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Reply #30 posted 05/10/05 6:59pm

twistedlemon

LMAO @ asian too too funny

ur lips around my penis ur lips around my penis LOL i like ur writting its just ur so cute and funny
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Reply #31 posted 05/10/05 7:13pm

AsianBoi777

twistedlemon said:

LMAO @ asian too too funny

ur lips around my penis ur lips around my penis LOL i like ur writting its just ur so cute and funny



redface batting eyes
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Reply #32 posted 05/10/05 7:16pm

twistedlemon

AsianBoi777 said:

twistedlemon said:

LMAO @ asian too too funny

ur lips around my penis ur lips around my penis LOL i like ur writting its just ur so cute and funny



redface batting eyes





LOL
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Reply #33 posted 05/10/05 7:17pm

SammiJ

AsianBoi777 said:

SammiJ said:

these are good...im sensing a trend but i dont know what it is...

...i also have the strongest urge 2 wrap my lips around a penis... whofarted

(no ab, not yours i am sorry.)



I don't have a clue what you're getting at. confuse

Are you legal?

neutral no!
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Reply #34 posted 05/10/05 7:27pm

AsianBoi777

SammiJ said:

AsianBoi777 said:




I don't have a clue what you're getting at. confuse

Are you legal?

neutral no!


I've poured my heart and soul into those lovely poems.
Don't I at least get a hug?
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Reply #35 posted 05/10/05 7:29pm

SammiJ

AsianBoi777 said:

SammiJ said:


neutral no!


I've poured my heart and soul into those lovely poems.
Don't I at least get a hug?

well....

pat how's that?
mr.green
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Reply #36 posted 05/10/05 7:37pm

AsianBoi777

SammiJ said:

AsianBoi777 said:



I've poured my heart and soul into those lovely poems.
Don't I at least get a hug?

well....

pat how's that?
mr.green


smile
Since we got to first base, can we have sex now? smile
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Reply #37 posted 05/10/05 7:40pm

SammiJ

AsianBoi777 said:

SammiJ said:


well....

pat how's that?
mr.green


smile
Since we got to first base, can we have sex now? smile

omg


first base?!
WTF MATE?!
brick i'm taken! giggle
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Reply #38 posted 05/10/05 7:56pm

AsianBoi777

SammiJ said:

AsianBoi777 said:



smile
Since we got to first base, can we have sex now? smile

omg


first base?!
WTF MATE?!
brick i'm taken! giggle

I don't get it. What did you assume my intentions were when I asked for a hug? confuse
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Reply #39 posted 05/10/05 8:13pm

SammiJ

AsianBoi777 said:

SammiJ said:


omg


first base?!
WTF MATE?!
brick i'm taken! giggle

I don't get it. What did you assume my intentions were when I asked for a hug? confuse

disbelief so sad.
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Reply #40 posted 05/10/05 8:19pm

donk

SammiJ said:

AsianBoi777 said:


I don't get it. What did you assume my intentions were when I asked for a hug? confuse

disbelief so sad.


You don't like my line of questioning. shrug
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Reply #41 posted 05/11/05 12:08am

TMPletz

Dreams
Copyright © 1999 T.M.Pletz

Last night I had a dream
That u and I were swept away
In a night of ecstacy and passion
Or was I really awake?
A gentle kiss upon those lips
of red and glistening of wet
Oh, as they touched mine
A dream every now and then
Becomes reality from time 2 time

* In my dreams of u and I
U r a part of me
I could dream forever of u
A dream of reality
A dream of reality

This morning I had a dream
That I woke up and u were there
A vision of beauty still asleep
So I only played with your hair
And when u awoke
And opened those eyes 2 me
Oh, those beautiful eyes
A smile came across your face
And it made me want 2 cry *

One day I met someone
She had a smile like yours
She said she could see though me
And my heart was like an open door
She saw all my wants and needs
And saw the love I felt
The love I felt 4 u
But the time just wasn't right
Even though she knew the truth *
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Reply #42 posted 05/11/05 12:12am

TMPletz

The Last Song
Copyright © 2000 T.M.Pletz

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

When inspiration's been reduced 2 heartache
And tears r all I see
This is the last song
The last song 2 come from me

This song is 1 no 1 will ever hear
As r all the other songs I've ever done
Lest if I ever heard them I'd shed so many tears
That's why they've been reduced 2 none

The songs have been contradicting
In what u've meant 2 me
But this is the last song
The last song about u and me

When spirits were drawn 2gether as 1
The words came so freely
But now that the light has left the sun
No words will ever come 2 me

Here where paper and pen collide
Is the last song 2 come from inside

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

Last song
Last song
Finality


sigh
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Reply #43 posted 05/11/05 1:09am

HowComeYouDont
Callme

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TMPletz said:

The Last Song
Copyright © 2000 T.M.Pletz

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

When inspiration's been reduced 2 heartache
And tears r all I see
This is the last song
The last song 2 come from me

This song is 1 no 1 will ever hear
As r all the other songs I've ever done
Lest if I ever heard them I'd shed so many tears
That's why they've been reduced 2 none

The songs have been contradicting
In what u've meant 2 me
But this is the last song
The last song about u and me

When spirits were drawn 2gether as 1
The words came so freely
But now that the light has left the sun
No words will ever come 2 me

Here where paper and pen collide
Is the last song 2 come from inside

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

This is the last song
The 1 and only
This is the last song
Writing in its finality

Last song
Last song
Finality


sigh


comfort There's still your orgvalentine wink
The Borg... Partypoopers of the galaxy.. ( Medical Hologram )
-------------------------------------------------

..Where is my lovelife.. where can it be?? There must be something wrong with the machinery..
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Reply #44 posted 05/11/05 7:46am

BobGeorge909

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SammiJ said:

ok...i have another one
this was written in a class that specialized in poetry...and what the teacher did was have us talk about an experience that might've happened a while ago, and kinda exaggerate it...so i took my trip 2 cuba:

Latino

white beaches - sunsets in rainbows
i sit, with my blue lagoon
and my latino friend
te amos latino...
did i say that right? no, but
we giggle under the moonlight
take me away my friend
let us dance our night away
merengue, salsa - tango
let's do it all
let our rhythms become one
hear our hearts beat 2gether
the beat...the beat...
drums, guitar...
i'm off - away 2 cuba
jesùs, will i see u again?
of course i will
2 dance again
under carribbean skies
i don't want 2 leave - but i'll shed no tears
i'll return 2 my latin man
one day, but 4 now
i will dance in my dreams
with the tall man with the smooth dark skin
that will guide my hips and stare
deep in2 my eyes, he really loves me
i belong here, where the sands are white
and the days are long...
take me away - keep me away...


damn i wrote that @ 17 omg



Other than the latino man that is mentioned brick ....That sounded DELICIOUS! omg

mushyhughornyoralkissespathug
[Edited 5/11/05 7:49am]
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Reply #45 posted 05/11/05 7:50am

BobGeorge909

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A Piece of Straw


I want to elaborate on my self
take all the dusty information
I keep hidden on the shelf
down and share it with you


It would be so wonderful
to let you know what makes me tock
I’d throw it everywhere
enough to make you wear a smock

To protect you from all the nasty kink
And stories of lust filled & unfulfilled
Protect you from not all,
Just some of the ugmo thoughts I think

I’m greedy with it and hide it away
Camouflaged deep inside a pile of hay
Little straws of stories usually hidden
Cuz I don’t know what game people wanna play


But I wont cuz at this point it’s stale
Staler than a stale ale and nobody wants a sip.

Is there anything you can do to a stale ale
To save the bartendress from a bad tip



Go ahead and throw bricks at me for how terrible it is. I'll dodge 'em.
[Edited 5/11/05 7:52am]
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Reply #46 posted 05/11/05 10:30am

TMPletz

HowComeYouDontCallme said:

comfort There's still your orgvalentine wink

hug Thank you biggrin
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Reply #47 posted 05/11/05 2:11pm

SammiJ

BobGeorge909 said:

A Piece of Straw


I want to elaborate on my self
take all the dusty information
I keep hidden on the shelf
down and share it with you


It would be so wonderful
to let you know what makes me tock
I’d throw it everywhere
enough to make you wear a smock

To protect you from all the nasty kink
And stories of lust filled & unfulfilled
Protect you from not all,
Just some of the ugmo thoughts I think

I’m greedy with it and hide it away
Camouflaged deep inside a pile of hay
Little straws of stories usually hidden
Cuz I don’t know what game people wanna play


But I wont cuz at this point it’s stale
Staler than a stale ale and nobody wants a sip.

Is there anything you can do to a stale ale
To save the bartendress from a bad tip



Go ahead and throw bricks at me for how terrible it is. I'll dodge 'em.
[Edited 5/11/05 7:52am]


giggle i remember this one
me likes me likes nod kisses
got any more gems you'd like 2 share wif me?
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Reply #48 posted 05/11/05 2:14pm

Spookymuffin

I can't find my 400 word sonnet bawl
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Reply #49 posted 05/11/05 2:36pm

HowComeYouDont
Callme

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TMPletz said:

HowComeYouDontCallme said:

comfort There's still your orgvalentine wink

hug Thank you biggrin

You're very welcome my dear!! heart wink
The Borg... Partypoopers of the galaxy.. ( Medical Hologram )
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..Where is my lovelife.. where can it be?? There must be something wrong with the machinery..
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Reply #50 posted 05/11/05 3:15pm

SammiJ

i'm a very sparatic person...and my thoughts are very...different if u will...
and i managed 2 turn some of my thoughts in2 this poem... (i'm not crazy i promise)

PICTURES

when did that happen? what?
that - those changes...
i don't recognize myself anymore
there must be some sort of mistake...
those eyes, they look @ me in the strangest of ways...
sad eyes - eyes that have been 2 hell and back
they don't look like they used 2
was life really that bad?
years of tears - many
hurt beyond count
am i beautiful?
"aww! you're so cute!" shut up!
puppies are cute - am i a puppy?
i always thought i was ok...
...guess not huh?
my god those eyes
i smile but they still look so sad..
stop looking @ me with those sad eyes...
don't want 2 remember
the hurt - the pain
years of canned heat
only shown in pictures
look in2 the mirror - i don't see those eyes...
the cruel games of the unconscious mind...



that's the poem that's written over this picture.
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Reply #51 posted 05/11/05 3:20pm

SammiJ

My ♥affair with poetry

as i sit in
the dark corner of my room
debating...
my purpose in life
candle light is the
only thing 2 light
my way, on this
journey of...
Life.
i sit back 2 think
as i let this pen and
paper make ♥
2 my open mind
feels so good
an orgasm of thoughts (feelings...)
cast on2 paper
4 all 2 see (in all glory...)
finally
i've experienced
You...
when i thought
my life was incomplete
there you were
i ♥ you
now, right now
finally
i've experienced
The Romance of
Poetry - a ♥affair with you...
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