit woefully wants and foreshadowing fails,
Your lyrics let down and your irony errs,
Your free verse is flaccid, your machismo purrs.



But aside from that, your poems are really, really, really, good wink
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Reply #84 posted 06/08/05 6:49pm

Fauxie

I guess it wasn't in the spirit of this thread then. confused
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Reply #85 posted 06/08/05 7:45pm

littlemissg

I ain't no poet
Now you know it.
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Reply #86 posted 06/08/05 7:54pm

Fauxie

littlemissg said:

I ain't no poet
Now you know it.


But ur talent don't show it.
U got cover and I'll blow it.
U got grass? Then I'll mow it.
If you've a line then I'll tow it.
U like beards? Then I'll grow it.
U want a party? I'll throw it.
It's too fast? Then I'll slow it.
You've

Got

Skills

And

You

Know

It

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Reply #87 posted 06/08/05 8:19pm

Telecaster

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Stoopid cat
Him and his awful timing
I know it's spring
But please mind my needed eight hours
Stop wandering and come back
Where the sky goes on for miles/And never tires of an improbable blue
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Reply #88 posted 06/08/05 8:41pm

NoodleSoup

Telecaster said:

Stoopid cat
Him and his awful timing
I know it's spring
But please mind my needed eight hours
Stop wandering and come back



comfort

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
If I brought back your cat,
Would you give me your goo?
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Reply #89 posted 06/09/05 3:30am

Telecaster

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NoodleSoup said:

Telecaster said:

Stoopid cat
Him and his awful timing
I know it's spring
But please mind my needed eight hours
Stop wandering and come back



comfort

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
If I brought back your cat,
Would you give me your goo?


My goo is yours
No pussy needed
Where the sky goes on for miles/And never tires of an improbable blue
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