I will start the first line, the next orger the following line etc..


(be it limerick form, ode, ballad, sonnet,rhyme etc.. ) the more fun, and or rhyming the better!

The person to end the poem must start the first line of a new one.


There once was an Orger called Sag..
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whom on a friday, went clubbing in drag

...

Who used to cruise the streets in his Jag.....

effs said:

One at a time boys..

IstenSzek said:

he entered the club and felt up an old hag

IstenSzek said:

She bumped into Supa...

REDFEATHERS said:

who was having a poopa

CrystalTits said:

and said "I could do with a troopa"

I've run out of shadow-acounts now

IstenSzek said:

REDFEATHERS said:

ah come here

..and lets drink a beer...

and after that, you can drive my car
I will let you steer
as I stick my rear
out the window and cheer
at a passing dear
old lady who'll fear
she'll catch a bug from me, big queer

This is rhyming, not poetry!

HamsterHuey said:

and? Read the thread!

REDFEATHERS said:

I did! LoL

It's still not poetry!

This is poetry;

Underneath This Winter Coat

Snow dwindles down
Grey becomes white
White becomes pulp
Underneath car's tires

You're not around
It don't feel right
Right don't exist no more
And the snow leaves me wired

It's cold
Underneath this winter coat

I turn the page
But don’t close the book
You’re still right here
On the coffee table

There’s no longer a cage
It’s how I mistook
Need for love
Just another fable

It's cold
Underneath this winter coat

Sun down, moon up
I am drifting
Further away from you
But I am not lost

My heartbeat throbs
Heavy mood is lifting
I've been expecting this
My plans are not crossed

It's getting warmer
Underneath this winter coat

Let children play freely
And adults plough to work
Spring will come
This business done

Then off comes the coat
Sun on my skin again
And I’ll be free again
And winter gone

HamsterHuey said:

Thats boring as fuck,.. and killing my thread..

REDFEATHERS said:

damn you're tough.

REDFEATHERS said:

Yeah, liking it probably needs sophistication and some emotion...

And don't ask for poetry if sleazy limericks is what you want.

I made my point.

HamsterHuey said:

But you didnt SHARE.. and you can only have one line at a time..

REDFEATHERS said:

I think not updating your thread title will create confusion
Maybe you need to start over. I bored all over this one now anyways.

REDFEATHERS said:

there, that's sharing for ya

HamsterHuey said:

You really are a grumpy bum arent you???

There once was a shoedesigner in China....

HamsterHuey said:

Who had an extremely cute vagina..

Hammy is playing now!!

REDFEATHERS said:

She gave it a name, named it Bess

REDFEATHERS said:

now go and delete that other thread

she was good a checkers and yet, better at chess
where she secretly hoarded the pawns, god bless

HamsterHuey said:

Was horny and got in a mess...